Penname: Dash Nolan [Contact]

Real name: Dash Nolan

Member Since: 10/02/09

Membership status: Member

Bio: Dug up an old Pretender crossover fic that was fairly popular in its hayday, decided to revive it. brb, getting sucked back in fanfics

Affiliation: Pretender

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Summary: An irritable Miss Parker has to spend Valentine's Day in Las Vegas, chasing for Jarod but he wouldn't be the Pretender if he didn't have surprises in store for her...

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Broots, Jarod, Miss Parker, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Comedy, Romance
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 5420
Read Count: 2816
[Report This] Published: 12/02/09 Updated: 12/02/09


Title: Chapter 1: Story

I'm going to be honest: you know these characters very well. Most fics involve an author dragging a character into becoming one of the few stereotypes of people they know, but you have a firm grasp on these chracters emotions and motivations.

Now you just need to touch up your delivery. When you say something is wonderful in the narrative, it makes it sound like the story's being told by a character in it. If you can tighten up your grammar and narrative, I'll be looking forward to your future stories.

Reviewer: Dash Nolan Signed starstarstar
Date: 13/02/09