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To whom shall I ship them?



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Summary:

Version One of the Madeline Series.  Madeline has something cooking.  The first two chapters under "Madeline Series" go with both versions, then it splits up into the two versions.  "Cooking with Madeline" follows the series.

Part 4B is back in the works- Miss Parker needs to have a little fun and Madeline is determined to make sure she does! :)



Categories: Indefinite Timeline, Season 1, Season 2, Season 3, Season 4
Characters: Angelo, Brigitte, Broots, Debbie, Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker, Mr Parker, Original Character, Sydney, Thomas
Classifications: Genres: Drama
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 11415
Read Count: 10974
[Report This] Published: 11/05/05 Updated: 23/04/10


Title: Chapter 2: Surprises Around Every Corner (Version 1: Part 4)

Bravo!! Danielle :-)  You've created such a huge Madeline fan...me!! I love the character interactions & reactions, the dialogue, the rabbit (yes the rabbit) all of it and I'm already looking forward to the next update. (which I hope you are ready to post tonight.)



Author's Response: Thank you so much.  =)  I originally planned on moving next to chapter 7, more season 3/Thomas stuff, but after hearing some feedback from my great betas about "Surprises Around Every Corner", I think season 2 stuff hasn't been fully explored yet.  So it'll be another mid-chapter coming next!  Stay tuned for some more fun Lyle stuff.  ;)  And yes, Bunny will make an appearance again, too.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24/04/10
Summary: Version Two of the Madeline Series- please read the story called Madeline Series first so this'll make sense.   What would Madeline do if Miss Parker didn't survive the gunshot wound she received in the third season finale?  Updated 2/27/10 because I realized that most of chapter 4 didn't make it over in the original transfer years ago.  Sorry!

Categories: Season 3
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Original Character, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Drama
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 20690
Read Count: 33025
[Report This] Published: 11/05/05 Updated: 27/02/10


Title: Chapter 1: Loyalties

"My Angel is dying." - *weeps* Brilliant! *crosses fingers that you don't kill Parker off*

Author's Response: Thanks again, Mirage.  =)

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/03/10
Title: Chapter 2: Echoes

*SOBS INTO WINE GLASS* Okay, even though I am absolutely sickened by the thought of anything horrible befalling Parker, Broots, Sydney and Angelo, I have to say that her exit was very well written, just amazing. And it's so like our dear Parker to only reveal her feelings for poor Jarod when she's knock-knock- knocking on heaven's door. But at least she doesn't have to sleep with him now so hey, there is that. :-) Incredible chapter. Can't wait to see how it ends. And fortunately, I don't have to!

Author's Response: Haha, I look forward to hearing your thoughts on "The End of an Era".  =)

Reviewer: Mirage Signed
Date: 06/03/10
Title: Chapter 4: The End of an Era

Ahhh, yes, yes yes! I love that twist...so much! It's difficult for me to read a fic without Parker in it so of course, you made my day..night..uh it's morning actually, doesn't matter, I'm pleased! And what a sweet ending...*sighs* Wonderfully written, thanks for sharing.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much, yet again.  =)  You've made my night!

I just noticed a little of the "A New Beginning" chapter got cut off, so I fixed that up... Sydney bringing Madeline up to college, and college girls swooning whenever they meet Jarod.  ;)

Reviewer: Mirage Signed
Date: 06/03/10
Summary: Response to the weekly challenge. Create a story using the instructions for the bath blasters.

Categories: Plot? What Plot?
Characters: Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: Romance
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 441
Read Count: 2986
[Report This] Published: 11/05/05 Updated: 11/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: -

Aw, that was cute.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed
Date: 10/11/10
Broken Hearts by Chris
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Telling would spoil!

Categories: Anything/Miscellaneous
Characters: Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Challenges: Drabble #04 Anything

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 118
Read Count: 2416
[Report This] Published: 11/05/05 Updated: 11/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: -

Ahhh..so nice. You're supposed to be still when you're faced with a gun and the underlying threat behind the words "don't move" but wonder boy never learned that helpful piece of advice. I love this, so much emotion packed into so few words.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/05/10
Summary: A crazy caper about two fans that go a little over the edge with their love of the Pretender. Co-written by jaccione and Trek Princess.

Categories: Spoofs / Parodies
Characters: Original Character
Classifications: Genres: Comedy
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 7751
Read Count: 8818
[Report This] Published: 11/05/05 Updated: 23/10/06


Title: Chapter 4: What Plans Are Made

Oh..hahaha, this is too funny!  "make it a nasty role...he hates the good ones"- hahaha.

Where is the rest of this? And just what in the hell are you girls going to do when you catch poor Michael? *evil laugh* Stealing Weiss. Truly inspired! This is definitely a new favorite!

Must be terrifying to be an actor these days...

*snickers*

 

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23/07/10
Summary: Someone at the Centre is not who he pretends to be and when Jarod is accused of murder and Miss Parker is kidnapped, he risks discovery to save them.

Categories: Season 4
Characters: Broots, Jarod, Miss Parker, Other Centre Character
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 51555
Read Count: 13468
[Report This] Published: 11/05/05 Updated: 11/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Part 1

Oh, wow, I love that Broots is FBI, haha, I love Brootsie. That is so perfect!

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/06/11
Title: Chapter 2: Part 2

I love that Lyle sorta did the right thing, haha. I, too, am guilty of attempting to redeem our evil, evil Lyle. This is a bit sappy in places, but I know all about sap. It is what it is: fanfic. And you do it well. Great story!

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/06/11
Title: Chapter 3: Part 3

Aww, so sweet.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed
Date: 07/06/11
Title: Chapter 4: Epilogue

Broots and Em, Parker and Jarod, wow, happy endings all around. Great job!

Reviewer: Mirage Signed
Date: 07/06/11
Summary: Sometimes the best gift you can receive is the one you never thought you wanted.

Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 6603
Read Count: 3542
[Report This] Published: 12/05/05 Updated: 12/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: The Christmas Wish

Nice one. "the ice queen began to melt" and in winter...

now that's no small feat. The story was great though, admittedly, I'm not P/J shipper. Be that as it may, you wrote him very well and dare I say it, likeable. Great piece and a definite must-read this winter!  

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/11/10
Summary: Sometimes the truth is right in front of you, the hard part is seeing it and knowing when to let go.

Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Zoe
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1946
Read Count: 3026
[Report This] Published: 12/05/05 Updated: 12/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Some Dreams Fall Through

Very nice! I love the way you explored Jarod's thoughtless and -dare I say it-  selfish entanglements. I really felt for poor Zoe, despite her bounciness- which is almost as annoying as Jarod's childishness.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31/07/09
Summary: Written in response to Mickey's letter challenge. Miss Parker finally figures it out :o)

Categories: Season 4
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 9446
Read Count: 31410
[Report This] Published: 12/05/05 Updated: 12/05/05


Title: Chapter 3: Part 3

Haha, "Uh, I guess...damn, this was easier when you weren't looking at me!"

Love it.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/05/11
Title: Chapter 4: Part 4

Oh my God. Lyle is so evil. Gorgeous as hell but oh so evil.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/05/11
Title: Chapter 6: Part 6

Nothing is ever easy for those two. Thanks for keepin' it real.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/05/11
Title: Chapter 7: Part 7

And you managed to pull off a perfect ending. Awesome!

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/05/11
Summary: What happens when you do the unforgivable? R&R pretty please.

Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Suspence/Mystery
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1862
Read Count: 3740
[Report This] Published: 12/05/05 Updated: 12/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: All the Wrong Reasons

You nailed them. Again. Wonderful job.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/04/11
Car wash by Chris
Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Response to the weekly challenge: Use the words car wash in a story.

Categories: Plot? What Plot?
Characters: Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: Vignette
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 319
Read Count: 2209
[Report This] Published: 12/05/05 Updated: 12/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: -

Haha, nice. Now, a car wash is more like it. Darn shame that Jarod never had a "dirty" job.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/01/11
Summary: Someone's playing matchmaker.... Please R&R

Categories: Post Season 4
Characters: Ethan, Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Comedy, Romance
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1332
Read Count: 3553
[Report This] Published: 12/05/05 Updated: 12/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Inner (Non)Sense

Aw, too cute and you write them so well.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/04/11
Summary: Companion piece to 'Sacrifice.' Parker's POV

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Character Musing, Romance
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1206
Read Count: 2962
[Report This] Published: 12/05/05 Updated: 12/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: A Lonely Heart

Incredible! And cursing cupid? Wonderful. "Thanks a lot asshole."

Parker always so torn. And Jarod, always watching from afar. Nice.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/06/09
Adieu by Melanie Anne
Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary: There was nothing Jarod hated more than seeing Parker in pain.

Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Lyle, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Romance, Vignette
Warnings: Warning: Character Death

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1373
Read Count: 3324
[Report This] Published: 12/05/05 Updated: 12/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Adieu

At last. Franken-boy bites it. Haha. Well, it was fantastic, of course and it was very Jarod-esque when he attempted to help Parker when, in actuality, Jarod was very dead. Even in death, he's a do-gooder, haha. You killed him brilliantly.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/05/11
Summary: Maybe this is freedom. [Drabble.]

Categories: Storms
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: Drabble #26 Storms

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 125
Read Count: 2175
[Report This] Published: 12/05/05 Updated: 12/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: And The Rain Keeps Falling

Again, great job! "but not her heart, never her heart" Perfect!

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/11/10
Summary: The first in a series of vignettes. Miss Parker's life through her father's eyes.

Categories: Prequel
Characters: Mr Parker
Classifications: Genres: General, Vignette
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 631
Read Count: 2447
[Report This] Published: 12/05/05 Updated: 12/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Daddy's Girl

Aww, it is horrible when good men are corrupted - either by fear or power or both. This was wonderful.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/05/11
Summary: Companion piece to 'Sacrifice' and 'A Lonely Heart.' Jarod's POV.

Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Jarod
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Character Musing, Romance
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1098
Read Count: 11822
[Report This] Published: 12/05/05 Updated: 12/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: A Moment of Weakness

Oh, I love it. I'm going to check out all of your fics right now.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/04/11