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To whom shall I ship them?



Affiliation: Centre

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Reviews by Mirage


Summary: She died a long time ago.

Categories: Song Titles
Characters: Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Challenges: Drabble #02 Song Titles

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 119
Read Count: 1167
[Report This] Published: 19/04/05 Updated: 19/04/05


Title: Chapter 1: Smoke In Her Eyes.

Perfection. I absobuletly LOVE this! You flawlessly summarized a tale that spanned decades.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/06/10
So Hard To Catch by Eveylin
Rated: PG starstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: "Sorry, but I'm never going back there..."

Categories: Alternate Universe
Characters: Brigitte, Jarod
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None
Challenges: Drabble #24 Alternate Universe

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 105
Read Count: 803
[Report This] Published: 19/04/05 Updated: 19/04/05


Title: Chapter 1: So Hard To Catch.

Ah yes, this is what could have happened if Brigitte had been succesful. Very dark. Lovely.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/04/11
Retired
Eleventh Hour by Eveylin
Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 19]
Summary: Jarod will take down The Centre, one way or another.

Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Drama
Warnings: Warning: Slash, Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1097
Read Count: 1748
[Report This] Published: 19/04/05 Updated: 19/04/05


Title: Chapter 1: Eleventh Hour

This is one moment (okay, one of many) where words just can not do justice. I love the raw emotion in Parker's questions, the self sacrifice on Jarod's part, and the final line simply ties together a beautiful and yet twisted (but what else could we expect from the Centre?) tale. Thanks for sharing! And thanks to Mistress Jacci (haha, I said I would) for pointing out this fic.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/10/11
Summary: When it was all said and done, who said I wanted to stay with you?

Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 4496
Read Count: 3139
[Report This] Published: 19/04/05 Updated: 19/04/05


Title: Chapter 1: The World Is Changing

I clicked on the "random story" on the front page and I'm thrilled that I did.

You describe Parker- oops - Melanie and Jarod as having this perfect little life, cozy and safe and yet, that perfect white picket fence is a prison of sorts. And yet, she tries, I get the vibe that she's trying to be the woman he wants. Jarod, of course, the Great Fixer of all Problems doesn't realize that some things are beyond repair and some people don't want to be saved.

One, I applaud you for stepping outside the box and painting an imperfect picture of their life and two, I can't wait to read the rest!

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/06/11
Title: Chapter 2: Bloodlines

Amazing. This story sorta has a gray feel about it, as a fog has settled over the dysfunctional duo and refuses to life. The booze and then pills- which Jarod points out she should take with water. 

I quite like that Jarod is questioning his motives. He's loves her, she's cared for and not in prison but I'm not so sure that she's happy but I imagine that he feels he's within his rights just the same.

I love this story.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/06/11
Title: Chapter 3: 'till Death Do Us Part

Ah, lovely line: "She knows she has no excuse not to feel as complete as the picture" and oh, Jarod, Jarod. He keeps trying, wants to really make it work.

Hmm, the gun. I have a bad feeling about that but with the appearance of Lyle and Tanaka, perhaps the gun will be useful in coming chapters and - speaking of coming chapters-- where is the rest?

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/06/11
Summary: none

Categories: Poetry
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 190
Read Count: 1393
[Report This] Published: 22/04/05 Updated: 22/04/05


Title: Chapter 1: ch 1

Great job! That was very well written.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed
Date: 10/11/10
Fidus Achates by DOTLP
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Suddenly, all the events that happened during the last twenty-four hours rushed into the Pretender's mind. He abruptly stood up and rushed to grasp his mentor's hand and began shaking it. "Thank you Sydney for saving me from going back to that hell hole."

Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Zoe
Classifications: Genres: Comedy
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2810
Read Count: 1636
[Report This] Published: 23/04/05 Updated: 23/04/05


Title: Chapter 1: Fidus Achates

Zoe, Zoe, Zoe, wow, I hate her in this fic. Great job!

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/01/11
Hello? by Ambrosia
Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Miss P gets a phone call from Jarod after the T-board interrogation in Amnesia (unforgotten).

Categories: Season 2
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1135
Read Count: 1534
[Report This] Published: 23/04/05 Updated: 23/04/05


Title: Chapter 1: Hello?

Good job! This was very well written and so cute. Your story was not horrendous, it was great.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26/01/10
The Call by icd
Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary: It's about trust, betrayal and the struggle to maintain a friendship.

Categories: Post Season 4
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Comedy
Warnings: None

Series: The Call Series
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 17527
Read Count: 6352
[Report This] Published: 23/04/05 Updated: 23/04/05


Title: Chapter 1: The Call

LOVE IT! Pay back is a bitch! I can't tell you how nice it is to see the pain in the arse get his for a change. Awesome.

Author's Response: *smirks* yeah, quite a change, isn't it?

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/01/11
Title: Chapter 2: Disturbing the night

Yay! The "tormenting" continues.

Author's Response: indeed it does

Reviewer: Mirage Signed
Date: 07/01/11
Reverie by Eveylin
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary: This is a nightmare...

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Catherine Parker, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Drama
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 586
Read Count: 751
[Report This] Published: 24/04/05 Updated: 24/04/05


Title: Chapter 1: Reverie.

Love it! I have wondered the same things about Catherine. Why in the hell fake her death right there for her to daughter to witness?

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/04/11
Summary: How can you save someone who doesn't want to be saved?

Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 10316
Read Count: 14476
[Report This] Published: 24/04/05 Updated: 21/03/10


Title: Chapter 8: Choices Made

I am so delighted that you finally gave us the final piece of this timeless story. I've been looking forward to reading the ending for quite some time and now I can with certaintly that I've enjoyed your story from start to wonderful finish. I hope to read more from you.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/03/10
Hours at End by AngelWings
Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Raines takes over *his* Pretender

Categories: Season 4
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Mr Raines
Classifications: Genres: General, Romance
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 8180
Read Count: 1522
[Report This] Published: 25/04/05 Updated: 25/04/05


Title: Chapter 1: Hours at End

Great job. The characters were very much in character and Parker as stubborn as ever. Incredible rescue. Very well written.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/11/10
Summary: A three-part series of vignettes where characters from the Centre meet up with completely ordinary people. The first one is the best.

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Miss Parker, Other Non-Centre Related Character
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3156
Read Count: 2315
[Report This] Published: 25/04/05 Updated: 07/06/05


Title: Chapter 1: Miss Parker

No harsh judgments here, Spectra. You did an excellent job with this. It's very well written, very lovely and conscise. I can't wait to read the next bit.

Author's Response: Thank you for all your reviews! You really brightened my day.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/04/11
Title: Chapter 2: Jarod

Splendid! This could easily be a scene from the actual show and that last bit:"Don't worry, we'll get your kids back."- Gave me chills. Very touching and that is such a Jarod sort of thing to say.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/04/11
Title: Chapter 3: Broots, Lyle, Miss Parker

Haha, now that- oh, my- that was brilliant. Hilarious. I could imagine the entire scene as if I was there with them. You have a firm grasp of the characters, of the show and you write extremely well- so well in fact, that I'm going to search around to see if you wrote anything else.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/04/11
Breathing by Chris
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Miss Parker comes home and gets lost in her thoughts about the sense of her life.

Categories: Character Musing
Characters: Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Vignette
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 735
Read Count: 1561
[Report This] Published: 26/04/05 Updated: 26/04/05


Title: Chapter 1: -

I know she's sometimes portrayed as "the all powerful, heartless ice queen" but she hurts like everyone else and like anyone else, she can be pushed right over the edge. I lvoe that Sydney was there for her. Sweet but not gooey. Good job!

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/11/10
Summary: Miss Parker gets a poem from Jarod

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: Drama
Warnings: Warning: Character Death

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1645
Read Count: 891
[Report This] Published: 26/04/05 Updated: 26/04/05


Title: Chapter 1: -

Wow! Well written and tragic but powerful. And True.

How about a part two where Jarod beats Lyle to death for this? After he saves Parker's life, of course. ;-)

 

 

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15/05/09
You by Chris
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Parker gets lost in her thoughts and loses something precious...

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Drama
Warnings: Warning: Character Death

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1653
Read Count: 1159
[Report This] Published: 26/04/05 Updated: 26/04/05


Title: Chapter 1: -

Oh no! That was incredibly tragic but well written and that song...I still listen to it every once and a while.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/06/09
Retired
The Last Notebook by Phenyx
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 6]
Summary: This story contains a major character death. I am going to rip out your heart and stomp on it. If I dont make you cry, I have failed. If you dont enjoy a good cry now and then- read no further.



Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: Warning: Character Death

Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 13599
Read Count: 13315
[Report This] Published: 29/04/05 Updated: 29/04/05


Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Very tragic but so very beautiful and perfectly written. It's so like not to realize until it's too late...and so sad!

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24/06/09
Whispers by Eveylin
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Jarod will cause problems, even after his death.

Categories: Character Musing
Characters: Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Drama, Tragedy
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1061
Read Count: 1239
[Report This] Published: 30/04/05 Updated: 30/04/05


Title: Chapter 1: Whispers

Oh my...wow. I so like this excellent piece! And of course the rumour mill that is the Centre will churn out lie after lie...all but one lie, eh? Very nice!

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/06/09
Summary: You don't know what you've got until it's gone.




Categories: Post Season 4
Characters: Lyle, Miss Parker, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Vignette
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2361
Read Count: 1149
[Report This] Published: 30/04/05 Updated: 30/04/05


Title: Chapter 1: For Granted

Ooh, I really like this, love the supportive/father figure that Sydney is and the way Lyle stepped in. Great job.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/05/10
Summary: It's too short to summarise



Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: Vignette
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 611
Read Count: 767
[Report This] Published: 30/04/05 Updated: 30/04/05


Title: Chapter 1: In My Dreams

Oh wow, great job Felicity. Yeah, this could be Syd/J or Parker/Syd, even a few other pairings come to mind. I love it, love the emotions you conveyed, the simply waiting, waiting and watching as a loved one drifts to death and whatever awaits us there...so very nicely written. A definite 10!

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/05/10
Summary: Miss Parker's point of view



Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Miss Parker, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Vignette
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1676
Read Count: 1096
[Report This] Published: 30/04/05 Updated: 30/04/05


Title: Chapter 1: Reflections

Amazing. I simply love the interaction, subtlety, the nonverbal communication between Parker and Sydney.  Magnificent piece here, a must-read and a definite ten.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/11/10