Penname: Tinanaz [Contact]

Real name: Tina Nazarian

Member Since: 03/04/07

Membership status: Member

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Beta-reader: Yes
Affiliation: Pretender

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A test story by jacs
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 151]
Summary: jsut testing to see if it works...

Categories: Poetry
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 364
Read Count: 177965
[Report This] Published: 19/01/07 Updated: 03/07/08


Title: Chapter 23: Gone too long

Welcome Back, Mighty E-Dict.  I don't think the feed is fixed because this story didn't pop up on the feed when I looked this morning.  Sorry.   But now for the really important question: have you found Jarod and brought him back for all of us to play with?

Author's Response: If there is to be any playing with Jarod, I get first dibs on that. Hmm on the feed, did you press the orange RSS button, or the orange XML button down the bottom of the front page?

It seems to be working for me, i have had feeds on both new chapters. It might be that you need to delete your old feed and add it again. Try using the XML instead of the rss and see if that is any better.

Reviewer: Tinanaz Signed
Date: 16/01/08
Title: Chapter 25: Retraction of C...url

Broots is cowering under Sydney's desk in the hopes that no one will find him.  Of course, the trail of Funyun crumbs is a give away, but its the best he could do.

Reviewer: Tinanaz Signed
Date: 26/02/08
Title: Chapter 26: Unretract Curl curl should now work

jacci, you are becoming our very own Brootsie.  *claps hands for the E-Dict*

Reviewer: Tinanaz Signed
Date: 07/04/08
Summary:

 Jarod's a prisoner of The Triumvirate. This is the sequel to Conflict Zero.



Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Broots, Jarod, Jarod's Family, Lyle, Miss Parker, Mr Raines, Original Character, Other Centre Character, Sam, Sydney, The Clone
Classifications: Genres: Drama
Warnings: Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 68396
Read Count: 85155
[Report This] Published: 24/01/07 Updated: 16/09/08


Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12 - A Deal with the Devil

Great chapter, almost worth the wait.  The story keeps getting better and better.  And to quote someone else: more please. 

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed Tina!! I have to make up for the fact Jarod keeps getting away in Nothing Means Something in this one ;).. but thanks for the review and hopefully le muse will cooperate better this time around..

Reviewer: Tinanaz Signed
Date: 30/07/07
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13 - Transitions

Great Chapter, Katie.  Love how Lys is now the strong one and Jarod is the one needed help.  My favorite line is when Lys tells the guard to get "nice and intimate with the floor.".  It show the power she was commanding at that moment, without making her a b*^%h or an ice queen.  So the important question is how much is the thesis gonna interfer with the next chapter?

Author's Response: I'm glad you have your priorities straight re: my thesis versus the next chapter ;). But thanks for the feedback, I'm glad that you enjoyed and still could remember the plot line.

Reviewer: Tinanaz Signed
Date: 15/02/08
Surrender by KatieQ
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 34]
Summary:

Jarod is captured and returned to the Centre. Part of the Guess Who/Guess What Challenge



Categories: Challenges
Characters: None
Classifications: Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 31918
Read Count: 30568
[Report This] Published: 26/01/07 Updated: 07/08/07


Title: Chapter 7: Recovery

Great story, but I can't figure out the two speakers at the start of the chapters.  Sometimes I think Parker and Gemini and other times I think Gemini and Ethan.  Not nice to torment a N.A. buddy this way.

Author's Response: ooh but a little torment is fun.. read the conversation. there is a BIG clue in it.. i promise :P

Reviewer: Tinanaz Signed
Date: 31/05/07
Title: Chapter 8: Pawns

Best chapter yet, Katie.    Love all the twists and turns.   Was sure that it was MP and Jarod talking, now am thinking Zoe and J.  Or maybe Emily (preferably) and the Major is the one sick.  Aaahhh, the torture of the wait...how long until the next chap?

Author's Response:

how long until the next chapter.. what an excellent question...

soon i hope .. soon :)

and i shall reveal nothing! Thanks for R&R, it's always very appreciated.

Reviewer: Tinanaz Signed
Date: 07/08/07
Summary: The characters are stuck in a fanfic and the writer isn't doin too much about it. (A spoof of fanfic and us writers) Sequel to RaChell's Writer's Block

Categories: Spoofs / Parodies
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: Comedy
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3548
Read Count: 2062
[Report This] Published: 01/03/07 Updated: 01/03/07


Title: Chapter 1: Writer's Block 2

Great short story, Sarah. Poor MP, stuck in a room with both a crying baby and Jarod. Surprised she didn't shoot at least one of the three.

Author's Response:

Thanks Tina

And yes, they had a bit of a challenge to overcome there, was a challenge to write without a lot of gunfire (but then again, RaChell mostly took care of that :P ). Though personally I feel more for the poor writer. It's nice to know people are still reading my stories despite some lack of activity on my part.

Reviewer: Tinanaz Signed
Date: 19/02/08
Summary: Sydney's POV. This story is inspired by Gables "X Marks the Spot series". sydbroots.jpg

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Comedy
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 473
Read Count: 3966
[Report This] Published: 05/05/07 Updated: 05/05/07


Title: Chapter 1: Sydney's Point Of View

So, did she?  To be continued?  Please?

Author's Response:

Well ... if she did that's another story. (big smile) But for now it'll have to wait!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Reviewer: Tinanaz Signed
Date: 22/06/07
Summary: Jarod is captured and returned back to "The Centre".

Categories: Alternate Universe
Characters: Broots, Jarod, Miss Parker, Mr Parker, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Angst
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 6889
Read Count: 11789
[Report This] Published: 02/07/07 Updated: 11/08/07


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I like the twist.  I kept expecting it to be an elaborate pretend by Raines, faking Jarod's death to get him away from the others.  I like this better.  Good job, great story.

Author's Response:

Hi Tinanaz!

Thank you very much.  Sorry, I took so long in updating.  My computer crashed.  I just updated.  Hope you'll come back for more.

Have a great week.

Anna  

Reviewer: Tinanaz Signed
Date: 18/07/07
Summary: Jarod discovers new information about Parker and gets tired of waiting...This is a continuation of another author's Highlander/Pretender X-over. (Immortal Quest at the old Pretender Archive. Tyvm DragonHeart for writing such a great jumping off point.)I read the author's sequel, and it was fine, but... my mind went off on another track entirely, so I also thank the original author for permission to explore where my imagination went.

 



Categories: Crossovers
Characters: Broots, Catherine Parker, Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker, Mr Parker, Mr Raines, Original Character, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Romance, Suspence/Mystery
Warnings: Warning: Language

Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 76340
Read Count: 69815
[Report This] Published: 17/07/07 Updated: 19/07/07


Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

This is a great story.  I don't usually like cross-overs, but you are doing a fantastic job with this one.  Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Tinanaz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 19/07/07
Title: Chapter 15: Epilogue

 Great story.  Continued when?

Reviewer: Tinanaz Signed
Date: 19/07/07
27 by TLM
Rated: PG starstarstarstar [Reviews - 114]
Summary:

We all just want some ANSWERS. 

"I run. You chase. What if... we didn't?"



Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, General, Romance, Suspence/Mystery
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 36857
Read Count: 67632
[Report This] Published: 26/07/07 Updated: 08/07/08


Title: Chapter 1: Day 1 : Day 28

Interesting concept, the time shifts back and forth.  Makes it seem like an episode.  Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: I didn't even think about that, but you're right. You see what happens when I try and be different. ;)

Reviewer: Tinanaz Signed
Date: 26/07/07
Title: Chapter 8: Day 8 : Day 35

Oooohhhh, this is getting better and better.  Please give us an early Christmas present and post the next chapter soon (maybe even this year?). Please, please, please?

Author's Response: Hm maaaaybe. I'll consider it. ;)

Reviewer: Tinanaz Signed
Date: 15/12/07
Title: Chapter 9: Day 9 : Day 36

Hmmm, a chapter that gives more questions than answers, a suspenseful ending after lots of anxiety.  Would have to rate the chapter as Great, but mean.  Poor Jarod being beating for the fun of it, poor Parker for the emotional breakdown in her mom's studio and poor Syd for almost growing some cahones.  So now the big question is : When's the next chapter? 

Author's Response: Isn't tP just so good at doing that though? It is a very mean, very painful chapter. Glad you liked it though!

Reviewer: Tinanaz Signed
Date: 31/12/07
Title: Chapter 10: Day 10 : Day 37

Ohh, very nice, TLM.  Start of with the good feeling about Jarod finally talking (well, sorta talking) to his long-long mommy and end with even more questions than before.  Great job and write faster, please.  You have some of us on pins and needles, here.



Author's Response: Haha good feelings just never last for long do they? Thanks, I will do my best!

Reviewer: Tinanaz Signed
Date: 20/02/08
Retired
Flight of Memory by MP
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 95]
Summary: What if the Centre had the power to take it all away?  Jarod is captured and they try to ensure that he will never escape again.

Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Angelo, Broots, Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker, Mr Raines, Sam, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 46107
Read Count: 67656
[Report This] Published: 29/07/07 Updated: 10/12/08


Title: Chapter 4: No Other Way

Cliffhangers:  aarrrrhhhh!  Meanie!  Can't leave us hanging there!  Is poor Jarod truly trapped?  He's not thinking the unthinkable, is he?  Write faster, please. *whimpers a little at the thought of a long wait*



Author's Response: Sorry to leave you hanging!  I'm afraid you haven't seen the last of cliffhangers for this story.  I honestly don't do it just to make you poke me.  As soon as the next chapter is beta'ed I'll put it up.

Reviewer: Tinanaz Signed
Date: 05/10/07
Title: Chapter 6: Believe Your Own Lies

Ohhh, very nice.  I kept expecting an escape attempt, specially since you have Parker so ready for it, but, no, you pulled the unexpected.  Great job.  Now for the tough question: how soon until the next chapter?



Author's Response: Glad you liked!  As for the next chap, the first draft is done and the beta wheels are turning, but I really, *really* need to pass finals, so it might be a couple weeks.  Hope you keep reading!

Reviewer: Tinanaz Signed
Date: 30/11/07
Never Say Never by AJeff
Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary: Jarod thought he had the perfect family, but, something in Miss Parker's past had otherwise changed his mind.

Categories: Alternate Universe
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Warning: Sexual Content

Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 5535
Read Count: 5990
[Report This] Published: 11/08/07 Updated: 17/09/07


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Great chapter! Shippers are tough to write well and you are doing a great job. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Hi Tinanaz!

Thank you very much for your kind words.

Anna 

Reviewer: Tinanaz Signed
Date: 02/09/07
Twin Crosses by MP
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary: A shared loss.

Categories: Death
Characters: Jarod, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Vignette
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 101
Read Count: 1834
[Report This] Published: 09/09/07 Updated: 09/09/07


Title: Chapter 1: Twin Crosses

May be short, but very poignant.  Can understand Jarod using White Cloud as a "family burial plot" and Sydney sounds just like a dad, regardless of what he may tell Jarod.

Author's Response:

Thanks Tina!  Those are my thoughts exactly about Sydney; he's Jarod's dad in all the ways that matter, they're both just too stubborn to admit it. (or maybe stubborn's not the right word . . . oh well)

Anyway, glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Tinanaz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/09/07
Prodigy: Genesis by MP
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Birth of a genius.



Categories: Prequel
Characters: Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: Drama, Tragedy
Warnings: None

Series: Prodigy
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3038
Read Count: 2469
[Report This] Published: 09/11/07 Updated: 09/11/07


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ohhh, I like this story.  So the evil Dr. Raines has had his hand in the breaking up of more than one set of twins for the Centre.  And having Jarod and Kyle as twins helps explain why the boys looked so much alike in age when they first met.  The only question I still have is how did Harriet Tashman know about Kyle, then.  I can't see the Major admitting what he did.  Did he just it off as an elaborate kidnapping scheme later on?  Hmm.

Author's Response: Yes, the "twin" angle was one I hadn't seen done--which is surprising considering how much fanfic is devoted to strange and surprising family connections.  There's more in the works, so hopefully I'll be able to fill in the blanks with plausible explanations.  I'm mum till I have time to sit down and write the next installment!

Reviewer: Tinanaz Signed
Date: 10/11/07
White Snowflakes by terri_tpfan
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 18]
Summary: White snowflaks falling, phones ringing, sadness is heard...

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst
Warnings: Warning: Character Death

Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 7784
Read Count: 7457
[Report This] Published: 26/11/07 Updated: 21/12/07


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You're posting it!  Yay!!!  Great start to a great story, now keep editting to get the rest posted (Yes, I'm being bossy again, but this story deserves some bossy orders)

Author's Response: I have almost finsiehd editing, I am waiting on our miss Jacci to do some beta work on btoh chaps then i will be posting. Glad you are liking it still :D

Reviewer: Tinanaz Signed
Date: 26/11/07
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Yay!  Next chappie is up!  Great job so far, can wait for next chapter (hint, hint).

Author's Response: yay! lol, thank Tinanaz, do you mean you can't wait for next chappy? lol

Reviewer: Tinanaz Signed
Date: 06/12/07
Summary: Jarod is done with helping his new friend Ricky! What will happen THIS night when a man and woman can be anything they want to be.

Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Jarod
Classifications: Genres: Smut
Warnings: Warning: Sexual Content

Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2528
Read Count: 1998
[Report This] Published: 22/03/08 Updated: 24/03/08


Title: Chapter 4: The end?

Milkshake and orange juice = baby Pretender by any chance?  Hope the chapter title doesnt mean the end of the story, we need more. 

Author's Response:

That might be the end of 'this' story but far from the end of the tale

 

Mmmm A pretender baby would signal more to come wouldn't it? Maybe the author is trying to be sneaky! She IS evil.... wait a moment! That's me!

Reviewer: Tinanaz Signed
Date: 24/03/08
Prodigy: Family by MP
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary: The second installment in the "Prodigy Series."  Separated at birth, Jarod and Kyle are now four years old.  How has Jarod adapted to growing up--a prodigy in a world that does not understand him?  How has Kyle survived life in the depths of the Centre?  What does the Centre have planned? 

Categories: Prequel
Characters: Jarod, Jarod's Family, Kyle, Mr Parker, Mr Raines, Original Character, Other Centre Character, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Drama, General
Warnings: None

Series: Prodigy
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 6321
Read Count: 2188
[Report This] Published: 30/03/08 Updated: 30/03/08


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very nice, MP.  Love how you made Jarod and Kyle twins and how young Jarod was a bit of a troublemaker, unintentionally of course.  How soon for the next installment?  Soon, I hope.  Very very soon, in fact.

Author's Response: Thanks, Tina!  I wasn't sure if the twin thing was going to work, but I liked the ideas it raised.  As for little Jarod, I based a lot of him off of my older brother.  It always seems like the smartest kids have the most trouble fitting in, so I decided to play that up.  No promises on the next installment; my multi-chapter fic Flight of Memory needs some serious TLC at the moment.  There are ideas running around in my head, though, and I'm sure it won't be too long before I just *have* to write them down.

Reviewer: Tinanaz Signed
Date: 30/03/08