Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 190
Read Count: 2790
Hi! I've been lurking around "Missing Pieces" for sometime and finally decided to join. I'm a member of two other sites. Besides posting "Pretender" fics, I do write for others on this one site. The other is a "Pretender Challenge" group where I love to write my smut. Most of my stories are "angst" with "romance" mixed in together. So, if you're in the mood for "angst", click on one of my stories. If you're in the mood for "smut", click away and ENJOY!
Hi RaChell!
I love this! Thank you for sharing.
Anna
A sweet, fun short story for Christmas time based on my own Christmas distasters.
Gosh! This was the best "Pretender" Christmas story I've ever read! I feel so christmasy, and it's only seven more months until Santa arrives.
Anna
Reviewer: AJeff SignedBeautifully written. I especially love your last line!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, glad you liked it.
Bravo!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, this type of writing is very new to me and i am well out of my depth i fear.
Sad, but, beautifully written.
Author's Response: Thanks AJeff, glad you liked it :)
Beautifully written! Perfect! Bravo!
Reviewer: AJeff SignedHi icd!
Beautifully written. I love the last line. Yes, they were fallen angels.
Anna
I love happy endings. Well done! Thanks for sharing!
Anna
Reviewer: AJeff SignedI am so sorry for your loss. You have my deepest condolences. I'd like to share a poem which I wrote a couple of years ago. Hope it brings you comfort.
If I hang on to all of you too closely
It's because I can't bear the thought of leaving you
I may not be able to express my feelings
But, can't you see it in my eyes, what I feel for you
I shall be looking down at you
I shall be missing my family
You are my loves, my greatest treasures
You are the most precious things to me
Farewell, my loves, I may be leaving
But, my love for you is here to stay
I love you all so very much
I will be seeing you one day
When it is your time to join me
I shall be waiting for you
I shall welcome you here in paradise
I shall be saving a place for you
So, for now I bid you goodbye
Until we meet again in eternity
I shall welcome you with open arms
"Here I am, you are finally home with me"
I love your last line. Nice oneshot.
Anna
Reviewer: AJeff SignedHi RaChell!
I love this! I'm waiting for more. great start!
Anna
I love this story, and I've already reviewed on your other site. Reading this the second time seemed ever better! Love the way you wrote Miss Parker and Jarod. Well done.
Anna
Hi
Thanks, your story and writing style rock too.
Reviewer: AJeff Signed
Great story. Thanks for sharing.
Anna
Reviewer: AJeff SignedHi RaChelle!
I really loved this piece. Well done! You made me laugh! I could see all of this right in front of me.
Hope you'll be writing more.
Take care,
Anna
Thank you Anna! I'm glad I made you laugh. This was fun to write.
And of course I'm looking forward to more of your stories. We will get something soon I hope? Is that a 'yes' I hear?
Reviewer: AJeff Signed
Continuation of the Sleepyhead series.
Hi RaChell!
This was really good. Poor Miss Parker, can't she see what kind of person "daddy" is?
Well done!
Anna
Thank you Anna! I'm glad you enjoyed it, esp. the part re: Daddy Parker. I tried very hard to keep him 'in character'. (grin)
Sooo when will we see another story from you?
Reviewer: AJeff Signed
I have never read a more beautiful story than I have right now. Wonderfully written. As you told Debbie's story, I could picture it as if she was right in front of me in my living room acting out the scenes you've created. I love the memories of the precious time Miss Parker and Debbie had with each other, and you replayed it PERFECTLY! Thank you so much for sharing!
Anna
Reviewer: AJeff Signed