Characters: Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Drama
Warnings: Warning: Slash, Warning: Violence
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Word count: 1097
Read Count: 1900
so Jacci made me read this!!
and i really enjoyed.. if slash every was plausible.. this is really the first way i could ever believe it might have happened..
i love the choice.. the only way to end it, was through Lyle.. very intelligent.
THanks for the fun read!
KReviewer: KatieQ Signed
Hey!! I just wanted to drop in and say how much i have enjoyed this dark story thus far. I feel it's a very dark, and accurate reflection of what might have happened to Jarod if he was 'broken'. It's such a wonderful story, and it deserves to be finished! I hope you can post more soon.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your words. It has been a long time since i stopped this, involved in too many other projects, and now the missing pieces upgrade is almost over, perhaps it is time to finish it. Once again thanks.
So it's May 2007.. why is there not more!!!!
Ummm cos the story was over?
Actually, more is coming I hope. Havent written in a long time and am out of practice badly. Going slowly with the little story and then hopefully get on concluding this.Reviewer: KatieQ Signed
FINALLY COMPLETED. A saga with lots of action, plot twists, and a little romance thrown in from time to time. It's Jarod and Miss Parker's journey together toward the truth and the end.
Yay!! An update :D
Great momentum as usual.. really looking forward to reading on the near future.
Take good care of your muse!
Now this an update pace I could get used to ;).
Really feeling for the two of them, and looking forward to seeing how you are going to move the plot forward, now that MP is back in a position of 'power'.
Power. What an interesting concept. ;)Reviewer: KatieQ Signed
look at you spoiling us! 3 in 3 days..
great chapter.. I really hope MP realized the error in her ways, but it's great she helped Jarod get out! Curious about the mysterious patient.
ooh spoiling us !!! setting a hard precedence to keep up! hehehe. I'm so glad you are writing this! It was Lyle!! Interesting that he is back in the game.
Keep up the excellent work!
So you did find time for more writing afterall. Great chapter with a nice suspensful ending, so I hope that means there is more to come soon.. *hint*
Really you are doing a great job, and totally spoiling all of us!
ooh you killed Angelo!! I could get upset, but Im guilty of the same! Thanks for updating again, it was a great chapter. I'm glad that MP got out safely.
You could always ask the 'secretary' to response to your reviews for you!! (just kidding jacs..hehehe). Another great chapter! I'm glad MP found Jarod.. i wasn't expecting that reunion to come so quickly.. happy ending..now there is a concept!! Again wonderful as usual! I am so glad that your muse has revisted you!
Oh what a conflicted MP you presented us with.. with i think is perfect and very true to her character!! I'm nervous about where Lyle is, and the introduction of pop-tarts scene with Cade was so precious! Great chappie.. thanks for sharing :D
Author's Response: Poor MP is always in complete conflict with herself and everyone around her! I'm glad you think it's true to her character, because I certainly think so. Thanks so much. :)
Yay another update. Congrats on surviving another semester.. the winter one always is the most painful eh? What are you taking?
Okay on to the point - a great chappie, glad to see there is a bit of trouble in paradise, it's more real, especially given our hot headed stubborn ass characters we get to play with.
I feel the winter one flies by and the fall drags on actually. This semester it was philosophy, american lit, british lit, earth systems and cycles, and poetry writing.
It is more real and while I like reading a good sappy happy story sometimes, I find this sort of attitude more realistic for our twisted characters. Thanks as always :)Reviewer: KatieQ Signed
you just had to go and plant the Lyle seed eh? I live how you did the end w/MP/J.. it would be difficult for her to break pattern, etc, and the shopping trip was cute. Good work! can't wait for more
My biggest grievance about smut is that as soon as it hits the scene, the plot goes to bits (more like Plot.. what plot..), but you didn't let that happen, in fact you brought it up a notch!! A great chappie, and can't wait to read more :P
I think this was one of your best chapters yet! I really liked it :P .. nice and longish too.. my read to fast for my own goodness really appreciate that. Can't wait to see where you will take it from here!
That's so interesting you say that because it was one of the hardest to write, lots of plot moving I suppose. Glad you're liking it and I'll try to keep my standards up. ;)Reviewer: KatieQ Signed
oooh we are back at real time!! I like how you are re-telling actually little snippets from the series, it ties in with such a nice package.
MORE MORE MORE!!Reviewer: KatieQ Signed
- 1 hr.. we are getting oh so close!! I'm looking forward to see how this comes full circle. Great writing as usual :) ..next please!Reviewer: KatieQ Signed
Suppose to be writing a paper.. but someone I found myself here instead. Wow.. you made me shed a tear (or two.. or three). So wonderfully wonderfully written.
This line is absoutely superb.
You never ask someone to stay unless you know they can't
Really enjoying this fic =). Parker and Lyle are def a dangerous combination. Looking forward to reading on and seeing exactly what Lyle has schemed. Thanks for sharing. K
very unique way of presenting the story.. enough to leave us wondering exactly what happened, but enough details to get the just! Thanks for sharing =)
I don't know how I missed reading this epic until now. Simply riveting. Makes my own writing skills look like pathetic little dust bunnies in comparison. You had me on the edge of my seat the whole way. I can clearly see what this has become one of the top reviewed, most reveered stories in MP history.
Well done.. applause to you.
what a shocker to find a suprise epilogue to this fascinating story. Maybe you can find it in your heart to give us a little bit more?
Author's Response: I dont know KatieQ, i am pretty tired from the huge word count, it is much longer than i ever intended it to be. Perhaps after a much needed rest i might find some inspiration to continue. I might relax with a crossword and hope that re-energizes me.
this installment really didn't have the same emotional investment as your previous parts. I could feel the frustration of the main character as if i was living it myself. Nice portrayal, although i much more for angsty type pieces myself. Blue is cool though. Can't wait to read chapter 8!
Author's Response: I am sorry to disappoint you KatieQ. You can well imagine how difficult it is to keep up with this kind of emotional intenstiy, I fear it is all getting to be a bit too much for me.
And to think i thought this fic was completed, you just suprise with another epic chapter.
All i can say is WOW.
Hope there is more to come.
wow.. the desperation of the main character in this chapter was so vibrant, i felt like i needed broots with me too. Or maybe that is because my laptop is overheating to the point where i feel lilke smoke is coming out of it at any moment.
This was a big chapter. you even gave it a title.
Treat yourself with a nice coffee and crossword after the hard work you put into this one.