Penname: KatieQ [Contact]

Real name: Katie

Member Since: 18/12/06

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Eleventh Hour by Eveylin
Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 31]
Summary: Jarod will take down The Centre, one way or another.

Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Drama
Warnings: Warning: Slash, Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Word count: 1097
Read Count: 1900
[Report This] Published: 19/04/05 Updated: 19/04/05

Title: Chapter 1: Eleventh Hour

so Jacci made me read this!!

and i really enjoyed.. if slash every was plausible.. this is really the first way i could ever believe it might have happened..

i love the choice.. the only way to end it, was through Lyle.. very intelligent.

THanks for the fun read!

Reviewer: KatieQ Signed
Date: 18/05/07
Aftermath by jacci
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 26]
Summary: This is the sequel to Entropy. I strongly suggest you do not read unless you have read Entropy as none of this will make any sense otherwise.

Poor Jarod is in a bad way now and there seems to be no hope for him. Will Sydney and Parker finally pull through and help him, or will Lyle really win this time?

Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: Angst
Warnings: Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Word count: 47658
Read Count: 18414
[Report This] Published: 13/05/05 Updated: 10/04/06

Title: Chapter 1: 1

Hey!! I just wanted to drop in and say how much i have enjoyed this dark story thus far. I feel it's a very dark, and accurate reflection of what might have happened to Jarod if he was 'broken'. It's such a wonderful story, and it deserves to be finished! I hope you can post more soon. 

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your words. It has been a long time since i stopped this, involved in too many other projects, and now the missing pieces upgrade is almost over, perhaps it is time to finish it. Once again thanks.

Reviewer: KatieQ Signed
Date: 10/01/07
Title: Chapter 1: 1

So it's May 2007.. why is there not more!!!!

Author's Response:

Ummm cos the story was over?

Actually, more is coming I hope. Havent written in a long time and am out of practice badly. Going slowly with the little story and then hopefully get on concluding this. 

Reviewer: KatieQ Signed
Date: 08/05/07

FINALLY COMPLETED. A saga with lots of action, plot twists, and a little romance thrown in from time to time. It's Jarod and Miss Parker's journey together toward the truth and the end.

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, General, Romance, Suspence/Mystery
Warnings: Warning: Character Death, Warning: Language, Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Word count: 105340
Read Count: 114340
[Report This] Published: 07/10/05 Updated: 30/06/07

Title: Chapter 35: Reopened Wounds

Yay!! An update :D

Great momentum as usual.. really looking forward to reading on the near future.

Take good care of your muse!

Author's Response: Never you worry, I'm writing as we speak!

Reviewer: KatieQ Signed
Date: 07/03/07
Title: Chapter 38: Rebuilding

Now this an update pace I could get used to ;).

Really feeling for the two of them, and looking forward to seeing how you are going to move the plot forward, now that MP is back in a position of 'power'.



Author's Response:

Power. What an interesting concept. ;)

Reviewer: KatieQ Signed
Date: 08/03/07
Title: Chapter 39: Puzzle Pieces

look at you spoiling us! 3 in 3 days.. 

great chapter.. I really hope MP realized the error in her ways, but it's great she helped Jarod get out! Curious about the mysterious patient. 

Author's Response: You are such a faithful reviewer. Maybe I shouldn't have responded back to all these in reverse order haha.

Reviewer: KatieQ Signed
Date: 09/03/07
Title: Chapter 40: The Kindness of Strangers

ooh spoiling us !!! setting a hard precedence to keep up! hehehe. I'm so glad you are writing this! It was Lyle!! Interesting that he is back in the game.

Keep up the excellent work!

Author's Response: What's a good Pretender story without lots of Lyle action? ;)

Reviewer: KatieQ Signed
Date: 10/03/07
Title: Chapter 41: Blue Black Red

So you did find time for more writing afterall. Great chapter with a nice suspensful ending, so I hope that means there is more to come soon.. *hint*

Really you are doing a great job, and totally spoiling all of us! 

Author's Response: I was on break during the spoiling. So that's why the chapters are coming a bit more slowly now.

Reviewer: KatieQ Signed
Date: 13/03/07
Title: Chapter 42: Casualties of War

ooh you killed Angelo!! I could get upset, but Im guilty of the same! Thanks for updating again, it was a great chapter. I'm glad that MP got out safely.


Author's Response: You sure are! And I thought about your story when I was writing it. It's a very upsetting thing but sometimes these things must happen. Sigh.

Reviewer: KatieQ Signed
Date: 20/03/07
Title: Chapter 43: Everyday


 You could always ask the 'secretary' to response to your reviews for you!! (just kidding jacs..hehehe). Another great chapter! I'm glad MP found Jarod.. i wasn't expecting that reunion to come so quickly.. happy there is a concept!! Again wonderful as usual! I am so glad that your muse has revisted you!

Author's Response: Hahah not needed anymore! I'm responding to everyone's now, this is so exciting. I thought last chapter was so depressing, there needed to be a little light of hope that this wasn't a completely depressing story haha. Thanks, me too!

Reviewer: KatieQ Signed
Date: 24/03/07
Title: Chapter 44: Steam

Oh what a conflicted MP you presented us with.. with i think is perfect and very true to her character!! I'm nervous about where Lyle is, and the introduction of pop-tarts scene with Cade was so precious! Great chappie.. thanks for sharing :D

Author's Response: Poor MP is always in complete conflict with herself and everyone around her! I'm glad you think it's true to her character, because I certainly think so. Thanks so much. :)

Reviewer: KatieQ Signed
Date: 09/04/07
Title: Chapter 45: Circles

Yay another update. Congrats on surviving another semester.. the winter one always is the most painful eh? What are you taking?

Okay on to the point - a great chappie, glad to see there is a bit of trouble in paradise, it's more real, especially given our hot headed stubborn ass characters we get to play with.

 Happy writing!

Author's Response:

I feel the winter one flies by and the fall drags on actually. This semester it was philosophy, american lit, british lit, earth systems and cycles, and poetry writing.

It is more real and while I like reading a good sappy happy story sometimes, I find this sort of attitude more realistic for our twisted characters. Thanks as always :)

Reviewer: KatieQ Signed
Date: 10/05/07
Title: Chapter 46: Breakthrough

Hey -


you just had to go and plant the Lyle seed eh? I live how you did the end w/MP/J.. it would be difficult for her to break pattern, etc, and the shopping trip was cute. Good work! can't wait for more 

Author's Response: It can't be too happily ever after! The chapter needed some Centre in it. Thank you thank you. I've always wanted to see Miss Parker shopping like a normal person. I feel it would be a lot more hilarious than how I wrote it.

Reviewer: KatieQ Signed
Date: 14/05/07
Title: Chapter 47: Lost in Trance

My biggest grievance about smut is that as soon as it hits the scene, the plot goes to bits (more like Plot.. what plot..), but you didn't let that happen, in fact you brought it up a notch!! A great chappie, and can't wait to read more :P



Author's Response: Exactly and I could never ever ever let that happen! Thanks very much :D

Reviewer: KatieQ Signed
Date: 21/05/07
Title: Chapter 48: Keys

Hey -


 I think this was one of your best chapters yet! I really liked it :P .. nice and longish too.. my read to fast for my own goodness really appreciate that. Can't wait to see where you will take it from here! 

Author's Response:

That's so interesting you say that because it was one of the hardest to write, lots of plot moving I suppose. Glad you're liking it and I'll try to keep my standards up. ;)

Reviewer: KatieQ Signed
Date: 31/05/07
A winter's tale by whashaza
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 926]
Summary: stories/395/images/parkerjarod.jpg A love way. ;-) Read and review please

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: Action/Adventure, Romance
Warnings: Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Word count: 55206
Read Count: 62580
[Report This] Published: 05/08/06 Updated: 19/06/11

Title: Chapter 11: Getting closer

oooh we are back at real time!! I like how you are re-telling actually little snippets from the series, it ties in with such a nice package.



Reviewer: KatieQ Signed
Date: 21/07/07
Title: Chapter 13: Darkness descends

- 1 hr.. we are getting oh so close!! I'm looking forward to see how this comes full circle. Great writing as usual :) please!

Reviewer: KatieQ Signed
Date: 03/10/07
Friends by Manoline
Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 9]
Summary: To all the things you wish you said but never did.

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Tragedy
Warnings: Warning: Character Death
Challenges: Drabble #05 Trust

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Word count: 921
Read Count: 1443
[Report This] Published: 20/12/06 Updated: 20/12/06

Title: Chapter 1: Friends

Suppose to be writing a paper.. but someone I found myself here instead. Wow.. you made me shed a tear (or two.. or three). So wonderfully wonderfully written.

This line is absoutely superb. 

You never ask someone to stay unless you know they can't

- KQ 

Author's Response: Oh thank you so much Katie. Avodig school work by reading fanfic, yup, I do that. (Sorry I didn't respond until now, but as you know evil efic update broke the review-alert)

Reviewer: KatieQ Signed
Date: 12/04/07
Don't Stop by Thunderchild
Rated: NC 18 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 321]
Summary: Fortune rolls a dice.... do the hunters catch the hunted?

Categories: During The Series
Characters: Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker, Mr Parker, Other Centre Character, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Drama, General, Smut
Warnings: Warning: Incest/Twincest, Warning: Sexual Content

Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Word count: 20876
Read Count: 144957
[Report This] Published: 08/01/07 Updated: 19/02/07

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10


 Really enjoying this fic =). Parker and Lyle are def a dangerous combination. Looking forward to reading on and seeing exactly what Lyle has schemed. Thanks for sharing. K

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Sad to say there are no further chapters planned for DS - Lyle scheming is always a thing of beauty though *grins*. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: KatieQ Signed
Date: 21/02/07
Bright Eyes by Chris
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary: Jarod is caught and back in the Centre. But how did he get there and how to get out again?

Categories: Stories
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: Drama
Warnings: Warning: Character Death

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Word count: 4012
Read Count: 2329
[Report This] Published: 13/01/07 Updated: 13/01/07

Title: Chapter 1: .

very unique way of presenting the story.. enough to leave us wondering exactly what happened, but enough details to get the just! Thanks for sharing =)

Reviewer: KatieQ Signed
Date: 14/01/07
A test story by jacs
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 346]
Summary: jsut testing to see if it works...

Categories: Poetry
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Word count: 364
Read Count: 44960
[Report This] Published: 19/01/07 Updated: 03/07/08

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I don't know how I missed reading this epic until now. Simply riveting. Makes my own writing skills look like pathetic little dust bunnies in comparison. You had me on the edge of my seat the whole way. I can clearly see what this has become one of the top reviewed, most reveered stories in MP history.


Well done.. applause to you.  

Author's Response: I am glad you found it then, perhaps you could feed this to your dust bunnies and with such nourishment, who knows what they might grow into???

Thanks so much, and the best is yet to come (i hope.. lol)

Reviewer: KatieQ Signed
Date: 25/01/07
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

what a shocker to find a suprise epilogue to this fascinating story. Maybe you can find it in your heart to give us a little bit more?

Author's Response: I dont know KatieQ, i am pretty tired from the huge word count, it is much longer than i ever intended it to be. Perhaps after a much needed rest i might find some inspiration to continue. I might relax with a crossword and hope that re-energizes me.

Reviewer: KatieQ Signed
Date: 29/01/07
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

this installment really didn't have the same emotional investment as your previous parts. I could feel the frustration of the main character as if i was living it myself. Nice portrayal, although i much more for angsty type pieces myself. Blue is cool though. Can't wait to read chapter 8!

Author's Response: I am sorry to disappoint you KatieQ. You can well imagine how difficult it is to keep up with this kind of emotional intenstiy, I fear it is all getting to be a bit too much for me.

Reviewer: KatieQ Signed
Date: 04/02/07
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

And to think i thought this fic was completed, you just suprise with another epic chapter.


All i can say is WOW.


Hope there is more to come. 

Author's Response: This chappie was rushed, as you can probably tell. I feel it lacks some depth, but the hounds of hell were on my heels (aka the hackers) and so this was a speedy update.

Reviewer: KatieQ Signed
Date: 07/03/07
Title: Chapter 8: Big Changes

wow.. the desperation of the main character in this chapter was so vibrant, i felt like i needed broots with me too. Or maybe that is because my laptop is overheating to the point where i feel lilke smoke is coming out of it at any moment. 

This was a big chapter. you even gave it a title.

Treat yourself with a nice coffee and crossword after the hard work you put into this one. 

Author's Response: Yeppers, thought I might try the whole name the chapter thing for once. I hope your poor comp cools down and doesnt blow a fuse. Broots is busy helping me right now and might not be available for a while.

Reviewer: KatieQ Signed
Date: 12/03/07