Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Romance, Smut
Warnings: Warning: Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 819
Read Count: 1929
*big mishievous grin* Just the kind of powerplay one could expect from the two of them ;)
Reviewer: Mira SignedMm, smutty.. and lol, I'd call that a draw ;)
Reviewer: Mira SignedHmm, sure can see a lot of tension built up between them in that flashback. I like it so far. Jarod's never ending defiance and Miss Parker's quest to get away from the center, just things never seem to work out as they think, or do they? So, what are or were you planning next? Miss Parker somehow managing to help Jarod? Them getting very *close* due to circumstances?
Reviewer: Mira Signed*grins* Interesting, with this Spectrum, takes one to catch a certain someone in the end.. Chapter 3 certainly has a cliffhanger ending...
Reviewer: Mira SignedAlex's jealousy over being second best, does come to a new level, given the relationship he has with Miss Parker, that's for certain. I really liked that particular part of this story, as well as how things ended. Without the more blodshed involving Parker or Jarod. And indeed, Miss Parker is not just some damsel in distress here, that ends up as Jarod's sidekick once she's joined forces with him. She's still very capable of taking care of herself, and her family.
Reviewer: Mira Signed*snickers* That tongue comment of hers, my oh my. And the reversal of roles. Sure would be interesting to read a sequel, or a detailed prequel for that matter...
Reviewer: Mira SignedYou have to write more, we want to know what happens next! :D
Reviewer: Mira SignedI'll admit to not having read the stories you mentioned, it seems they're no longer available at the url you provided, but I still didn't feel all that confused. A very interesting story this. Will you write more chapters? I'd like to know what Jarod's reply to Lyle will be.. and where Miss Parker and Kyle is at...
Reviewer: Mira Signed.. doh, now I spot that you do have aforementioned stories up here as well ;)
Reviewer: Mira SignedI liked this development with the Inner Sense, and with the brothers being involved like this... Don't leave us hanging here, please continue the story!
Reviewer: Mira SignedTeeehee, a fun fanfic, indeed, a funfic :D
Author's Response: Thank you kindly.
*grins big* Mmhm, those boxers surely must've made her wonder.. and that love confession ;D
Reviewer: Mira SignedMinimalistic yet with lots of emotion. Obviously that chapter was not the literal turning point that one'd expect, but I am hoping there'll be much much more we can tune our not so innocent minds into.. ;)
Author's Response: Thanks Mira but I don't do smut or NC-17 well so you'll have to settle for this . And I think that the reader's imagination is quite capable of suppling their own fantasy. LOL!
Yikes. Now this was a nailbiter... Indeedy, Jarod's luck has to run out sometime. And good grief, the chapter with how Timmy was set "free" and then Lyle's attempt to break Jarod with those polaroid images.. and of course, the end being the beginning of what is yet to come.. in Africa.. *cringes*
I'd surely be interested in reading more! *pleads for continuation*
Ohoh, a library approach. I have been waiting to read one of these! I like this story :)
I'm not a great fan of Harry Potter myself, but I must admit the 2 movies I so far have seen were enjoyable. It certainly makes sense Jarod would identify with Harry and also spot other kinds of clever things in those books, not to mention being so absorbed by this kind of books overall.
We all just want some ANSWERS.
"I run. You chase. What if... we didn't?"
I love the power play, the banter between Miss Parker and Jarod and situations like the one in the end of chapter of Day 30 that develops :D And ohyes, the double timelines thing as already commented upon really spices this story up too.
Author's Response: Everything's a battle between those two. Jeez, those kids. Glad you like it. Thanks for the review, Mira!