Penname: Thunderchild [Contact]

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Member Since: 05/04/06

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Affiliation: Centre

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Shadows by icd
Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary: A shadow that's sticking to you like glue; a shadow that keeps tabs on you wherever you go, but a shadow you can't see. You only know it's there.

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 15416
Read Count: 3436
[Report This] Published: 24/04/05 Updated: 24/04/05


Title: Chapter 1: Adoration

Me likes! Me likes! Me likes! You were obviously coming out of your shipper phase when you wrote this. Nice job! Anyone else would have given into shipper urges, but not you. I liked this a lot, it kept everything close to its chest until answers wanted to be revealed. YAY!

Author's Response: *g* yeah, indeed coming out of the shipper phase. well, more or less at least ;) glad you like

Reviewer: Thunderchild Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22/11/06
Retired
Summary: "I believe the two of you are taking the concept of sibling rivalry to new levels." Sydney has never been more correct in his life.

Categories: Spoofs / Parodies
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: Action/Adventure, Comedy, Suspence/Mystery
Warnings: Warning: Language, Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 33349
Read Count: 208629
[Report This] Published: 25/05/05 Updated: 30/06/05


Title: Chapter 1: Sibling Rivalry

I never tire of reading this!!!!!

Reviewer: Thunderchild Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/10/06
Snow Storm by Epona
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Jarod gets caught by Miss. Parker and Cox. This is the story of his trip to, and his escape from, the Centre. Poor Jarod! He spends most of the story in handcuffs.

 



Categories: Season 4
Characters: Broots, Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker, Mr Parker, Other Centre Character, Sam, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 11290
Read Count: 2351
[Report This] Published: 24/06/05 Updated: 24/06/05


Title: Chapter 1: Snow Storm

I enjoyed this. It was different to so many other 'Jarod is recaptured. Jarod escapes from the Centre.' I liked the different way you utilized Cox. And more importantly, the fact this story didn't turn into another shipper-fluff thing.

Reviewer: Thunderchild Signed
Date: 14/02/08
Summary: She knew they would end up here. They always ended up in this place.

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Lyle, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Romance, Smut
Warnings: Warning: Incest/Twincest, Warning: Sexual Content

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1008
Read Count: 619
[Report This] Published: 13/07/05 Updated: 13/07/05


Title: Chapter 1: Silence of the Ordinary

*jaw hits floor* No reviews?! That is shocking.
I loved this, it is always good to read twinnie. Excellent job!

Reviewer: Thunderchild Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/10/06
Summary: A lesson in flight, night flight.

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: Character Musing, General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1099
Read Count: 2002
[Report This] Published: 10/08/05 Updated: 10/08/05


Title: Chapter 1: Blue Angel

That was beautiful. Powerfully written, very expressive. It was so easy to get swept up in such an astoundingly written piece. Well done. 
Am looking forward to reading more of your works.

Reviewer: Thunderchild Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14/12/06
Summary: Lyle reflects while staring into inevitability.

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Character Musing, Romance, Vignette
Warnings: Warning: Incest/Twincest, Warning: Sexual Content

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 655
Read Count: 1560
[Report This] Published: 20/09/05 Updated: 20/09/05


Title: Chapter 1: You Had a Gun (That You Used on Me)

Is good to catch up with old fics I haven't seen for ages. *waves twinnie flag* (Badness that no one has reviewed *sulks*)

Reviewer: Thunderchild Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/10/06
Twin Bond by taniapretender
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Some say that blood ties are the strongest ones...




Well it's true.

Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Lyle, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Drama
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 683
Read Count: 5273
[Report This] Published: 21/04/06 Updated: 22/04/06


Title: Chapter 1: Now there's no doubt about it...

This has a promising start. I want to read more, please update soon!

Reviewer: Thunderchild Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/05/06
Truth, Dare, Promise by icd
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Somewhere along the way, the motives had shifted...

Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Lyle, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Drama
Warnings: Warning: Incest/Twincest, Warning: Sexual Content

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 4670
Read Count: 1423
[Report This] Published: 03/07/06 Updated: 03/07/06


Title: Chapter 1: Truth, Dare, Promise

No wonder I have my work cut out for me to convert Jacs... this was just too good. Evil you, not only cos this was sooooo good but you killed Parker. Haven't I warned you about bumping off one of our twins? It puts an abrupt end to twinnie. *sighs* Oh well. 

As promised last night, I read today... 
and awful me didn't leave a review until now. Woops 



Author's Response: *snickers* yeah, bumping off one of the kiddies isn't nice... but sometimes, it's gotta be done ;)

Reviewer: Thunderchild Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/07/07
Summary:

What price will someone pay for what they want?



Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker, Original Character, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Drama
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 73989
Read Count: 70656
[Report This] Published: 04/09/06 Updated: 04/10/14


Title: Chapter 1: Jarod Is Back

Great start to this you guys. Keep it up.
Parker has the chair... hmm, I bet that didn't go down too well with Lyle.


Author's Response: thanks a lot yay, and poor Lyle, he would not be happy sharing

Reviewer: Thunderchild Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/09/06
Tell Him by Sofy
Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Miss Parker's thoughts about Tommy during 'Til Death Do Us Part.

Categories: Season 4
Characters: Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Drama
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 324
Read Count: 1082
[Report This] Published: 06/09/06 Updated: 06/09/06


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was very nicely done, a nice insight to Parker's thoughts when Jarod dropped the bombshell that he knew Thomas too. Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: Thunderchild Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/09/06
Nomathemba by icd
Rated: PG starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Things we see, things we do.
This is a contribution to the Pretender Remix Ficathon


Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Ethan, Lyle, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 900
Read Count: 901
[Report This] Published: 18/11/06 Updated: 18/11/06


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ohhhhhhhhh, me likes this alot!! Well done! It was a nice twist to mine - the third person POV from Ethan. I didn't have Ethan in mine, but that is just a technicality, I doubt anyone will notice. Well done!! (and yay me, I'm the first one to review!)

Author's Response: *bows* thank you. And generally, adding Ethan made no change to the original since the happenings didn\'t change. He might be there in your story as well... watching from the sidelines. 
Anyway, glad you like.

Reviewer: Thunderchild Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/11/06
Dioscuri by icd
Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Was it gifted? Special?

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: Drama, General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1357
Read Count: 514
[Report This] Published: 25/11/06 Updated: 25/11/06


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love you, hate you? *snorts* Well, that question isn't even worth askin'. This is a real foul-mood improver... me loves it! Our twins doing something naughty *snickers* Cue Daddy Parker having a heart attack. Glad I didn't read it last night - bad mood would have butchered the enjoyment of reading this. YAY YOU!!

Author's Response: *bows* thanks, I'm glad you like it so much

Reviewer: Thunderchild Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/11/06
Summary: It's Christmas and Miss Parker's neighbor is getting on her nervs. Then she gets a phone call from an old friend.

Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Comedy
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2921
Read Count: 3537
[Report This] Published: 25/12/06 Updated: 01/01/07


Title: Chapter 2: The twelve Santas of Christmas

Jarod to the rescue to get rid of the horrorshow on the front lawn. He does have his uses *grins*

This was very good. You did a great job on it. Loved the humorous elements. Like the pliers bit in the previous chapter. Hee hee. You would value your life cheaply to be Parker's neighbor and behaving like that.



Author's Response:

Thanks Kat!

I tried my best to make the humor funny, glad it worked ^^

Reviewer: Thunderchild Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/06/07
A test story by jacs
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 346]
Summary: jsut testing to see if it works...

Categories: Poetry
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 364
Read Count: 90795
[Report This] Published: 19/01/07 Updated: 03/07/08


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Such delightful wickedness in this story, I'm sure you need to be putting a higher rating. Surely, you can't be getting away with merely a PG rating!!

Such spell-binding complexity, you must give us a chapter four soon! 'Hey Hey' and then 'testing as admin'. What stroke of genius will you favour us with next?!

Author's Response: You might be right about the rating, it is a tightrope I am walking ad will have to be very careful in future chapters.

Reviewer: Thunderchild Signed
Date: 21/01/07
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Truly we stand in the shadow of the greatest writing genius of our time. All bow down, we are not worthy to be favoured with your brilliance!

It had everything in so few words: suspense, intrigue, humor, sadness.

I am humble in the shadow of brilliance!

'yay!!!!' sums it up entirely - genius!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your encoragement. I am incredibly moved by the strong support I am recieving and it is keeping me motivated. Your words mean so much to me,

Reviewer: Thunderchild Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23/01/07
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

'Need a break'.

That just says it all, doesn't it? Pure genius! And I'm sure you cannot be getting away with putting such a risqué fic under such a low rating. You shouldn't get away with putting this stunning piece of writing under anything less than an R rated fic!

How you can jam so much into a fic with so few words is simply astounding. We stand in the shadow of genius. This chapter had everything; angst, humor, drama. And the sudden loss of a character was such a shock after you hid your intentions for so long!

Well done!
My goal is to write something as spellbinding as this mammoth piece of fiction! I don't know how you find the time to write something of this caliber and juggle all of your other responsibilities.

Author's Response: If you like Thunderchild, I could perhaps help you achieve such writing greatness as well. Time is always a pressing issue when writing something of this magnitude, but as they say, where there's a will, there's a way.

Reviewer: Thunderchild Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/01/07
Title: Chapter 9: New bug

I cannot believe that I have missed so much action in this story! So much intense and raw animalistic emotion. You're seriously pushing the boundaries of how far you can push the limits imposed by the rating system.

You're not just pushing the limits, you're smashin' them!

Something you're trying to tell us with this linking of another story? Perhaps some subliminal message about the word 'Entropy' and its meaning? A sneak peek of what's to come?

I think its time you had a chat with Sydney. This unparalleled writing is taking a toll on you: fantasying about Brootsie. Oh well, it was bound to happen - all the genius minds end up crackin' under the strain of such creativeness.

Are you going to remain on the outside of a padded cell long enough to post another installment? Can you keep up this supreme caliber of writing before you finally lost your marbles?

Author's Response: OMG what a reveiw. I am thinking after that effort, YOU should do the next chapter. There is no way i could live up to that one. And you are right, the toll is weighing on me, it might be time to sit back for a little bit.

Reviewer: Thunderchild Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/03/07
Title: Chapter 10: ARRRRGGGGGGHHHHH!!!!

I think the title of this chapter says it all: 'ARRRRGGGGGGGHHHHHHH!!!!' Everyone is suffering in this angst-charged chap with Africa comin' to town. Oh-ho!

The strain of such genius is clearly beginning to show. How you suffer for your art.

Author's Response: The price to pay is always high, but it is a sacrifice we all must be willing to pay.

Reviewer: Thunderchild Signed
Date: 20/03/07
Title: Chapter 13: Broots, you are soooo talented!

*grimaces* We shall employee Lyle's policy here - don't ask, don't tell. Please don't ever tell... mental-images are all very disturbing and none of them require confirmation.

You cannot be getting away with having this as PG-rating. Sooner or later, someone is going to catch up with you, and you're going to get in loads of trouble. Possibly Jarod, righting a wrong with the misuse of rating systems. Hmm... the Tower will need to lay a trap for him.

Author's Response: But me WANTS TO TELL. *wails at everyones imploring me to shut up*

Reviewer: Thunderchild Signed
Date: 25/03/07
Title: Chapter 14: Lookie Lookie

Spammer bastards bombarding the shoutbox.... emails not working. Communication is cut, rendering you vulnerable. The Centre are planning to strike!!!! They have left their mark on you!!!

And I wasn't notified! *growls* Must have a word with Lyle.

Author's Response: Consider this your official notification. And death to all moronic spamming bastards!

Reviewer: Thunderchild Signed
Date: 09/04/07
Title: Chapter 15: Broots is my hero

*pouts* No imminant Centre attack? Oh meanie.... I got all my traps setup for nothing.

Is your genius mind perhaps trying to tell us something by using these pictures? Symbol + Broots + emo thumbs up = haven't a clue.

Chapter 16 will hold more clues for the latest mystery sweeping through your genius mind.
(my tinymce window has a scrollbar as I type, so if review is weird looking that's why)
(some tinymce formatting as promised) 



Author's Response: Sorry, no attack this time, but perhaps i could organise something for an upcoming chappie.

Reviewer: Thunderchild Signed
Date: 09/04/07
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

left

center

right

 Nice pattern there bold italic underline

That should just about cover everything.... 

 

 

Author's Response: I believe you missed strikethru  lmao

Reviewer: Thunderchild Signed
Date: 09/04/07
Title: Chapter 16: New feature

*cringes* I do wish you wouldn't call him that... that name means bad mental images. If I wake up screaming, I'm blaming RaChell, she pointed me in this direction.

*thinks* No, nothing creative to say for this one.... I'll only say this: if the calibre of your creative genius drops, you will be poked with a pointy stick. (very healthy review count you're getting though)

Author's Response:

Sorry, dont want those unpleasant mental images do we?

And i thought RaChell was in charge of the pointy stick, what happened to your cattle prod? 

Reviewer: Thunderchild Signed
Date: 15/05/07
Title: Chapter 20: Time To Choose

*blinks* What in the heck are you doing with your test story? It's taking on another life.... 20 chapters of evilness that you have managed to sneak under a grossly inadequate rating for so long.

BTW, testing review notifications. 

Reviewer: Thunderchild Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23/06/07
Summary: stuck in a situation with little means of escape

Categories: Challenges
Characters: Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None
Challenges: #3 10 Word Challenge

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 121
Read Count: 1936
[Report This] Published: 06/03/07 Updated: 06/03/07


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

*scratches head* Confused as hell.
Taking a guess, I'm thinking something about Catherine? Gut tells me something about Parker, but that is too obvious, so I'm going the less obvious one.
Well done!!!

Author's Response: hee hee
Oh, wow, I even managed to confuse you!!! YAY!!!
And: no, sorry, try again

Reviewer: Thunderchild Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/03/07