We all just want some ANSWERS.
"I run. You chase. What if... we didn't?"
Still loving it, especially the part where Parker tells Jarod not to let the Centre win. I just hope he'll listen to her.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Another great chapter, definitely keeps me waiting for more. Nice twist with Jarod designing Catherine's escape plan. Can't wait to see what comes next.
Thanks for sharing!
This chapter was well worth the wait. I like the interaction between and characterization of Jarod and Miss Parker on Day 6. But I'm curious about what Jarod has in mind now. Lyle had better watch out.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Great chapter, especially the interaction between Jarod and Miss Parker on Day 7. I have to agree with KatieQ, congrats to the "non-lame way" of incorporating the scrolls.
Thanks for sharing!
Nice chapter, great characterisation and intriguing little hints. I hope you'll update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you verrrrry much. I'm working on it. ;)
Great chapter, especially the interaction between J and MP. If Sydney's waking up now, does that mean we'll see more of him in the next chapters?
Anyway, thanks for sharing. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Argh, I can't believe it's taken me this long to realize there's been an update!
Great chapter as usual, loved the interaction between MP and J and MP and Lyle. But you do realize that you have to give us the next chapter really fast now? I mean you can't give us so many hints about what's still to come and then just leave us hanging. So hurry up already, willya ;-)
Okay, now I've finally realized there's been an update. The chapter was well worth the wait. I loved the part where Margaret walked in on Jarod and Miss Parker and the reunion of mother and son. And what is Mr. Parker up to now?
I'm looking forward to the next chapter, hopefully I won't have to wait a few months again ;-)
Reviewer: Cathy Signed Interesting beginning. So, where are you going with this? Please update soon!
Reviewer: Cathy SignedShe's not dead, right? Tell me she's not dead! What's Jarod going to do now? Who put the bomb in the office in the first place?
See, you need to update soon, or I might die of curiosity ;-)
Other than that: very well written, especially Broots' thoughts on Miss Parker.
Reviewer: Cathy Signed Careful, I could get used to these fast updates ;-) Very well written with a nice twist at the end. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: Cathy Signed Phew, good to see she's still alive. So, who wants her dead and what has she been up to these past few months?
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Reviewer: Cathy Signed Bounty hunter? Now that was unexpected. But Jarod and Miss Parker working together: I foresee trouble - or bloodshed ;-)
Thanks for sharing!
Reviewer: Cathy Signed Thanks for the fast update. So, are they going to open a bounty hunter office together ;-)
I'm looking forward to the next part.
Reviewer: Cathy Signed
Okaaaay, now I really need a cold shower ;-)
Very well written, as always. Thanks for sharing. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: Cathy Signed Very nice chapter, very well written. Keep them coming ;-)
Reviewer: Cathy Signed Mr. Parker is still alive? Now that doesn't sound good. I'm curious to see what comes next.
Re. Miss Parker's first name: Wasn't there an episode where we see a Christmas ornament that MP made as a child signed with "M. Parker"? If her first name doesn't start with M, I'd say it's strange to sign anything as a child with anything but the initials of your first name. But then again, I normally don't really care what her first name is ;-)
Anyway, thanks for sharing and I hope school doesn't keep you too far away from this story.
They really do know how to hurt each other, don't they? And you manage to make Mr. Parker seem almost likeable.
Thanks for sharing!
Reviewer: Cathy SignedOkay, I take back what I said about Mr. Parker in my last review. He's still as horrible as always! But I liked the conversation between Miss Parker and her father. Nice twist with her baby brother being in the house.
And in case you hadn't noticed: yes, I'm sill here and am waiting for more ;-)
Oh yes, Mr. Parker is up for the "Daddy of the year" award!
So, how will Jarod's family react to Miss Parker and the kid? I hope RL lets you get back to updating in the not too distant future.
Thanks for sharing!
Reviewer: Cathy Signed So sad and beautiful at the same time. Loved it!
Reviewer: Cathy Signed Interesting beginning and nice characterization of Miss Parker. So when can we expect the next chapter?
Author's Response: Thanks Cathy, i am glad you like it and as i said to Tinanaz, I am waiting on on eof my betas' to get chap 2 back to me (its done, she just double checking it) so no more than a week
Great chapter. You did a very good job with describing Jarod's emotional state. Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: Thanks Cathy, i am glad you like the chap and you are most welcome for me sharing lol
Considering that you just killed off Jarod you really shouldn't get any chocolates. But I think you earned them anyway with your characterisations and imagery. Very well done!
Thanks for sharing.
RaChell, don't take away all the chocolates! If we keep the writer and her muse on a permanent sugar high maybe we'll get a another Christmas story with a happy ending.
And if you have to confiscate the sweets you could at least share them with me!