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Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
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Word count: 364
Read Count: 179180
Just one word: Shiny!
BOOO for spammers. Maybe Miss Parker could lend you her 9mm?
Yes, we kill all spammers. Think i got it fixed though, got Jarod to build me a firewall to keep the bastards out.
We like shiny things !
Reviewer: Cathy SignedRaChell, there's nothing wrong with Broots, I like him too. But I like Sydney even more - though I don't quite see how he could help here ;-) Besides, don't you think it's getting boring/lonely for Broots if he doesn't get some company in this story soon?
Hey Cathy, thanks for siding with Broots :d And i made the next one sort of Sydney .
ps, can you pls let me know if you get an email regarding this repsonse, i am trying to fix the emails.
And i cant really do that without any feedback (mwhaahhaaa)
thanks
Reviewer: Cathy SignedYay, Sydney's back! You've just made my day. And I'm sure he'll care about your e-mails ;-)
I only hope that this isn't just a cameo.
Re. the review response: yep, got the e-mail and the link worked.
Sydney is back and will stay hopefully. I am needing some refuge. LOL
thanks so much Cathy for letting me know about the emails.
I think I can now tentatively say that this is working once agian (hope i just didnt jinx myself, lol)
Reviewer: Cathy SignedIf Jarod's with you that would explain why he didn't answer when RaChell wanted to send him to me last week. (RaChell, the guy can't be Argyle, I just dropped him off at the airport ;-))
For very selfish reasons I'm hoping that Jarod can't solve all your problems or this story would be finished. I'm hoping for an update soon.
Okay, I know I asked for a quick update, but I never thought you'd take it this literally. Wow!
About the new feature: what's the difference between Pretender or Centre affiliated? What does it mean? (Probably a stupid question, but I ask it anyway...)
Are you going to make Miss Parker jealous? Watch out for her infamous 9mm ;-)
It doesn't really mean anything I guess, just thought it was cool!! Some people are PTB's at heart and are on Miss Parker's side, so i guess that makes them Centre-affiliates, and others are on Jarod's side, so they woudl be Pretender-affiliates.
Might be some more quick updates too as i sort thru the new problems update created and there are a few new features i would like to try to get working, so watch this space :D
Reviewer: Cathy SignedWow that really was a long chapter. No wonder Jarod had no time for me when he's on a mass pretend for you. And Miss Parker stalking Jarod? I can see some action coming up ;-)
RaChell, of course I would have preferred Jarod, but Argyle was not half bad either. At least we had fun ;-)
Reviewer: Cathy SignedNo, you did not "disgrace the long honored tradition" of the story, yours was a worthy addition. But you so do not want to know what "vacation" and "drag Jarod along with her" does to my imagination ;-)
Author's Response:
Indeed it was worthy and I will be careful with him I promise.
Reviewer: Cathy Signed
You know, normally I'd say a one word chapter is much to short to be called a decent update, but in your case... Wow, what a powerful word ;-)
Does that mean you've discovered our favourite characters and are bringing them back so that we can look forward to longer updates in the future?
Wow, that's what I'd call a fast update. And such a long chapter to boot! Wow... just... wow ;-)
Reviewer: Cathy SignedWhere is that moron Broots? Hiding from your anger as any sane person would do in his shoes ;-) What did he do to you that you have to pull a Miss Parker on him?
Btw, lovely new default layout.
Reviewer: Cathy Signed
Like I told you before, simply hilarious, loved it. The poor characters, though, it's not very nice to "torture" them this much ;-)
That was a good story, you kept the two very much in character. Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: Thank You! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. And thanks for compliments re: the characters.
I don't know who I feel more sorry for - Jarod and Miss Parker or the muse! Great sequel that has me in stitches. Thanks for sharing!
P.S. Will there be another chapter?
Thanks Cathy :) Personally I feel more sorry for the writer, but that's mostly because I'm a little too much like her.
As for another chapter, I'm not sure. RaChell mentioned something about it, so if you want a sequel, give her a nudge.
Poor Broots. Will he ever attempt to pick up another woman after that?
That was very well written. Nice to read a story that focuses on a supporting character for a change.
This was great, I can practically see Broots looking over his shoulder every two minutes. And if I were Sydney I would be really worried that MP is coming after me too. So, will there be another chapter?
Author's Response:
Thanks Cathy! I'm happy you enjoyed it. :) I didn't plan to do another chapter tho'!
And guess what? Now it lets me use the picture I got from you!
Reviewer: Cathy SignedI've just caught up with the story and you've got me hooked. I like the way you start in the present and then go back to the past to tell your story up to the present. You definitely have to update this soon!
Reviewer: Cathy SignedHey, where is the next chapter? You do realize that you can't just stop here and leave me hanging, don't you?
If you can't tell already: You've got me hooked and I need more!
Wow, that were some powerful descriptions you have there, great way of storytelling.
So, what deal does MP have for Lyle? Do I really want to know? Can I shamelessly beg for another fast update?
Well, what can I say? Here's some "elixir of life" for your muse. First of: thank you for the dedication. The chapter was definitely worth the wait. But if I were Miss Parker, I would have shot baby Kyle instead of Jarod - several times already!
Poor Jarod and Miss Parker; first a muse with a crush on Jarod, now one who wants to put Miss Parker in leather. What's next?
Hm, Jarod in tiny boxers... I need a cold shower!
So, is there going to be another chapter? Who do I have to poke?
Glad you enjoyed it Cathy! I was afraid I'd find Argyle on my front doorstep if I didn't hurry up and post it. I know you would not hesitate to send him over with a picket sign.
If there's another chapter it probably won't be from me. I'm busy working on Sleepyhead 8 and a half. Jacs has graciously recinded her threat of cutting off fingers and toes for every 100 words I go over. Personaly I think she has been hanging around with Lyle too long.
Reviewer: Cathy Signed
That was so sad! But beautifully written anyway. Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response:
Hello, Again!
Thank you so very much.
Anna
Reviewer: Cathy SignedWhy do I get the feeling that I shouldn't read your stories in one go ;-) If I weren't in such a good mood today I would probably be crying my eyes out.
Congratulations on another beautiful piece of work.
Hi Cathy!
Thank you so much for great review. I write a lot of sad "Pretender" stories. Thanks for reading.
Hey, is something wrong with the image feature? Can't upload my pic of J and MP here.
Anyway, again, thank you.
Anna
Reviewer: Cathy SignedA very good beginning, very realistic way to describe Miss Parker's feelings. I hope there will be more soon.
Reviewer: Cathy SignedDonoterase - what were they all thinking?
I have to agree with RaChell. Actually, I don't know what to say. Liked the way you skipped between points of view.
Will there be more soon?
Reviewer: Cathy SignedWe all just want some ANSWERS.
"I run. You chase. What if... we didn't?"
Nice beginning, good idea to go back and forth in time. I'm interested to see where you're taking us and am looking forward to the next chapter.
Thanks for sharing.
Cathy
A very nice chapter. The characters are spot on. I love your Miss Parker in snappy mode.
Thanks for sharing!