Penname: Mverderber [Contact]

Real name: Maria Verderber

Member Since: 01/10/24

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Wrecked by AngelWings
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 30]
Summary: Miss Parker and her team find Jarod, but get more than they bargained for.

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Broots, Jarod, Miss Parker, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 11520
Read Count: 30755
[Report This] Published: 20/05/05 Updated: 07/06/05


Title: Chapter 1: Plane Crazy

I read all you stories. They re very good. You have the ability to write a complete short story with a complicated plot and fully developed characters. I prefer stories that are 80,000 to 100,000 words, but I really enjoyed you re short stories. I hope you one day write a long fanfic for the pretender. I d love to read it.

 Reviewer: Mverderber Signed
Date: 19/12/24
Title: Chapter 1: Plane Crazy

I read all you stories. They re very good. You have the ability to write a complete short story with a complicated plot and fully developed characters. I prefer stories that are 80,000 to 100,000 words, but I really enjoyed you re short stories. I hope you one day write a long fanfic for the pretender. I d love to read it.

 Reviewer: Mverderber Signed
Date: 19/12/24
Title: Chapter 1: Plane Crazy

I read all you stories. They re very good. You have the ability to write a complete short story with a complicated plot and fully developed characters. I prefer stories that are 80,000 to 100,000 words, but I really enjoyed you re short stories. I hope you one day write a long fanfic for the pretender. I d love to read it.

 Reviewer: Mverderber Signed
Date: 19/12/24
Title: Chapter 1: Plane Crazy

I read all you stories. They re very good. You have the ability to write a complete short story with a complicated plot and fully developed characters. I prefer stories that are 80,000 to 100,000 words, but I really enjoyed you re short stories. I hope you one day write a long fanfic for the pretender. I d love to read it.

 Reviewer: Mverderber Signed
Date: 19/12/24
Title: Chapter 1: Plane Crazy

I read all you stories. They re very good. You have the ability to write a complete short story with a complicated plot and fully developed characters. I prefer stories that are 80,000 to 100,000 words, but I really enjoyed you re short stories. I hope you one day write a long fanfic for the pretender. I d love to read it.

 Reviewer: Mverderber Signed
Date: 19/12/24
Title: Chapter 5: Fall

Great story, I hope you finish it

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Date: 20/12/24
Title: Chapter 5: Fall

Great story, I hope you finish it

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Date: 20/12/24
Title: Chapter 5: Fall

Great story, I hope you finish it

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Date: 20/12/24
Title: Chapter 5: Fall

Great story, I hope you finish it

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Date: 20/12/24
Title: Chapter 5: Fall

Great story, I hope you finish it

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Date: 20/12/24
Title: Chapter 5: Fall

Great story, I hope you finish it

Very funny

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Date: 20/12/24
In Pursiut Of Happiness by jojarod50
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]
Summary: Jarod has been captured and things are going from bad to worse. Will he ever find happiness..

Categories: Season 3
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 220675
Read Count: 556577
[Report This] Published: 14/08/05 Updated: 14/09/06


Title: Chapter 1: Part 1

Awesome story!!!! 

I would so love to read more from you. I have read over 175 stories an this is by far my favorite story. 

I wish you would write some more!

 Reviewer: Mverderber Signed
Date: 01/10/24
Title: Chapter 1: Part 1

Hi again, I know it's been years since you added to this story but you have one huge fan that d love to see it finished. I've read it multiple times and I d love another 50 chapters it's the opus of pretender stories. I ve now read over 200 stories yours is still number 1 in my book. 

I have some ideas about where the story could go if you ever start writing again

 Reviewer: Mverderber Signed
Date: 10/10/24
Title: Chapter 1: Part 1

Hi again, I know it's been years since you added to this story but you have one huge fan that d love to see it finished. I've read it multiple times and I d love another 50 chapters it's the opus of pretender stories. I ve now read over 200 stories yours is still number 1 in my book. 

I have some ideas about where the story could go if you ever start writing again

 Reviewer: Mverderber Signed
Date: 10/10/24
Title: Chapter 1: Part 1

Hi, I m sorry this was your only story. It's truly amazing it's your first. You have a wonderful talent. I hope you keep writing because it's great!!!

I d love to read more of your work

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Date: 10/04/25
Intolerable cruelty by Morgan
Rated: NC 18 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 15]
Summary: How cruel can not touching be? And how much do you want it?

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 4470
Read Count: 2989
[Report This] Published: 17/06/07 Updated: 21/10/07


Title: Chapter 1: Intolerable cruelty

Oh come on surly you could have finished this It's a short story!

 Reviewer: Mverderber Signed
Date: 28/06/25
Title: Chapter 1: Intolerable cruelty

Oh come on surly you could have finished this It's a short story!

 Reviewer: Mverderber Signed
Date: 28/06/25
Reconstruction by MarieL
Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 26]
Summary:

Jarod's family races to free him after he's recaptured by the Centre, while Gemini experiences freedom for the first time.



Categories: Alternate Universe, Season 3
Characters: All the characters, Angelo, Emily, The Clone
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: Warning: Language

Series: Telepathy series
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 88424
Read Count: 4454
[Report This] Published: 18/07/15 Updated: 11/01/26


Title: Chapter 1: Wherever I may find her

 Great, I hope you continue writing Pretender stories.

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Date: 12/03/25
Title: Chapter 1: Wherever I may find her

 Great, I hope you continue writing Pretender stories.

 Reviewer: Mverderber Signed
Date: 12/03/25
Title: Chapter 1: Wherever I may find her

 Great, I hope you continue writing Pretender stories.

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Date: 12/03/25
Title: Chapter 1: Wherever I may find her

Great, I hope you continue writing Pretender stories.

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Date: 12/03/25
Title: Chapter 1: Wherever I may find her

Great, I hope you continue writing Pretender stories.

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Date: 12/03/25
Title: Chapter 1: Wherever I may find her

Great, I hope you continue writing Pretender stories.

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Date: 12/03/25
Title: Chapter 1: Wherever I may find her

Thank you for the update, I m loving the story!!! Can't wait for the next installment:)

 Reviewer: Mverderber Signed
Date: 01/04/25
Title: Chapter 1: Wherever I may find her

Thank you for the update, I m loving the story!!! Can't wait for the next installment:)

 Reviewer: Mverderber Signed
Date: 01/04/25