Twincest. With a twist!
Christ on a cucumber! Is it hot in here or is it just your story? I think it's both. Mirage? I mean.. just... phew... damn baby. This is bloody brilliant. You are brilliant. Siblings. I don't even care. I don't even blame them.
"Moral atrophy felt strangely righteous"
"logic defied logic"
"the pieces fit- even if they weren't s upposed to"
You are a genius, a damn word smith.
What the hell are you doing writing fanfic? You could be living in a McMansion writing best selling novels that are made into movies... and I even know who could act in those movies based on your novels.. can't get enough of the cast of the pretender. get my hint? I love your stories. You're so remarkably talented. Sequel please?
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Jarod has an epiphany. (payback doesn't have to be a bitch)
Oooo! That's right. Parker kissed Jarod when they were children. He still hasn't kissed her back. He owes her one. He owes so much more than that, too. This is crazy amazing. I thought I had a favorite story by you but every time I read another story you've written my favorite changes. Sequel please?
Reviewer: Renea Collins Signed Jarod wants something more.
A "trifle?" Oh, my god you don't even know how amazing you are do you? This is brilliant, Mirage. I'm thinking that Jarod didn't leave did he? He's still in the room with her when he says "we deserve more."
We deserve more of your stories, Mirage.
Reviewer: Renea Collins Signed 
A crime scene, a chance meeting, two people transcending the lives chosen for them. Jarod POV. S.M.U.T.
Would love to see more of this too. Sequel!
Reviewer: Renea Collins Signed Jarod is implicated in a spate of homicides.
Oh I love this Mirage. Rich in detail and descriptive work, really sharp writing, incredible pacing and action, forward movement throughout and a keen sense of time's passage. The grammar is beautiful, your prose is beautiful, the transitions are awesome, the characters ARE the characters I know and love well, and plausibility is perfect. A beautiful ending that is made more beautiful by being a beginning. Tears in my eyes at the beauty. You've honed your skills to perfection. Congratulations. I've enjoyed this immensely.
Reviewer: Renea Collins Signed So yeah I signed up finally cos my reviews were being deleted.. you didn't delete me did you? I left several reviews for this and Lacunae last week and they are vanished today so yeah just want you to please update. Really missing you. Don't abandon us please.
I didn't delete you, Renea-- not intentionally. There have been some spammers- it's annoying because they increase the review counts of my fics (and I presume those of other writers as well). I apologize if in my haste to remove the spam your reviews were deleted. I have no plans to abandon anyone. Thank you reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Renea Collins Signed So addicting, so beautiful written. I love it. Thank you for keeping them all alive for us!
Reviewer: Renea Collins Signed A past transgression jeopardizes Sydney's life.
Right this isn't their fault and as long as they don't have children it shouldn't matter at all. You know what? You're the only author to do this [and plausibly] and the only one to delve into shifty G and his crimes. That was completely glossed over during the TV series. Parker basically accused him and he denied it and called it teenagers messing around and used her "twisting" of facts as ammunition to call her a liar about Raines too, but I believe her. Jarod does, too. He probably met Guissepe for that reason. I think it had little to do with Raines. Knowing a child by his works or whatever that bible verse was.... it was about Gusissepe I think now in hindsight and his crimes and hiding behind the church. It all makes sense now. No one ever wrote about it and I never thought about it. But you have. Maybe Jarod was trying to break the religious curse eve then. You really make me think. Please continue.
Hi, Renea Collins. I tend to agree when I try to seriously consider the scenario, but, ugh, god, I don't like the scenario.
I agree with what you're saying about the digit breaking moment, too. It did sound like Parker was accusing broken-finger dude of sexual assault.
And, yeah, that bible verse part was perhaps about knowing broken-finger dude by his works, maybe Jarod was sending a message to Parker that he believed her. Huh. Weird.
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
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Please don't forget this one... or any of them. Please?
I haven't forgotten, Renea. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Renea Collins Signed Squee! More. More, more, more. Please? Please update all of your amazing stories.
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There must be more. Now. Please. OMG. I love it.
Reviewer: Renea Collins Signed I love it but hey hey yay what's not to love?!
Your descriptive work is amazing, the prose is rich, the story is brilliantly plotted, Jarod is back inside the Centre, the dialogue is 😎 awesome, the transitions are seamless, the characterisations are pretender perfect, Jarod is back inside the Centre, and ooooh Jarod is back inside the Centre.
Did I mention that Jarod is back inside the Centre????!!!!
More please soon please?
*BOWS TO QUEEN MIRAGE*
Remember not to use a straw if you had wisdom teeth removed. Dry socket is a pain...worse than the usual already severe pain.
Rest rest rest.
Reviewer: Renea Collins Signed Finished business.
Brilliant. It took me a minute to put it all together. You're a master word smith and author. I'm so impressed.
Reviewer: Renea Collins Signed A last resort
Ooh, squee! I was missing you something awful and I'm so glad you're back...and back with a new action-packed masterpiece. I'm so addicted. More please?
I missed you too. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Renea.
Reviewer: Renea Collins Signed Thank you for updating quickly and for continuing to write for us. My God you're good. Every word so well placed and the story so brilliantly told. I'm amazed. Thank you for also replying to my reviews. You're the best!
That's rather generous. Thank you for reading and reviewing, Renea.
Reviewer: Renea Collins Signed Holy wows! I love it. I love all of it. You are the best and the one I always come back to. Your stories are so engaging and have this mood and energy that feels the same as it feels when I watch the DVDs, that feeling of home, only you've given them character growth and are progressing them along through the story. Please continue. I can't get enough.
Reviewer: Renea Collins Signed Hey this is awesome and didn't go the way I thought it would. You know the characters well and flesh them out perfectly and your stories are plausible and mature. I always hope Parker will have sex with Jarod and sometimes you give it and sometimes you leave me hoping you'll give it next time . There is a sequel you're working on so I place my request for sex now . Please. You write sex tastefully, accurately, descriptively, and so hot! 🔥 🥵 🔥💯🥵
Sex? Okay, I'll keep that in mind. There are some stories that contain that stuff here. I've even scribbled a few of them. Trying to scribble out the same type of thing over and over becomes challenging. There are only so many ways to scribble out the act of intercourse. It's easier to simply scribble two people talking about having had sex already and getting that out of the way to focus on some semblance of a plot, but then the reader tends to not like that, and I'm understating. I'll consider your thoughts. Thank you for reading and reviewing, Renea.
Reviewer: Renea Collins Signed This scribblet follows Asphyxia.
Exciting! This was intriguing and pleasantly dark Mirage. Good to see Catherine. I think Parker would retreat into her mother's embrace and can't blame her. I hope Lyle pays. I can't wait for this series to be all completed. I'm so excited. You never disappoint. More more more please please please and thank you so much.
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