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Out Of The Box by lizz
Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary: A farewell encounter involving Sydney and Jarod. Note: Whose death is for the reader to decide! I avoided using names to allow the reader to determine which one of these characters is out of the box! In other words, sort out to whom all those "he"s, "him"s, and "his"es refer. (You may have to conduct a sim of your own :>)

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Vignette
Warnings: Warning: Character Death

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 685
Read Count: 1969
[Report This] Published: 12/05/05 Updated: 12/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Out Of The Box

Dah-ling, Lizz, when did you write this? And why have I not seen it until now?! Well, of course I liked it! It was well-written, as always. I thought it flowed rather nicely, and using the box of mementos was a good way to bind the story together. Very simple; I like that. My only dislike was the sudden religious insert at the end. Maybe it's just me, but I never really noticed much a religious belief from either character. . . And it certainly almost never came up on the actual show (except for those two episodes that I can remember off-hand: Miss P. and her preacher man and the KKK episode from the fourth season). Otherwise, 'twas lovely and I quite enjoyed it. :)

Reviewer: chopsticks Signed starstarstar
Date: 24/05/05