Reviews For Keep Cool Parker
Title: Part 9

Hi just read your story it was good.

Reviewer: Katescats Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/01/15 06:54 am
Title: Part 1

Needs a lot of work. Poor plot line, poorly written, especially the opening. You have no reasons behind the character's actions, and Jarod wouldn't be stupid enough to date someone, especially not a woman with a child. AND he takes jobs to help people, he wouldn't just abandon his chosen target.

Reviewer: AcaciaJules Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13/01/10 05:14 am


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