In-between stories are a personal favorite of mine - even more than 'what ifs' and 'what happens next' - because they have to tie different stories and make sense in the end. That is not an easy thing to do, but the author did a pretty good job. That, combined with strong characterizations - even though there were some scenes that could use a little touch - and a fairly decent prose made this a very enjoyable story.
Author's Response:
Thanks. This was written so long ago. I'm glad you like it.
Reviewer: Joel Gomes Signed [Report This]Date: 07/12/13 06:32 pm
This is one of my fav. pretender fics. Read it about a year ago on another site and loved it.
Author's Response: Must have been Fanfic.net or some such place. I do have it posted several places. I'm really glad you like it so much.
Date: 04/03/07 03:25 pm