Hi just read your story it was very good. But what was the revelation she had to go?
Reviewer: Katescats Anonymous [Report This]Date: 28/12/14 10:25 pm
I really enjoyed reading this story but it desperately needs a conclusion - please continue and finish
Reviewer: Phoebe Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/04/08 08:17 pm
i loved this story.It was so enjoyable to read all it needs now is an conclusion.
Reviewer: dee Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/06/06 07:56 pm
Very good. The characters were mostly believable except some of the tertiary characters like Nicholas, Michele, Broots, and Debbie needed a little more rounding out to flesh out their characters. Our favorite psycho cannibal didn't do much except to walk on and off the stage when a villain needed to be in the scene. On the whole this story is pretty good. But reading the last leaves the reader wanting a good conclusion. I hope the author will heed the reviewers requests to wrap up this story.
Reviewer: Starclipper01 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/01/06 05:23 am
Hey I love this story please finish it. PLEASE
Reviewer: Emilia Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/07/05 02:34 am
great to have that story back at some place! enjoyed very much reading it back then! *goes to re-read*
Reviewer: jerseygirl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 13/05/05 09:11 am