Another dark story from Mirage. I still enjoy Wild Horses....I lost my breath when I learned it was Lyle kissing Jarod but in the context it's plausible because those two have danced around slash for a while and seemed like they were flirting more than fighting at times lol.
This one is even darker. You're a brave one, exploring the depths this way and what you came back with and shared with us is pretty freaking awesome Mirage. It's for sure a missing piece and you presented it like no other can. I want to read the rest. You always keep me coming back and you finish what you start. Thank you.Reviewer: Angela Penn Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/04/19 08:14 pm
I missed this one somehow? Don't even know how that is possible because I'm a devout follower of all things Mirage.? So this was one of the first stories you wrote and we're only just now reading it now why again? What else are you hiding? Why are you hiding these pieces from us? It's dark yes but it's brilliant and canon and plausible. I'd love more. As always brilliant Mirage.Reviewer: needlepoint Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/19 10:10 pm
Ooooh. So so very very dark. I was delaying reading Forces of Nature and Circles of Hell.. I hear there's rape and affairs and gaslighting oh my. Those aren't marked "nonconsensual sex" and I like that because rape is rape. I don't like the descriptive words nonconsensual sex. I also heard there was some mention of a same sex partnership involving Parker that was mentioned and I'm intrigued but still putting it off for a while. This was the perfect darkness including Lyle who is dark. I am curious how you'd write Jarod dark. I might not put it off. Jarod has always seemed so dark to me and got darker still through the series. Exquisite Mirage. I'm grateful for the recommendation the coworker gave me.Reviewer: Jia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/03/19 11:41 pm
Dark. So so dark and canon. Can I say how spot on perfect the characters are all written and fleshed out? You are the master. Your original characters fit with the ones we know. They are well developed and real enough to touch.
I had a shiver of excitement when Jarod entered and quickly subdued Lyle and resuscitated Miss Parker. Jarod vomiting and losing time was a stroke of genius. I think Jarod would be physically ill after seeing Sydney dead and after seeing what Lyle did to those woman. Jarod feels things deeply and takes this personal. He would blame himself for Sydney's death and everything that Lyle has done because he's the one that bought this Miss Parker's attention.
While you wrote this respectfully and we didn't "SEE" the rape you did something else that...wow. All I could say for half an hour was "Oh my god Oh my god."I still have chill bumps all over me. I haven't felt this emotionally upset by literature since reading Circles of Hell.
What you did began before Parker went back inside for the second woman. The way you talked about now and experiencing the future.. future "nows" and still having a foot in "then" you are saying it doesn't end really and rape isn't something people ever completely get over. There will always be the memory and no matter what the violation happened and nothing will change it. You said it all without saying the word rape. We know what happened without you describing it.
I was reminded of Circles Of Hell and Miss Parker trying to clean herself inside and outside. No one else writes about rape this way. No one else wants to tell the dirty truth. The truth is hard and sick. It can't be easy to write it.
You did that same thing again through Broots at the end, how a person would be changed forever after that. You make it so real and it's terrifying. It's amazing writing and it's disturbing because it's real.. it's so raw. It makes me worry about you. You go way deep... like you go to some other dimension.. a really dark and scary one. This is why you're my favorite author. So congrats on this and thank you for not writing rape like it's a little speed bump that can be forgiven. There's no driving on and forgetting. Thanks for giving us this haunting and scary missing piece of the Pretender puzzle.
Date: 11/01/19 10:22 pm
I don't see my review or the review I left you when I noticed the review was missing. I'm gonna try that again if it's ok. I was wrong about you. Very wrong about you. You don't hate Jarod at all do you? I think you were keeping them in character and that does mean that Parker will cut him up from time to time. It took reading your earlier work to completely understand and I know I don't know you and will still not completely understand but I'm glad I was wrong. You are perfect with twists and on the same level as Craig and Steve. I'm thankful you were asked to go back into the dark chamber for this earlier work. It's dark but it's in line with Lyle a predator that feasts on women and Parker promised Jarod she wouldn't let Lyle kill another woman. There's not much to say that hasn't been said. This is a solid chapter of Pretender caliber and a missing piece. You must continue this series and go into the details of how Parker copes and what role Jarod plays in that. I look forward to reading. You excel in all aspects but particularly in the aftermath of tradegy. Thank you for writing this and sharing your natural talents and skills with us. Ciao. Until next time.
Date: 02/01/19 09:56 pm
so ok I love this and I really love your writing style. You didn't write this too graphically but mostly gave us Lyle's perspective which is scary as hell and I've read some of your stories but they are lighter than this and I don't know how you can write both the light and slightly sweet and then go and write something so dark ... and I guess you wrote the darker stories first and then the lighter??... but it's so well written and you wrote it respectfully. I'm relieved that Parker is alive. Congrats! I want more!!
Thank you for reading and reviewing, MandyR lovesJarod.Reviewer: MandyR lovesJarod Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/01/19 10:58 pm
So not a fan of rape but I love the way you wrote this with respect and a sorta detachedness...and I'm not gonna bully you around about Michael T. Weiss anymore and meeting him., getting his autograph and selfie. I hope I didn't piss you off or anything. was just joking. You are way serious girl. The
beginning of this story narration and the part where now is amorphous omg! Such exquisite
I'm not angry (and I'm rarely serious). I didn't realize I was being bullied about Mr. Weiss, however, I realize that your desire for me to meet him is a testament to his personality/comportment, etc.
I will never approach anyone-- unless they require first aid; everyone that knows me know it's true. I've collided with a celebrity (cliché, yes, but nonetheless true, and rather painful). I've been introduced. I've been approached. I don't approach because I don't want to be approached. Being approached is startling, messy. There's always that first few seconds where one wonders if they're going to be mugged, assaulted, or invited to drinks in a ridiculously overpriced room.
Introductions are civil and tidy. Don't blame me if you can't properly introduce him to me.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Lorraine.Reviewer: Lorraina Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/12/18 01:58 am
So Christmasy Mirage lol. This isn't what I expected but should have been because when you wrote a Centre xmas story for us it ended with Parker filling Raines with lead. I should have expected this. It's amazing and you know I love the dark honey and so this was like the second thing you wrote after watching our beloved tv series?? It's freaking amazing like everything you write and in character. You do Lyle as well as you do Jarod and Miss Parker and the last two are really hard characters to get just right. Lyle seems easier and you nailed him too. I can see Parker cutting herself loose, trying to get free and that makes so much sense. She would never just give up. And Lyle doing that... I can totally see it happening. It's like a lost episode and a much needed one.
I have ?s. Lyle isn't in jail later on in Wild Horses and Jarod has to go back so.. please fill in the missing pieces for us. I know you have them in your Mirarchives so get them and post them. Please??! Sugar and cherries on top? Whipped cream on top? Ok... this is beginning to sound dirty. Just give us more. Hope the Holidays were nice for you.
Please update this. We need more.Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/12/18 09:36 pm
OOoh so dark. I love how you summon the dark so easily and make it so intriguing. I've always been afraid for MP where Lyle is concerned. He tried to kill her at least once before with a bomb so I can easily see this happening. Very dark and frightening. I'm glad Jarod saved her. And usually with you she either saves herself or needs saving FROM Jarod so... um. yeah. Perfect piece here. Adding to favorites and can't give it nothing but a 10.Reviewer: Archange Signed [Report This]
Date: 27/12/18 10:14 pm
Dark + Lyle =extra dark. Parker adds a deadly combination and she did promise she'd keep an eye on Lyle's homicidal exploits! You follow along with canon and give us the what ifs? that I never even considered. So plausible. You always deliver for us and I'm so thankful. Happy hols!!Reviewer: Gunner Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/12/18 11:33 pm
Congrats! Love how Parker tried to cut herself loose... never seen that done before and it's something she'd do...keep fighting always and never giving up and then Jarod questioning himself. Those two are so strong and you capture that and their characters. But ... Sydney. I know how much you love Syd but he's not innocent and sometimes seems evil. More of this. Love the dark.Reviewer: Melinda Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/12/18 06:20 pm
More please!Reviewer: Robert Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/12/18 11:52 pm
So you wrote darker stuff first but then shared the lighter stuff first. You are an enigma. The Pretender is unique in that it was often dark and occassionaly cheesy. kidnrapping is dark stuff. Catherine raped to have Ethan is dark. Catherines supposed suicide is dark. Catherine murdered by Raines dark. It's all dark.
THIS is plausible really realistic. As Parker began to lose it and die she couldn't think straight at all and that happens. She died probably thinking that Lyle raped her but he didn't but if she lives she will still probably be confused.
I love how you explored what we know about Lyle and what we know about Parker and Jarod. She promised Jarod she'd keep an eye on Lyle and she did and she nearly died because of it.
You know in television and movies that the heroine always saves herself or is saved or always takes out the bad guy and you kept it real. Parker dies. Jarod has to bring her back. This happens. Sometimes good loses and bad wins.
I love this. Not because of the dark but because it's in keeping with the show and plausible and well written. I don't always like what you write but I always love the way you write. Your style is so clean and professional. More. I need to know what happens next and how we go from here to Wild horses. What happens between? Please? Sugar on top? Cherry on top? Please? Happy Holidays Mirage!Reviewer: Christoph Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/12/18 01:52 am
More of this please. It's so dark just like the Pretender tv series was and it's good to see Lyle in all his pychopathic glory. I love how Jarod finally comes around to helping Lyle who is also like Kyle and Ethan. They are all similar even Jarod. Continue this exploration please. I want to read all of this completed soon.Reviewer: Ellen B. Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 23/12/18 05:51 pm
Dark chamber is dead on right girl. Dammmmnn. It is written brilliantly like everything you write and plausible as always and although it is dark and I don't usually go for the dark I love it. The quality of writing and level of professional, your craft, the wordsmith-manship ... all of it. I love it. You've been holding back all of this and hoarding it away in your Mirarchives but I need more. We don't really see Miss Parker in Wild Horses either but you sort of wrote as if she's still alive. You don't tell us about quality of life. I knew when I read Wild Horses something was different like the whole feel had changed to the way future and I like that would be perfect to film and then with flashbacks to this sequel or just mention of what happened. But Parker is alive and she wasn't raped and she will be okay eventually. I totally love that you continue Craig and Steve's style of showing us this through Broots' eyes and he's right. Nothing will be the same. Witnessing that would change anyone... and Sydney!! I can't believe it. I know you love him and I can see why you held back not sharing the major darkness so early in your sharing. You wrote it out and put it away. I can see that. It makes sense. I love Jarod's struggle with this... wanting to kill Lyle but needing to save Miss Parker. I still want Lyle to die. I wait eagerly for your next installments. I do ask that when it's all shared with us that you put in series format. Thanks for sharing with us. Happy Holidays and yule.Reviewer: Chloe Signed [Report This]
Date: 22/12/18 11:07 pm