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Title: Chapter 14

Speechless and thrilled.

"Parker had lingered over the stacks of monarch stationery, pushed her hand across each decorative flourish. Each word, too, was real enough to feel, trace; each one stung Parker's fingertips.

There was little surprise that the man was a best selling novelist. The contents of his novel, however, paled in comparison to what he'd written to her, and about her, and for his eyes only.

That'll teach me to fucking binge-read."

Thank you for all of your powerful words. You should be a best selling novelist too.

Reviewer: Jameason Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/05/22 07:09 pm
Title: Chapter 1


Parker read the usent letters... traced Jarod's handwriting... his words stung her fingers... ...






and you mentioned that he was a best selling novelist and your timing and word choices are ... perfect. Pretender Perfect. You're the best. Thank you so freaking much for writing and sharing. Wow. So much of the wow.

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing, Melinda.

Reviewer: Melinda Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/05/22 02:58 am
Title: Chapter 14

So addicting but also professionally written. I admit it was your stellar smut writing that got my attention but you bring substance too and depth and real quality story telling. I'm blown away. The words he'd written stung her fingers omg I can't even right now.

Margaret's a spit fire, love what you've done with her hair and that's she's not all conservative stiff homophobe garbage fire. She's Jarod's mom so she has to have an open mind and be accepting. I love all the backstory on all of the characters and how you flesh them out. Keep it up. Jarod and Parker can have sex too you know. That's nice too. hint hint

Reviewer: shauna Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/05/22 02:35 am
Title: Chapter 14

The resiling dear. Love! Congratulations!

Reviewer: Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/05/22 02:34 am
Title: Chapter 14

Merci Mirage! J'aime cela!!

Reviewer: Garbiella Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/05/22 09:20 pm
Title: Chapter 14

I am so here for this novella Mirage. You snatched me by the collar with that opening and kept that momentum to leave me craving more. What did here sort of levels the field between the different generation s. Parker slipped and fell and Ethan and Jarod worry that Margaret will fall so that's not something that only happens to elderly people. Parker's internal conflict with her father's voice is stunningly on the nose. She's like no you won't reject me because I reject you and I hope she can find some peace in that. I think she has to reject her father and hold him accountable to be a good mum. All parents are going to make some mistakes I can attest to that. My heart beams when you I read that rejecting one's children is the parenting fail, not the small accidental mistakes or that a child is gay or transgender. So real and so raw. I love that Margaret is the mom worth looking for and finding. What I love most is that Jarod loves it Parker and that part about his letters, Parker tracing his words with her finger and his words stinging her fingers. We don't need to know what he said just her reaction, the stinging, and this chaos and pain in her mind and heart says it all. I love how you tied his being a best selling novelist into his writing letters to her and that continuity you give us.....oh, I sooo adore this. Best thing I have ever read. Thank you so much!!!

Reviewer: lisa Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/05/22 08:46 pm
Title: Chapter 14

omg I need more already. I love this story and your writing.

Reviewer: Leslie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/05/22 05:57 pm
Title: Chapter 14

my review got cut off... Avery is a handful. What an intelligent and compassionate child she is! I love how Jarod was suddenly like sure calculas. anything but suturing. Margaret was perfect. I love that she wants to be Avery s grandma too. I'm glad to see Jarod finally realizing the damage he's done. I think parker would be scared to lose him again and for real.. he's an agent that's dangerous. this was a beautiful chapter and I'm so addicted. more?

Reviewer: Jen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/05/22 08:50 am
Title: Chapter 14

Bravo! I love that that song was playing. Stevie is the queen! You're keeping it real with miss Parker not quickly getting over the pain jarod caused be letting her believe he dead. just because he's alive and back doesn't mean the pain goes away or the feeling of betrayal. He hurt her and he can never undo that. I love the internal argument with Mr Parker and how she rejects him it just totally resonates with me. I love how supportive parker's family is, how much they love her. the entire interaction with Jarod trying to assess her was both accurate and hilarious and spot on.

Reviewer: Jen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/05/22 08:44 am
Title: Chapter 13

Please update all of your stories.

Reviewer: Gabriella Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/06/21 09:14 pm
Title: Chapter 13

please please update this soon. I love your writing voice, I love the characterisations. I love the dialog, and transistions. It's so professional. It's intelligent dialog. God it's like watching on the telly when I read you. i need more. So much more. Please.

Reviewer: Kayla Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/12/20 06:06 am
Title: Chapter 13


Is Parker playing hard to get? She should continue. It's driving Jarod nuts! He deserves it!!!

Seriously tho I think he's right. She is hurt, doesn't trust him. She's DEFO afraid to get hurt again. That means she loved him so much. It means that Jarod knows that Parker loved him so much. She knows that he knows. He knows that she knows that he knows. OMG. The shipper feelzgood. I need more. NOw.


Reviewer: Shay Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/11/20 04:58 pm
Title: Chapter 13

Hell yeah. Who cares what the neighbors think?!! More!! Please.

Reviewer: Leese Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/11/20 11:37 pm
Title: Chapter 13

Bravo! I'm thoroughly thrlled by the evolution of thsee characters and how you've brought them into this decade, this modern world with its sundry issues. You write them exceptionally well. I've never seen them written as well and I've read the novels. You know what that means. I know you don't want to hear it but you should be participating in the novel writing. You have a clear direction, the characterizations, and continuity all of which are key to superior story telling. Character placement. You excel at all of those. On top of all that you write out of this world amazing. Are you sure you don't have an editor? You transition seamlessly. Your word choices are brilliant. You know how to advance a story, how to open the chapter and close it in a way that keeps the reader wanting more. Most importantly you KNOW this series. You know everything about it. There are important plot points that I forgot all about. You build on an existing foundation. Except for Devil's Advocate which was alternate universe but even that was a similar premise... had to be similar because it was for this series of course. Please don't be mad or upset when I compliment you. I've given you the reasons why you should be writing the novels. That's reasonable I think and hope. I'd love to read more when you choose to share it with us. Thank you for writing. Congrats on another terrific chapter.


Reviewer: Michael Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/11/20 02:29 am
Title: Chapter 13

Parker took her kids to her abortion.. is just something so liberating and something she would have to do under those circumstances and I love that she isn't apologetic at all in owning her body and making decisions. Parker is going to do what she wants every time and we see it again here. 

It's plausible that she would have to break laws to survive. She chose Jeruselum because in and around Israel abortions are free. Israel is really progressive, right? But she had illegal cross into Mexico first and then hijack a corporate flight to get to Israel. I like the added backstory and time line that supports everything I already know. I love this story. It's not typical. You're the best bar none hands down. Your writing always blows me away. It's such a pleasure to read you Mirage. Congratulations.

Reviewer: Jameason Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/11/20 03:31 am
Title: Chapter 13

More. You got this!

Reviewer: Lisa Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/11/20 12:49 am
Title: Chapter 13

I do so love how you write Miss Parker and Jarod! And I'm very grateful that you update your stories.

Thank you as always!

Reviewer: twisted Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/11/20 12:27 am
Title: Chapter 13

Yay!! Parker did accept Jarod's invitation! I had hoped she would. I love the little evasive game she's playing. She doesn't give away anything except for that one little moment when she comforts him by touching his hand. Ooh!! Uh-uhhuh!! Mirage. You are the crack cocaine of fiction and I'm jonesing for another hit already. Hook a sista up.

Reviewer: Melinda Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/11/20 09:48 pm
Title: Chapter 13

Please tell me you're writing right now. Put a rush on it.

Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/11/20 10:23 pm
Title: Chapter 1

"That sounds NOT fun" I laughed out loud at that and it's inappropriate laughter but I've been doing that often. She is a victim of Centre tinkering, Eli is proof of that, and was a Centre prisoner and everything she's gone through she finds out Jarod is a victim specialist. I know it must feel to her that the roof caved in with that news from Jarod but she handles it well and goes on acting like everything is fine. Amazing! I love it.

Reviewer: Gunner Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/11/20 10:55 pm
Title: Chapter 13

Where do I even begin. This little dance Parker does of revealing only so much and then locking down completely and leaving him guessing is just the most Parker thing EVA! It was really tender and telling that she would comfort him when he did the most Jarod thing *EVA!* and choked up while talking about the craziness of the world and how people think kindness and goodness are weakness and insanity and he's right and this is exactly what OUR Jarod would do and you know that.. you know he's good and here you doing again what you always do and I mean surprising me but it shouldn't suprise me at all because you know him so well but you also made him so dark but that was also plausible and in character and omg I just can't with you. You're brilliant. Jarod asking about her confiding in his headstone because she told deadJarod she loved him but hasn't yet told aliveJarod she loves him and if that is not  TEH! MOST! MISS! PARKER! THING! EVA! I don't know what is. Really. You nailed it.

You know them so well and know what to do with them and I love it. Please give us more soon. How are you able to write so articulately and focused right now is beyond me with a looming possible 4 more years of doom. You just don't let it rock you at all. But I'm so anxious. A man that bragged about sexually assaulting women.. and there have been more than 2 dozen women that said "yeah he did assault me" and he's so vulgar and nasty and ugly.. just disgusting grabbing them by the pussy and trying to fuck married women because xtians don't care about adultery or rape at all and it is personal to me because I was assaulted that way... I'm a wreck. If not for fanfic and this website I don't know what I'd do. This is my escape. I've thank the web master here before and I thank you too. Really. Thank you omg I can't say it enough.

Reviewer: Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/11/20 07:44 pm
Title: Chapter 13

Don't stop now.


Write. Write!!!

Reviewer: Rene Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/11/20 04:40 am
Title: Chapter 1

One more thing. Social lubricant. Lol. That's SO Jarod. And Parker's response is SO t ypical Parker.

Reviewer: Jen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/10/20 08:03 pm
Title: Chapter 13

Jarod is getting no answers from her and that's what he gets for letting her think he's dead. She is hurt and I don't blame her. Discussing kindness and babies in cages right now and what the US has done... this is a conversation these two would have in our world right now and Jarod is right and how touching and plausible that Parker reached for him when he got passionate about it, probably thinking of his son and Avery and all childrren really because he is Jarod and that's what Jarod does. He feels things so deeply. So does Parker. I love this. I love you for addresssing the messed up stuff going on. Wrong is wrong no matter who does it and that includes what's going on at the border. It's wrong. It just happens the US is wrong this time. LIke Germany was wrong once upon a time. Keep writing please. MOre of this.

Reviewer: Jen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/10/20 08:02 pm
Title: Chapter 13

I NEED MORE!NOW!! Please!! All the shipper feels are here. You should be writing the novels!

Reviewer: pretenderoxx Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/10/20 05:33 pm
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