Oooh amazing job with this. Thanks so much. Please keep going. Never stop writing. Ta.

Mind is blown. I love the way you opened this up and omg Jarod unknowingly repeated what Thomas said...I can't even! It's worse because Jarod already fake died,!! I feel for both of them, it's so plausible and beautiful. Thank you. Congratulations!

Please don't forget this one... or any of them. Please?

Bravo!

This is evolving brilliantly. Miss Parker seems to be experiencing an unwanted self-reckoning and also a renewed battle with her inner voice/dominant parent's voice. I think Jarod's return to her life triggered the return of all of the baggage and the past, the romeo/juliet /forbidden fruit angle of her and Jarod's relationship, and it's reasonable and plausible that she'd fear even subconciously that Jarod's presence would attact any fragments of the Triumvirate, Quintumvirate or any other org to her and her children. She must also be worried about Jarod in law enforcement even if she seems displeased by him playing doctor. I'm not a mother, but I know many of them and all mothers feel inept and like they're screwing up, so that also seems in character and plausible and it adds even more realism, and makes Miss Parker even more relatable and real. That tune playing speaks for itself. She's running. I don't think that she or Jarod would ever really get away from each other. All the running only leads them running into each other. I feel lucky to have read this and that you're willing to explore deeper. It's an ancient television series and I'm glad it's been given new life by fans. You excel in every facet of writing and story telling. As a fan I particularly love the added-for-continuity paragraphs and how you move the story forward and it goes without saying the characters. I read your stories and visualize the characters, scenes, settings. It's amazing. I look forward to the next installment. Thank you.

Ciao!

hope u will updae soon!! it's like heroine and I usually only say that about smut fiction!! I can see Jarod and Michael t in each scene and having met him 3 !!! times I know what I like and I know him!! there should be smut or sex but even if there isn't I will read this.

wow you really know the characters...and know how to keep my attention. Better not let me down now lol cos I'm hooked.

Brilliant. I love your writing. You have a powerful voice and an amazing skill for writing. You leave me wanting more. I eagerly wait for more.

It's like reading a painting. You illustrate with words. It's so amazing. I hope you'll update all of your stories. Please? Congratulations!!

So much love for this! Please don't ever stop writing for us. You keep The Pretender alive!

Classic Miss Parker all the way.

"Oh, and by the way, you should choose a lane, and stay the hell in it."

Because Jarod is a agent but acts like a doctor. It reminds me of when Michael T. Weiss was on Burn Notice and he's a total baddie but when Michael Weston gets pretend hurt he says, in classic Jarod, something like "maybe I can stop the bleeding" and I just loled all over myself.

I can never get enough of  your writing. More?

I'm so looking forward to the next chapter. 

Ok first. Stevie Nicks. The QUEEN, yo! And that song? Stevie and Lindsey have a thing that might come close to the thing Jarod and Parker have. You should see them do that song live. Phheewww! So. Love this. But it's Parker who will never get away no matter how fast she runs and it's Jarod that is haunting her. Dead or alive. I love your prose, your word choice, how in character the characters are, your narration, your voice, the transitions that I don't even notice, the passage of time you show. I love how Parker asks Jarod if she's aware of his hypocrisy. He let her believe he was dead, and now he's afraid for her health and life and she must be thinking "he can die but I can't?" because that's how Parker thinks. You nail the characters and it feels like coming home to read you. There's an ease of reading even if I have to look up words sometimes to know the definition or google to see a painting or artist and educate myself on these NOT UNDERDOGS that Avery talks about. That child is a genius. An adrenaline craving genius. She isn't Jarod or Parker's bio child tho? I need more. This is perfection. Please continue?

Holy goddesses woman you are kicking *ss! You are a natural and so amazing. They are always like I remember them when you write them. I just want more and more. Please?