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Title: Chapter 19

Uh-uhh! Mirage. I always hear their voices and see their facial expressions when I read your stories. It's like sitting here watching Michael and Andrea. Your characterisations literally blow my mind. You get me in that zone you know ?? where I forget everything except the story and it's like I'm in it watching it and not reading it? I WANT MORE!

Reviewer: Lorraina Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/04/22 09:34 pm
Title: Chapter 19

Damn. Woot! I love your writing. I love your voice. The characters are the characters. Your descriptive work... boom mind blown. I'm also loving the art you put up. You really lightened up that Carthis scene and cleaned it up so I call that art even if you call it a screenshot, anyway I just noticed you put it up for the Transcendence story love it! If you can get Jarod inside a shipping crate playing with freaking bubble wrap ..how did you do that?... then of course you can clean up that scene. Lots of people use the almost kiss scene for things but that look they give each other after being interrupted says more than the almost kiss did. They both look so shook, like they can't believe it almost happened and can't believe they want it to happen again. I love it. You notice things that a lot of people don't seem to notice. You understood the assignment didn't you? Congrats!

Reviewer: Miss Parkere Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/04/22 02:47 am
Title: Chapter 19

This is my most favorite thing ever that has ever been written. I love how descriptive this is and the well thought out dialog , and the characters are the way they are on the television series but more developed and mature. My heart is full of joy now. Please write more soon.

Reviewer: Lacy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/04/22 04:25 pm
Title: Chapter 19

💯 You're a wordsmith Mirage and a hell of a story teller. I read this slowly and savored it and made it an immersive experience. I can see Parker's hardly noticable reflexive recoil and Jarod's careful wording that way he will slowly say something and pause. This is my continuance choice ...this one or a tie between this, Nemesis, and Circles of hell. It's so plausible and so amazingly well written. Congratulations and thank you for sharing this.

Reviewer: Angela Penn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/04/22 03:59 pm
Title: Chapter 19

Of course she isn't waiting. Yah! Slammed in the shipper feels... from someone who isn't a shipper???! Comeon! This is beautiful and I know you'll finish right? Right? Please?

Reviewer: April L Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/04/22 02:46 am
Title: Chapter 19

Please update when you can. I love this.

Reviewer: Contessa Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/04/22 10:27 pm
Title: Chapter 19

Stoked! I can't wait to read more. Please update all of your stories.

Reviewer: Melinda Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/04/22 04:06 am
Title: Chapter 19

Hey, hey, I'm loving this direction. This began so freaking dark that I feared Jarod and Miss Parker would come to blows and not the good kind oO but through the darkness you found some light for them and awwww, like you I'm not a shipper either but it's so sweet and really intimate the way they have these little talks with each other and it's just like watching them having little talks back when I would watch this series years ago. The dream is alive as long as there are dreamers I guess... please keep writing always.

Reviewer: Felicia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/04/22 02:42 am
Title: Chapter 19

Jarod being the most Jarod that Jarod has ever been. Parker being the most  Parker that Parker has ever been. She always would reach a point of dissolved tension and resignation and confide in him, usually with a laugh of derision that made it clear she wasn't happy or felt any humor. It's nice to see that happen and her accept that her leaving had nothing to do with a change of heart. I think it would be harder to admit that than anything else. A mistake that led to a ten year mistake but like Jarod said here it's just time and it was necessary because she would make the same decision again and at the end of it all their feeilngs didn't change. That is what matters. It's a hell of an insight into the dymanics of relationships, how some people stay together for the wrong reasons and love dies but others separate and ten years later without any contact are still are in love. That's how it goes sometimes. Profound as always Mirage. You're not a shipper but you still get the relationship and you definitely understand love. This is what it's all about. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/04/22 12:19 am
Title: Chapter 19

This hit me directly in my eternally shipper soul. Love. Are you sure you're not a shipper? Super sure? More please? Cherries on top? You like cherries? With whipcream? Please?

Reviewer: lisa Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/04/22 09:34 pm
Title: Chapter 19

Top notch mate. It's a tight chapter in a tight story filled with tight chapters. I think Mirage isnt fitting for you even if you do like anonymity. You should be Queen of Pain.

Reviewer: King Of Pain Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/04/22 11:27 pm
Title: Chapter 19

Ahhhhhh, so many feels Mirage. Every word is is so superbly placed and the dilaog sounds exactly like my favorite characters and power couple. You really know these characters. I want more.

Reviewer: Leslie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/04/22 07:23 pm
Title: Chapter 19

Superior writing from a favorite author and amazing storyteller. You've perfected your craft. Seriously top shelf.

Reviewer: James Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/04/22 03:06 am
Title: Chapter 19

Oo. I don't have the words now. I have a processing issue and have to think for a while before I know how to say in words how I feel. This is so good Mirage that I have tears in my eyes. I think you are a romantic. I know you're not a shipper but you know how it is. The way you have Jarod talk about time and how time isn't a measure of love or relationships. It's just time. Just like that Culture club song says. I recognize my characters when I read you. You won't ever know what that means to a fan like me that has been so touched and impacted by The Pretender. You keep it alive and keep me coming back for more. I'm so greedy for this.

Reviewer: Sela Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/04/22 02:49 am
Title: Chapter 1

Exquisite. Another poignant chapter and I'm pleasantly surprised by the character devolpment and growth. I'm, as always, astounded by your prose and characterizations, and look forward to reading the remainder.

Ciao!

Reviewer: Michael Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/04/22 04:35 pm
Title: Chapter 19

You've got the pages flying. I love your descriptive work and characterisations and all of the action.

Reviewer: Con-O Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/04/22 03:03 pm
Title: Chapter 19

Bravo! I love this. It fits right in with every episode of The Pretender and is strong enough to be made into a third film. I can't even consider it a slow burn as the fire caught up with Jarod and Miss Parker quickly. They can't outrun that fire. I hope this means there will be closure. You haven't disappointed me yet. Don't worry I'll tell you if do.

I love that you add all of the mannerisms and gestures, all the signs that they are exasperated or irritated. Just wow. You're amazing. Well worth the wait, which hasn't been that bad considering you've been writing other stories and adding completed ones while also writing this. How do you do it without losing your mind? I wouldn't be able to keep up with that and being an adult too. You ARE an adult aren't you? I already crave the next fix.

Reviewer: Cal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/04/22 03:56 am
Title: Chapter 19

Ahhh the perfect combination of thoroughness, brevity, action, drama, danger, and that undefinable thing Jarod and Parker share. Your original characters are fleshed out and as real as the ones we know and love. You keep me coming back for more. The characters are spot on. Gotta have more.

Reviewer: d_el1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/04/22 03:34 am
Title: Chapter 19

Woot! You make my month! More?

Reviewer: The Miss Parker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/04/22 02:40 am
Title: Chapter 19

This is brilliant. You are a brilliant author with an amazing command of language and characters. Please post more soon.

Reviewer: Archange Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/04/22 12:43 am
Title: Chapter 19

I am going to review every chapter but right now gotta say my mind is blown out of my head....how do you even write like that???! It's so perfect and I am envious. Please continue it's been a pleasure.

Reviewer: Jami Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/04/22 04:17 pm
Title: Chapter 19

Hitting me right in the shipper feels with this chapter.  It's so professionally authored and is a missing piece that is an missing episode. I need more.

Reviewer: needlepoint Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/04/22 03:16 pm
Title: Chapter 19

we don't measure relationshis with time," such a Jarod perfect thing to say ...we measure them with love and their love is immeasurable. Thank you for this reminder and for writing for us.

Reviewer: Gary Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/04/22 03:30 am
Title: Chapter 19

please don't ever stop writing. I'm new here new to pretender, but already in love with the series... found my mom's DVDs and love it and this is another episode for me love you!

Reviewer: k Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/04/22 11:52 pm
Title: Chapter 19

Amazing 🤩! Glad to see that real adult love is eternal the way it is in real life and everyone knows that these two have always had something more between them than what they show to others. The honesty is real and savage. I love how edgy you continue to be in your prose with no pretension or bs. This is the best. More??!!

Reviewer: Melissa B Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/04/22 04:47 pm
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