Merci Mirage! There is nothing you need to do to this wonderful chapterr.

Please do not alter anything about it. It is pretender perfect.

OMG it's so funny 🤣 how I was like 'ermagherdt Jarod and Parker just wedded' and then after reading on and seeing it's Syd and Michele's wedding I was like 'I would be ok with Jarod and Parker getting married actually...wish they were ' and did you know that would be the reaction? Shock that they married and then disappointment that they didn't marry? We are a strange bunch of pretender fans to sail this ship no matter what and you seem to know that and understand the nuances....even tho you aren't a shipper at all.

Stunned, pleased, amazed, and grateful as always with your work I keep wanting more and more of you.

Is the other shoe about to drop? Or will they continue being happy? I want to find out.

Beautifully written. I was just about to go to Twitter to tweet about you but here you are, and I'm glad you haven't abandoned us.

checking in...are you ok??? not mad just hoping all is well and if you need an ear...you got my email ady from all the times I reviewed you that way.

you've always been there for me and many of us... to listen, advise, help with fics

, and you would listen and help anyone even Jarod 😉😜..and every now and then maybe you

need someone too??? I love this story and will patiently wait . take care of you.

Right this isn't their fault and as long as they don't have children it shouldn't matter at all. You know what? You're the only author to do this [and plausibly] and the only one to delve into shifty G and his crimes. That was completely glossed over during the TV series. Parker basically accused him and he denied it and called it teenagers messing around and used her "twisting" of facts as ammunition to call her a liar about Raines too, but I believe her. Jarod does, too. He probably met Guissepe for that reason. I think it had little to do with Raines. Knowing a child by his works or whatever that bible verse was.... it was about Gusissepe I think now in hindsight and his crimes and hiding behind the church. It all makes sense now. No one ever wrote about it and I never thought about it. But you have. Maybe Jarod was trying to break the religious curse eve then. You really make me think. Please continue.

I love how you got the idea and developed it so slowly over these chapters, building and building. Brilliant. I can't wait to see what happens next.

You cleverly include providing details that make what can seem implausible plausible. First you remind readers of the basically in-lab incest. Jarod and his mother's semen and egg combined is medical incest, and you give a plausible, extremely possible scenario in which Raines' ideas are approved and funded, and I can't believe the US or Russia haven't already prepared to repopulate this way. I hope you don't give republicans any ideas ...they already brag about "grabbing women by the you know what" and defend child predators like Dennis hastert, to Moore, etc, and support Matt gaetz child sex trafficker and rapist Brett kavanaugh and Clarence Thomas. Nixo was in office in 1969..makes sense. I'm curious to to see how they Jarod and Miss Parker go forward from here, and if they can. Jarod makes a compelling argument in their favor. Eloquently written.

I was really shocked 😲😳 and thinking oh no they can't be together if it's true but then Jarod, dear dear dear Jarod, dropped some major truth nukes and I  agree with him. I actually agree that nothing should change, that love is all that matters and Parker knows it's true. She would have been long gone if the revelation changed her feelings. I think she needed Jarod to tell her it's ok to follow her heart and I love that. Oh, I want more so much right now. Thank you so much for this. 💖

hope to read more about willow and giana and Nick. so amazing. now I'm all caught up reviewing all 20 chapters. love each one.

"You must be a genius or something" lol love the light conversation. and Jarod s " but not the correct them" and the thought that they once planned so much and would say " can't go soon enough" to each other  oh they are so perfect together and it's so tragic.

This is just as intense and emotional the second time around as the first. So powerful.

We are demanding fans! I love that they tasted each other although Jarod barely got a taste before things took a turn. In hindsight reading this is still exciting even though I know what will happen next..still suspense and that's powerful. I know why Parker reacted that. way now but still wish she hadn't... such a masterpiece!!

This began so hopeful and ended so unhopefful. Cruel! Exquisitely written too. Even tragic is beautiful when it's well written. I crave more.