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Title: Chapter 19

OMG! I love this. You really eased into the Jarod and Parker aspect of this and did it so well. I was hoping they would talk about the past and reconcile and at least be friends. They are still in love. After all that time. Of course they are!! Thank you. I'm so grateful. You keep the series alive. It means so much to me. I'm literally crying all over myself.

Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/04/22 07:51 pm
Title: Chapter 19

Top notch mate!! Your prose is clear and exquisite and this is like watching the dvds all over again. I'm enjoying the personal growth, how Miss Parker admits that she didn't leave him because she fell out of love with him and shouldn't be surprised that she still loves him. They just sublty admit their enduring love for each other, and I think that's probably the most beautiful thing in the world. That comraderie they have continues. I don't dare call you a romantic, because I know you're not a shipper and that you believe the two can function fine on their own and alone but Mirage this is really touching to read and seems to epitomize Jarod's belief that life is a gift and that love is always worth the pain.  You always go deep. You're not afraid of going deep and being honest. I'm blown away here. More, please?

Reviewer: Christoph Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/04/22 07:26 pm
Title: Chapter 19

Oooh. She has been shutting herself down hasn't she? Cos she's afraid she'll kill him? This chapter was the everything falling into place very loudly chapter and some of the mystery unfolds and I'm glad you're not like Steve and Craig cos Ima get old one day and we never know when it's our last day and I don't think we should wasting time dragging fans along to wait for more answers and then new answers and... I already forgot some of their questions so I'm glad you're here with the continuity or I'd lose my mind. Jarod is really sweet doubting his ability to ask her to give them another try after everything she went through and still has no real memory of. It's all reallly complex and you don't mind getting into the psychological aspects of the characters. You have amazing insights. More please. I'm forever impressed.



Author's Response:

I don't know. Probably.

It's just fanfic. I believe there were probably intentions to give every fan what they wanted. I think we should blame people who weren't fans. Yes, I'm kidding. Let's just play nice and be grateful for what we do have.

Jarod is kind of sweet in this one-- eventually.

I don't think it's amazing. It's just-- fanfic. Thanks for the generous review.

Reviewer: Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/04/22 10:50 pm
Title: Chapter 19

omg! Neuroreality is trying to be a thing right now and I think Jarod would have created it decades ago. Love how you. stay true to the series while modernizing it.. such a treat to read you..



Author's Response:

That makes sense I suppose. He's a genius. If there's an entire television series and the genius part is why he was abducted, and if they have to remind us in every single episode that he's a genius, then, yeah, he absolutely should have conceived all sorts of ideas and inventions that could be twisted and used in horrific ways to traumatize and kill people. He's genius and madness (and some good ol' righteous rage).

The reviews are the real treats. Thank you for reviewing.

Reviewer: Joni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/04/22 07:09 pm
Title: Chapter 19

Top shelf writing and storytelling here. You are a treasure. This, like all your work, is like a next episode. Congratulations And thank you for sharing your talent with us .

Reviewer: Gunner Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/04/22 04:46 pm
Title: Chapter 19

oh my shipper heart! When Jarod cries after learning that something he thought up was used to make parker distrust him and that pushed her from him,..oh sobs. they were used by the centre to hurt each other it is true. this is the episode I needed and could easily be an episode it meshes do perfectly, and it's just like watching them. awe 😘 forever. more please.

Reviewer: Jen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/04/22 05:29 am
Title: Chapter 18

omg more please??!!



Author's Response:

There shall be more. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/02/22 12:57 am
Title: Chapter 18

Bravo! I wasn't expecting this to happen now, and if I'm honest wasn't expecting it to ever happen at all. I should have been. It's like Parker to want to overlook obstacles and go straight for what she wants in the moment and not care about the consequences. She did that on the series, attacking Raines and not caring that she could be killed for it, throwing out the background check on Thomas, the almost kiss with Jarod, and many other instances. Did Jarod know where she was going with her concerns and just wanted to hear her say the words or was he oblivious while she was confessing? The title of this story is Oblivion and it seems to be more about Project Oblivion and how people are also oblivious about many other things and I love that. It's reminiscent of how episode titles related to the Centre side of the show and also related to Jarod's side of the show. I'm intrigued and very curious to know how this will play out. Stunning writing. You've perfected your craft and I'm grateful that you share with us. Ciao!



Author's Response:

Hi. Mm, that's a good question. We shall soon know the answer. Thanks for the R&R.

Reviewer: Michael Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/02/22 08:58 pm
Title: Chapter 18

Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Amazzzeiinggg you write them like they are on the show and make them sooooo real and I want morrrreeeeeee!!! After your reply to my other review I gave you I believe that I am right and you have met Michael T. Weiss and are being discreet and mean. LOVE that man! Was he like Jarod and did he look like Jarod and did he act like Jarod when you saw and met him????!

MORE!



Author's Response:
I'm discreet and mean? Thanks? 
 
Yes, I'm aware that you love him. Everyone loves him. I know this.
 
You're maybe not wrong: I will never disclose the details of any encounter, or even admit there was an encounter.
 
Was he like Jarod? Why would he be like Jarod? Why? Jarod is a character (quite a character indeed).
 
Did he look like Jarod? Oddly, my answer is yes and no. He looks nicer than Jarod. 
 
Did he act like Jarod? Sweet baby Jesus no, fortunately, and I appreciate that.

Thanks for reading and --- I know you're capable of reviewing me and not typing out that entire name. Try it.

Reviewer: Lorraina Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/02/22 09:41 pm
Title: Chapter 18

It keeps getting better and better and I keep wanting more and more!



Author's Response:

Thanks, Jessica.

Reviewer: jessica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/02/22 06:07 am
Title: Chapter 18

Amazing update. More please?



Author's Response:

Thank you, Leese.

Reviewer: Leese Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/01/22 04:03 am
Title: Chapter 1

First rate writing. People leave each other but the love doesn't always leave too and in these circumstances this makes total sense to me. Parker didn't walk away because she didn't love Jarod. Jarod didn't stay away and respect her wishes because he didn't love Parker. Love can mean giving a person distance too. Thought-provoking work as usual and always incredibly profound.

Reviewer: Jeremy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/01/22 12:00 am
Title: Chapter 18

Did not see that coming!! Please write faster.



Author's Response:

Neither did I. Thanks, TheDarkAngel.

Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/01/22 07:38 pm
Title: Chapter 18

Top notch Mate! You're an amazing story teller and author. Nice name that Willow. I read that the Bidens just adopted a cat called Willow today and I reckon it's not a coincidence cos don't most Americans read fanfic hehee? Even respected world leaders read here and are inspired to name their pets after characters here.



Author's Response:
 

*opens new tab* Aw, she's a sweetheart.

Thanks, Con-O.

Reviewer: Con-O Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/01/22 10:20 pm
Title: Chapter 18

Say they will be together please.



Author's Response:

I can't. Sorry.

Thanks, Chloe.

Reviewer: Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/01/22 10:58 pm
Title: Chapter 18

I was this many years old when I discovered you and I finished reading this in one sitting a sec ago. I love it. Please say you'll continue.



Author's Response:

Welcome to my scribblings.

Thanks, Cathy.

Reviewer: Cathy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/01/22 10:21 pm
Title: Chapter 18

You keep the figurative pages turning like no one else.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Shane.

Reviewer: Shane Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/01/22 08:47 pm
Title: Chapter 18

Exquisite. This might be my all time favorite. Bless you for these amazing contributions.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Valerie.

Reviewer: Valerie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/01/22 05:45 am
Title: Chapter 1

Oh my godesses I can't even right now but I will anyway. Mirage, I love the way she told him, the way he didn't pick up on what she was saying like he also didn't realize he was shouting I love you at her. He's still dealing with so much and almost lost Sydney and Sydney's the reason he nearly killed Lyle and I think Jarod is experiencing a crisis and I love it. He's so used to knowing everything and how everything will go and being in control of everything and all of the consequences and now this has challenged everything he thought he  knew. I love it. It's so plausible, too. I love how you challenge everything, too, and keep me riveted on the story. It's amazing. More, please?

Reviewer: Angela Penn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/01/22 12:45 am
Title: Chapter 18

This is beautiful. What I love most about your stories is how much soul and heart they have in them. It's so sad when a series has no soul and what I loved most about the tv series is all of the soul and heart in the episodes and characters.  It's the same feeling when I read you Mirage. Thank you.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Sela.

Reviewer: Sela Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/01/22 10:40 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Top notch mate! I can't get enough.

Reviewer: Gunner Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/01/22 09:33 pm
Title: Chapter 18

This is the best chapter so far, keeps getting better and better and I keep getting more and more addicted.



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you.

Reviewer: Jillian Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/01/22 04:46 am
Title: Chapter 18

Exquisite, Mirage. This story is tight and still has the same tight grip that attracted me to it. I love how well this is written, how sharp the characterisations are, and all of the usual pro author attractions. More than those things I love your knack for subverting tropes and societal expectations, the way you take your pen-sword to the social norms, these psychological deep dive studies into the human mind. You show no fear when you explore mental illness and you excel in the creation and character development of your own original characters as well as the ones we already know. Parker tapped Jarod's foul toss out of the entire park by shutting down what we've seen him do on our screen too many times. He helped Kyle, Ethan, and has excused his own crimes but wants to hold Lyle to different standards. He does play favorites. She's one of his most favorites. Falling in love with her has made it possible for him to excuse so many bad things she's done. I think he's his own most favorite though, and I love Jarod, so, this is coming from me, ultra fangirl. I'd still hit that. Please continue when you can. Thank you for all you've already shared with us.



Author's Response:

Aw, thanks for the rather generous review. Please lower your expectations. Lower. Lower. A little lower. Seriously, thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Amelia Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/01/22 08:45 pm
Title: Chapter 18

Oh, snap at Parker telling Jarod he doesn't get to play favorites. All of that. Bravo!

Reviewer: contessa Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/01/22 02:36 am
Title: Chapter 1

omg more!!!

Reviewer: sandra Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/01/22 01:27 am
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