Title: Chapter 1

I like your story. Interesting plot with a good writing.

It's like reliving The Pretender all over again.

It's a pity you've stoped..

Reviewer: Michael Harris Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/09/19 11:46 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Very interesting story, but I miss Jarod in it.

Hope you'll update soon and we'll get to know what happened.



Reviewer: Rachel Villar Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/07/19 06:44 pm
Title: Chapter 1

What about an update?

This story deserves more than that...


And congrats.. It's really an interesting plot!

Reviewer: Maria Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/05/19 11:11 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I really liked this story!

But I'm waiting for months for an update. 

I think I'm going to give it up :(

Reviewer: Marlene Krauss Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 20/09/18 10:14 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Ok, I like where this is going. Can't wait to see Jarod's reaction to all this!

Please don't let us hang in here for another year waiting for the next chapter...

Reviewer: Michelle Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/02/18 09:52 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I like this storyline! It's really good and well written.

Can you tell us more?

Please update soon...  :)

Reviewer: Diana c. Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/12/17 09:36 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Did you stop this? It's a very good story. Please update soon....

Reviewer: Melissa Gallagher Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/12/16 11:58 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Ah, you're mean, leaving us hanging right there!  I'm so glad you decided to work on this again.  Please do give us the next chapter soon.  Please!  :)

Reviewer: Michelle Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 30/06/16 12:19 am
Title: Chapter 1

Thank you soooo much for the new chapter and the (belated) birthday gift  :D

But please update soon.. This was good, but so short.. We didn't get the details of what happened and we didn't even heard from Jarod yet.. Does he still have his memories of their marriage? Did Sidney left a letter for him too? Or he's unaware of all that's happening?


Reviewer: Sophia DaCosta Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 29/06/16 09:08 pm
Title: Chapter 1

This story was originally posted on my birthday, almost a year ago... I've been waiting for the update(s) ever since. Could you please gve that wonderful gift? This is too good to be left unfinished!

Reviewer: Sophia DaCosta Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/06/16 08:03 pm
Title: Chapter 1

That was a really good start and I for one would love to read more. 

Reviewer: M Rose Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/07/15 11:46 am
Title: Chapter 1

Nice, please keep going!

And, uh, let me be the first to put in a request for flashbacks to young MP/J.

Reviewer: Marie-L Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 30/06/15 03:53 am
Title: Chapter 1

That was a really good start. Can't wait for the next chapter....

Please update soon!!!  :)

Reviewer: Diana Sofia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/06/15 04:49 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Your story was interesting. I like it.

Reviewer: Monica_Bitch Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: 24/06/15 10:41 pm
Title: Chapter 1

WOW!!!! That was good. Can't wait for more of the story.

Reviewer: Katescats Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/06/15 09:29 pm

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