Great new chapter Mirage!! Wow! I love to actually read a Pretender story and see the characters from my Pretender dvds! It's just like magic and mysticality. It's really a rare thing these days. Thank you so much for each contribution. I know you don't like writing but Mirage you are one with the Pretender spirit! The characters are right on and the dialougue is intelligent just like what I expect from an episode. So please keep going on with this no matter how much a chore it is for you. Remember that you bring us joy and happiness. We need that now more than ever!! You bring us Jarod and Miss Parker and only you can do that. Thank you thank you thank you from all of my heart and soul.
Author's Response:
You are too sweet, Christoph. It is a chore. Thank you, as always, for reading and reviewing- it's what keeps fanfic alive.
Reviewer: Christoph Signed
[Report This]Date: 08/06/15 09:53 pm
Powerful writing Mirage. I had some problems with the web service and was so impatient to read your fiction. I am happy to see that you are still here and still writing for us. I'm blessed. Your hands are capable of shaping these stories to Pretender perfection. You convey Jarod's desperation, as well as Parker's resistance, and every aspect of these characters. You know these characters better than anyone. I understand that you always thank your readers for reading and reviewing. Now it's my turn to thank you for writing and updating. This is a must be 10! Please keep going.
Reviewer: Archange Signed [Report This]Date: 07/06/15 12:08 am
This is the last chapter....that is bad! Girl! Please. Give me more of this....More> Please?
Reviewer: Melinda Signed [Report This]Date: 06/06/15 03:22 am
OOoo! Wow. Just oh wow!
Reviewer: Melinda Signed [Report This]Date: 06/06/15 03:16 am
Ooooh Miss Parker's reaction to her brother and father? being killed are pricless. THAT is my Miss Parker. Oh GOd! Thank you. It makes sense too that the Triumvirate would wonder what the hell happened that night too and would doubt Raines and Lyle. Finally! The best post isle story I've ever read and I've read them all...expect your other stories. This is first of yours ever. I guess I saved the best for last. :) ;)
Reviewer: Melinda Signed [Report This]Date: 06/06/15 02:59 am
Do you often kill the illusions and preceptions we have of otheres? I will read everythign to find out but I like that. Jarod thought it wouldn't be Rachel but it was and now she wigging out and it's so funny cos I too thought she was stronger but now I remember Marx and her whimperyness. We are all fragile. I can see Zina's frown of appreciation..love that you say it's like a third eyebrow. It does look like that. I can see everything so vividly. You are are illustrative author. You paint with words. I lvoe it. You are brilliant.
Reviewer: Melinda Signed [Report This]Date: 06/06/15 02:53 am
AGain with the high tech sci-fi-ish cutting edgeness. I love it. This is the Centre and it takes more than duct taping a camera to a toy car to impress me. It's so funny how MP thought is was Lyle but it was Jarod? Someone who looks like Jarod? Oh wow. I'm so curious and excited. I can't wait for more! THank you for these chapters! You are amazing. I want you to know that I'm going to read all of your stories! Keep them coming please!
Reviewer: Melinda Signed [Report This]Date: 06/06/15 02:46 am
Wow! Brandt is wonderful. Mirage Mirage. I'm ...I have no words. The way he shook the imaginary dice...just all of it. I've read TOns of fan fic but none as good as this. Some books I've read in the last two years aren't as good as this. Why aren't YOU writing the novels? I mean...seriously. Why?
Reviewer: Melinda Signed [Report This]Date: 06/06/15 02:40 am
THE text talk! LOL! I love the humor you always include. You have some sharp wit. Sure you're not Miss Parker? You write her voice perfect! You say what she would say, with the tone and with the accompanying face. Perfect. Jarod too! How do you do it? I'm totallly envious....and I want more. Now.
Reviewer: Melinda Signed [Report This]Date: 06/06/15 02:33 am
Xina! I love Xina and Jarod's reaction and interactions with her and in general were superb. I was so thrilled to see him again. I've missed Jarod. It was just like watching an episode of TP and like being home. The old nostalgia is there but freshened up and tailor made to fit the time. You are a genius Mirage. I'm shocked that Craig and Steve haven't contacted you about writing with them. NO one else writes The Pretender as well as you do. You aren't really Craig and Steve are you? You really should be writing for the fandom...you should be writing the novels. You are a natural.
Reviewer: Melinda Signed [Report This]Date: 06/06/15 02:28 am
Thank you for not omitting Broots!!! He is a fan favorite and central to the show dynamic....just as you are central to this dynamic. You show that the Centre really is a cutting edge facility. Cox on projector to snoop... a novel idea. It's all about accountabililty and I know he's wondering why MP still hasn't ensnared Jarod. You writing is riveting, yanks me in and doesn't let go.
Reviewer: Melinda Signed [Report This]Date: 06/06/15 02:19 am
Fabulous job with this Mirage. It's true that you tototally nail the characters and flesh them out. This is hands down some of the best writing I've ever read..is definitely the best in the fanmily, and that includes SLM and CVS. I love the crime scene. That you open with original characters that snapshot us into the story and show us how MP and Jarod get involved is brilliant. I'm impressed! Thank you for contributions. I wouldn't be lurking around here if not for you.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing, Melinda.
Reviewer: Melinda Signed [Report This]Date: 06/06/15 02:14 am
Uuuhh god! NEVER. STOP. WRITING. Please. I'd go nuts without you Mirage. No one else even bothers to try to write, really write the way pros do it. I know it's fan fic and all...but you know, your writing isn't fan fic. I know you aren't a fan of Jarod and you don't always have sympathy for Miss Parker ...this fic for example. Whatever. Your writing is top notch. You are my favorite writer. Please don't leave....try to be careful with yourself in RL too. I need you healthy and happy and writing. I am addicted. oh please! More? Please? I love you!
Author's Response:
Never, Darkone. I can't stop writing. You know, I am trying to stay healthy. My head apparently doesn't care about that, however. I love you too. I love everyone (and that means I don't hate anyone, not any character or actor, which means you can stop harassing me about hating Jarod). Thanks for the r and r, as always.
Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed [Report This]Date: 04/06/15 08:55 am
LOVE this chapter Mirage. Every time I think I know where you might take us next but you write in your twists and it's just amazing. You are the only Pretender author I read now and you always satisfy. Keep the chapters coming. Longer chapters are great when you write them. Please don't ever stop writing.
Author's Response:
Thank you, Gunner.
Reviewer: Gunner Signed [Report This]Date: 04/06/15 01:24 am
Mirage you are born storyteller and author. The twists and turns are amazing. Your ability to flesh out characters, set up the story and write poignant dialogue and prose is unparalleled. The seamless transitions are Pretender perfect. It's a magical journey when I read you and it's always a pleasure. It's like home. It fits like a warm and gentle glove. I never want it to end. Thank you for another contribution to the fanmily. More please? With cherries on top?
Reviewer: Chloe Signed [Report This]Date: 03/06/15 11:38 pm
Great job with this and all of your fiction. You are amazing and you keep me hanging on every word.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing, Jeremy.
Reviewer: Jeremy Signed [Report This]Date: 03/06/15 03:55 am
Love the new chapter. Your stories, chapters and writing just keeps getting better and better. Thank you so much for all these "gifts" you've given us Mirage. More please?
Author's Response:
Thanks, Contessa. I am typing more in another window.
Reviewer: Contessa Signed [Report This]Date: 03/06/15 12:00 am
Awesome! #(@@@!! awesome. Keep up the hard work. You do it so well. !
Reviewer: d_el1 Signed [Report This]Date: 02/06/15 12:42 am
You will never know how much respect I have for you as an author and woman. ..and a Pretender fan. You kept the fandom alive and you still breathe life into it. Thank you Mirage for this and every chapter. What a proud accomplishment and an amazing contribution to a fandom in real and true urgent need of good material to read! Hugs!
Reviewer: Xena Signed [Report This]Date: 02/06/15 12:28 am
Happiness! Thank you thank you thank you Mirage! You are the best! Really! Fabulous new chapter. I love that Jarod didn't mean to break anything of Syd's but then acted like he was cool....I could see everything. Every expression. Amazing. Thank you! I wish you were writing The Pretender novels. you've always been true. You have the Pretender in your bones. thanks for sharing it with us. Hugs!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing, Miss Parkere.
Reviewer: Miss Parkere Signed [Report This]Date: 02/06/15 12:11 am
Hi just read your last 3 chapter. Wow you kill off Raines and Lyle? And now Jarod is under Miss Parker care O boy he's in trouble now. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: Katescats Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/06/15 09:30 pm
I do not know how in English to say how much I love your writing. I am French. You are my favorite Pretender author...you are the only author who is canon to the Pretender for me. I second what twisted said. I love Craig and Steve I do yes I do. But Craig and Steve's writing in the novels doesn't come close to yours and the way they write Jarod and Miss Parker is not as good as the way you write. Your writing is better, more exciting, the characters are more fleshed out. Reading your writing is like watching an episode of The Pretender and seeing and hearing...even feeling Jarod and Miss Parker. So much emotion Mirage. Anger and rage yes. Fear and love. Despair. I feel each emotion. I wish you were writing the novels. Thanks for sharing with us as always. Much love to you.
Reviewer: MlleParker Signed [Report This]Date: 01/06/15 08:49 pm
Another fantastic chapter. I really do love the way you write the interplay between Jarod and Miss Parker. I don't believe anyone can come close to conveying her razor sharp riposte as you can. And that really does include Craig and Steven.
I will be looking forward to the next chapter of this as well as updates on the other three fan fiction stories you are writing. In the meantime I will just 're-read 'Sweet Dreams'.
Thank you as always for writing and updating!
Reviewer: twisted Anonymous [Report This]Date: 31/05/15 03:45 am
I'm totally addicted to this story. Please update soon.
Author's Response:
I will do it, Contessa. Thank you.
Reviewer: Contessa Signed [Report This]Date: 14/05/15 02:36 am
I hope you will update soon. No one else even bothers to write such well thought out and lyrical phrased pieces anymore. Yours would definitely be great if they were published.
Author's Response:
Thanks, Darkone.
Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed [Report This]Date: 06/05/15 08:01 pm
