Amazing. More please.

Oh my GOD! Mirage I love the way you write and what you write and Jarod's mannerisms are dead on spot.  Crazy amazing girl! I'm on the Mirage train. I will read fan fic and I will read your fiction but I can't get on board with the reboot. I know I'm not supposed to say that because you are nice and...hooey booey you don't want anyone to voice dislike of the "official novels" and all that sweet peace and love and fanmily stuff well sweetie pie you are writing officially to me so stop being humble.

You are the one I want to throw money at! You are an amazing author and you should know it.  More please.

On second thought.... maybe you aren't warming to Jarod. I enjoyed the bouts of comedy in this as subtle as they were and the action, his surroundings and your descriptions of the weather, alley. You did an incredible job walking us back into the shop and what Jarod was doing prior to being in the alley. You write all of the characters well. You know them and offer a great deal of insight into the characters without forcing it, and you know what to do them, where to place them. I particularly enjoyed Jarod's reaction when Detective Brandt informed him that he agitates Rachel. Your original character, Det. Brandt, is memorable and fits well with the ones we know. The dialog is minimal but well done. All in all a solid chapter. I still don't know why you don't like Jarod. How can you not like Jarod? I await the next installment. Until next time.

I adore ! Honestly and I can't help  but love Jar even more when he is short-temper and then he will apologize . that's the difference between him and Parker . He may be arrogant but he's not too proud to excuse himself  while Parker has a lot of problem to even acknowlege when she is wrong . But hopefully she is nt a lost case .

A highly probable direction their lives could take. Margaret was looking pretty bad and did spill some blood in IOTH. It makes sense that Jarod would hold on to it or go back for it. He might have wanted a comparative to make sure she's his mom. I like how you use the information we have and build on it. You're unparalleled in our skills to develop and create characters and plot. The grammar and writing is so beautiful. My mum's a college professor and loves to read your work. She says hi. 

Jarod did something nice for Miss Parker and for sworn emenies they are getting along nicely. It's Rachel who has turned on him. I sense a shift in this fic maybe that things will turn and they might get together.

One more thing and I know you get tired of going off topic but I just watched Iowa, after watching 2000 Malibu Rd, Until the Night, Jeffrey, and Freeway. I'm watching all things #Michael T. Weiss. I found someone who has Dark Shadows and I'm having a MichaeloThon. I am shocked right now. He's a rapist in Iowa. He's a pedophile in Freeway. He's a rapist again in 2000 Malibu Rd. I take it he got tired of playing sweet Jarod. I was completely shocked to see sweet Jarod in those roles. The whole time I watched I was thinking about Circles of Hell and Forces of Nature. Did you watch those movies already? Is that where your muse got the idea to have Jarod go dark? Keep going with the updates. I love seeing Mirage in the recently added box. Makes my day.

Oh > My > God >

Mirage! I just read about you @ twitter and came here out of curiosity. I'm glad I did. This world of fanfic is new to me! I was so disappointed with the new direction [{the new direction sucks as much as the band one direction lol}] and those new people I hate. Corn? The story on the dvds got thrown out the window. Kaput! Very dumb move. I love you for staying with the original story and even more your command of the characters, the language, the Pretender universe and the intelligence. It's good to read grown up writing again. Mature people like mature fiction. Thank you to the moon and back. I'm in heaven again with these characters I grew up with on screen. Thank you. Please never stop writing for us.

I'm a writer like you but Mirage not like you, not as brilliant as you are. I also work in a lab without giving specifics. You nail it every time, the science and blood work the mitochrondial DNA. Did you know that fingerprints can be planted by apple phones, some phones? Or maybe they were manipulated inside the investigating department. The clones aren't carbon copies and nature vs nurture is something you don't hear about on tv shows or in tv book novels either. Just like with Kyle's heart...it would have been medical waste...sorry Jarod...but damn he's gorgeous lol. flash an ass and nice face and we forget the facts. Some of us lol not you. You're already more consistent than the show ever was. It's a pleasure to read you as always Mirage. Two chapters in two weeks. That's something special when you're writing original material too. The Muses are doing right by you and you are doing right by the Muses. Don't change a thing. I can't wait to see where you're taking us, but you've got me my hand and I will folllow. Much love!!! xx

Did you just say that you're the only one who likes Thommy??? How dare you say that! I just loved him! Even when I was a real hard MP/J shipper (which I'm still a lot, but I find myself writing romance for Parker with no Jarod involved...), I always loved Thomas. A good man and we had the opportunity to see a different side of Parker, one I'm quite sure we wouldn't see if she was with Jarod.

Anyway, keep up the good writing, you know we all love reading you!

I have only one complaint honey. You need to write longer chapters. Other than that this is perfect. Keep going. I love your writing and the story. Perfect. Jarod's mom prolly died from that gunshot in Scotland and she looked pretty sick before the shooting. Make sense. That Parker  had been pregnant  never crossed my mind. Plausible I think and so tragic. Jarod should feel guilty. Love the way you write. Oh oh ooooh Mirage I love the way you write. The part about the bullets richocheting....all of it. SO lyrical. More, please? Two updates so soon...I want you to know how appreciative  I am for that. We're very blessed to have you.

I need more of this. I hope Jarod has no choice but to go back to Miss P's and stay! You write like a BOSS! Update soon please.

I have to admit I am shocked that Parker made advances on Jarod, even under these circumstances. From you, that seems like a phenomenal large leap because you aren't a shipper, you aren't a fangirl, you aren't even a fan of Michael T Weiss, and you're not much of Jarod fan. You are an enigma, and I'm enjoying the unexpected but satisfying direction this story has taken, particularly this chapter. In a way we should have expected this because Jarod is stuck this time. He's broke, he was injured, he's a wanted man, he has no id with him. Being a fugitive isn't as easy as it looks on tv. The reality is refreshing. One more thing I want to point out is how you cleverly provided a sensible explanation for Parker's visions of Thomas. You keep feeding us missing pieces that help complete the unfinished puzzle in a manner that is plausible and makes sense but without straying from the original story. I am a fan of the original story and I appreciate your tireless work. I'd be interested in reading Jarod gay, transgender or pansexual. It's a little out of my usual reading, but so is fanfic...and I want you to know that I don't consider your work fan fic. You are a great author and I wait impatiently for your updates.

Bummer? NO I DON'T THINK SO> This is AMAZING MIRAGE! I love how Jarod is trying to do this and that, trying to recover from Rachel's bullet, trying to solve the murders he stands accused of, trying to get money from ATM .{{..I can only withdraw 500 per day so he put the money in different accounts online and then had to drive all over hell to withdraw it...he couldn't take the chance of withdrawing 500 a day for many days..the Centre would have been all over that...great details in there that are implied....the little girl charged him 300 to withdraw 5 is hilarious! }} he also tried to tell Rachel about the Centre! It's so funny that he keeps being pulled back to Blue Cove. I know the summary is 'Jarod is implicated in a spate of homicides" AND HE IS, but damn, I love how the consequences and failures of trying to solve the homicides lead him back to Parker. But with that all this tension now you are probably going to have Jarod leave again once his silicone mask is made and his new id is created? He's going to have to solve those murders? I know you weren't clear on how he is going to help...or if he's going to help her. I always try to guess what you will do next. Whatever you do, you will write it amazingly well and leave me breathless. I trust you. You gotta update The Return, too, please? Please don't ever stop writing. Oh, I wish Steve and  Craig would hire you! You kept me interested in this show for years and you still have me at attention and saluting you. You are the best. The Queen of Pretender fiction, probly the Queen of all fiction.

OH MY GOSH WOW. Mirage. I love this chapter. SLow speed chase. Nearly undone by a child. Very awesome. Funny how Jarod always got sidetracked in the show from finding his family....and here in this chapter he gets sidetracked trying to heal from bullet wounds and then trying to find out what project Miss Parker is involved in....because he jumped to conclusions and thought she wanted to sleep with him just to have a child to give to the triumvirate...which she could do. I always thought that would be a way to get Jarod. It makes sense here because the Centre will have to kill him and the cops who arrest him. They can't let Jarod talk. I think it's funny that Rachel doesn't believe him about the Centre or the Triumvirate and she just wants him dead. It makes Miss Parker seem nicer cos at least she never tried to kill Jarod lol. There is some foreshadowing I think...somethings Sydney didn't say to Jarod about Miss Parker? really amazing writing and always a fresh perspective and plot. More please?