lol Miss Parker with no air conditioning. This is so like her. She's kind of spoiled but we love her anyway. All the warmth of a blizzard. That's my Miss Parker but only because the dude was hitting on her.

This is what I love about reading you. It's so visual and I can see Jarod and hear him...I can see Michael T. Weiss when you write him and that's who Jarod is for me and like him or don't like him you gotta admit no one else can be Jarod like Michael can and I can tell it's who you're writing about. You got his inflections and voice and body language and boyish charm and mannerisms and... and everything down to a T right down his middle initial girlfriend. I can see every character clear. You transport me INTO the story. I love the story too.  Do you watch The Profiler too? You nail Rachel. I love Jamie Luner and so.. yeah, you nail them all. How the heck do you do that? Whateverz keep doing it.

Ohhh wow. Powerful writing Mirage. Your original characters make a hell of an entrance. I love them already.

Oh no! I want everyone to be ok. Please make it so. I LOVE your writing Mirage. More more more!!

LOVE your writing style, your narrative voice. You are the best! More please?

Bravo! Your writing is consistently brilliant and I don't know how you manage to achieve quality and quantity while juggling several different stories.It seems like one of those two things would suffer but you are the master of the craft.. or mistress.

This is action packed but still emotional. The series wasn't always action packed but there was always the heavy emotional quality that really made The Pretender what is was and as successful as it was and you picked up the torch and you continue that legacy. I'm not sure how you achieve those two in perfect amounts but you do it.

You instilled a sense of urgency and danger.. an insidiousness in this chapter that sort of makes me dread continuing. I know something is going to happen but I don't know what or to who or when or how or whether there will be a death. But even if death awaits them Jarod and Parker must go there and can't wait for back up in the way of police and FBI. Jarod's mentor, his superego essentially is in the Centre and in danger and we know how Parker protects Broots. I love that you don't make changes to the interpersonal relationships and dynamics. Some people fuss too much or write these characters in the image of someone they know.. but you leave them as they are and write them just as they were on the series. I love that.

You never disappoint Mirage. I await the next chapter. Just keep doing what you're doing please.

Amazing. I love your work. So intense and beautiful. I'm on the edge of my seat in fear here. You won't kill Miss Parker off? Please don't. I want them to all be safe and well. So much drama and suspense. I'm so scared! I thank you for keeping these characters I love so much alive over the years. You keep The Pretender and the dream alive.

I also thank you so much for your reply to my review with the pez pancakes and spamlettes... your recipes and comedy were GOLD. I laughed so much. I printed out what you typed and I look over it and laugh some more. I love your review replies. You're a beautiful soul and so sweet. I did what you said exactly and followed your instructions and added pez dust (not by crushing the pez under a car tire) I did it the Ocee way and I embraced my inner sociopath and smiled a lot like Jarod does. Thank you for everything.

Oh, my God. HELL of a cliff hanger. Thanks for the warning. Yikes. Jarod with a scalpel. Beer fortifies me. Thanks for keeping them all live.

Oh holy mother of sex and candy I beg you for more. There's nothing can be said that hasn't been said. You are the queen! I just need more.

I read the trigger warning and nearly coated my phone with coffee lol. Hilarious. He can be a little cringeworthy tho. I think Michael T. Weiss knew what he was doing as an actor and I think he did it on purpose. SO yeah I can appreciate a warning. I feel hard for Broots. He's a total bad ass here but it's all for Debbie and that's so plausible. What's this about Jarod not being prepared to lose her? Foreshadowing? Mirage pleaze don't kill Parker off. Professionally written as always and I read in awe like always. The characters are... the characters I know and love my Pretender dvds. You write them exactly on point. You put them where they should be and move them correctly and it's really visual and stunning. A lot of drama in this. Evil cliff hanger. You are the best. Thanks for sharing your talents and skills with us.

Pez pancakes and spam omelets lol. Jarod WOULD do that. I love everything about your writing. Characters dialogue plotting descriptions all of it and the way they are and you have that certain thing that makes a writer a writer and damn you're amazing. I always love how you take something from the show and expand on it. Jarod's pez and spam love is just one example. Yes he would find a way to incorporate pez into everything else and I'm tempted to try them out so if you've got suggestions on how to make pez pancakes and spam omelets do let me know. I love pez. I love this story. More please? Oohh it has to be Jarod Miss Parker had sex with. Please!!!

More of this please? Sugar on top? I hope it's Jarod that Miss Parker was making love to.

I love that you make me feel I'm watching an episode. All the feels are back when I read you. Thanks for sharing.

Girl you are ROCK STAR! I'm still around. I lost my password and can't remember the old email I had when I joined because I was going thru some shite at the time omg but you are still here and you are still kicking ass just like Miss Parker is fixing to kick this clone Jarod's ass if she finds out he wasn't really Jarod and I'm not even gonna blame her. That would be rape right because she consented to sex with Jarod not some clone like you wrote in your notes at the end of the chapter before last right? So yeah and I appreciate you clarifying that stuff for us. With a pussy grabber up in the white house and two rapists on the supremely injust court and roy moore fixing to run again with his child molesting self you gotta clarify this shite for the incel infidels. SO keep on. And keep writing. I'll be here reading. Keep rocking the writing! I love it.