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Title: Chapter 26

You have to write more. Quickly please.



Author's Response:

I'm trying. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Tessa.

Reviewer: Tessa Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/02/22 06:06 am
Title: Chapter 26

I wanted to take a break from the fandom after saving Luke because I am disappointed that TP didn't return to television and the novels were more a continue and one I didn't like but I can't seem to leave off on fanfic I'm still reading. I don't know the words to say I love this too much. This serie has been my lifelong obsession. You write it perfectly in the way I remember it the way it is on my recordings that I still watch obsessively. You are a genius I think. Thank you for continuing this and all your stories.



Author's Response:

Hi. Ah, I know. Everyone wants their favorite television series to continue, infinitely, but I'm not certain it's realistic. I think it's sweet that you still watch the series, and I'm glad you like this. Thank you for reading and reviewing, Mlle Parker.

Reviewer: Mlle Parker Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/02/22 09:33 pm
Title: Chapter 26

I'm still hoping for a happy ever after but to be honest I am hooked matter what happens next. You're so talented and skillful and leave me wanting more

 



Author's Response:

Thanks, Jen, for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Jen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/02/22 07:25 pm
Title: Chapter 26

I'm so addicted. Wiil Jarod ,,, admit it you love him,,, and Miss Parker be together happily forever now? I totally hope so. More?!!!!!



Author's Response:

Ha. I can't admit it something that is entirely untrue. I don't hate Jarod, but I can't possibly love Jarod. I don't know that will be happy together. They could be happy not together. They could also be miserable together. We shall see. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Julie.

Reviewer: Julie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/02/22 05:08 am
Title: Chapter 26

Never did like Rachel but you capture her and Malone as well as our Pretender characters and your own original characters incredibly well. The story is really intriguing and continues to fascinate and impress me.I hope you will continue this.



Author's Response:

I like Rachel. I like all of Jarod's love interests. I don't know much about her character or the Malone person. I was never much of a television person. In fact, I almost never heard of The Pretender- but that's a long, strange story. I will continue. Thank you for reading and reviewing, Nikki.

Reviewer: Nikki Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/02/22 10:56 pm
Title: Chapter 26

Some steamy hot scenes and perfect characterisations. You are the best! More please!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Holly.

Reviewer: Holly Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/02/22 08:23 pm
Title: Chapter 26

I was hoping and praying that you would update this and not forget it because this one like all of your novels is 😍 amazing. This one is one of my favorites that I even printed so I could read any time.Thank you for this chapter and for keeping the pretender alive. These characters won't die as long as you keep them alive.



Author's Response:

Oh, no, you printed it? That's wild. I'm glad you like it. Thank you for taking the time to read and review, Chloe.

Reviewer: Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/02/22 10:39 pm
Title: Chapter 26

marvelous! I need more.



Author's Response:

Thanks.

Reviewer: Melissa b Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/02/22 05:24 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Top notch! More of this soon please?!



Author's Response:

Thanks, Jarod.

Reviewer: Jarod Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/02/22 04:45 pm
Title: Chapter 26

Oof! Jarod's worst enemy/ adversary is himself. Yasss!

Rachel has a point and she's not wrong. I'm glad she called him out but I know she has no proof and that the

men are vouching for him. I think since they all know they are working for the same people there is nothing anyone can do and now all the money investors have left

this is over for the Centre  I'm impressed with your skills as a an author, that you did this all plausibly and that you are updating several different stories at once. You must enjoy a difficult challenge or are writing to escape and that makes me worry. Please continue soon.



Author's Response:

I get this a lot. There's no reason to worry. I'm not writing to escape. I have all of this fictional stuff (an endless fucking supply) in my head that accumulates, and when I have a minute I purge and type it all out and try to piece it all together. It's like a puzzle- or puzzles. I will continue. Thank you for reading and reviewing, TheDarkAngel.

Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/02/22 07:18 pm
Title: Chapter 26

More please? You do this so beautifully and I love the way it's all seemless. Characters are the characters and perfect. It's like being home watching the series again but I might like this better.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Renee.

Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/02/22 04:49 pm
Title: Chapter 25

I hope you are ok and will come back to us soon. I miss you when you don't update regularly. I miss you so hard...

Reviewer: Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/07/20 03:03 am
Title: Chapter 25

Welcome back Mirage!

Thanks for taking the time to update admist all the insanity in the world.

I have to say your writing is brilliant as always but you've officially crossed over into Craig and Steven territory! AKA more questions than answers. Thanks for that! :)

I'd say i'm looking forward to the next chapter but there is trepidation as well. However, any story from Mirage is worth reading no matter where it leads.

Reviewer: twisted Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/06/20 11:08 am
Title: Chapter 25

Ohh no! I'm so relieved that Broots and everyone is going to live but after the distrust resurfacing.. if ever went away and I guess it would take a long time for that to happen. I feel that the chances for a happy ending just nosedived. The story is brilliant and you're a brilliant wordsmith and the characterizations...Mirage I can't even sometimes. It's like being there watching from a front row. I want more and more.

Reviewer: Lacy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/06/20 08:51 pm
Title: Chapter 25

Lost my password like a dunce but I'm still reading fan fic and I'm totally addicted to yours. More please?

Reviewer: Valerie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/05/20 08:46 pm
Title: Chapter 25

I will go back and review them all but just spent a beautiful Saturday reading you and you made my weekend with this story. Please keep the chapters coming.

Reviewer: Tessa Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/05/20 06:49 pm
Title: Chapter 25

Woot you're baack and with a hell of an update. Mirage wow. I keep repeating Alex was honest with her Alex was honest with her. He's not wrong about Jarod. Ohhh! You give it and you snatch it away from us. I'm so impressed. I need more please.

Reviewer: Christoph Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/05/20 11:29 pm
Title: Chapter 25

awesome give me more please?

Reviewer: lisa Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/05/20 04:25 am
Title: Chapter 25

Alex! I should have known... but I never know with you. You somehow leave me guessing until the end and I don't want it to end. You're a lifesaver and now in the quarantine more than ever you are a lifesaver. Thank you for being you and for being here and sharing your gifts with us.

Reviewer: Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/05/20 03:59 am
Title: Chapter 25

O. M. G.

I want to support Jarod so much all of the time and I want to disagree with Alex. I can't do either of those things right now. Mirage!! This is your fault. You do it subtlely too but you do it and it's like a sucker punch but it's one I should have seen coming. Alex didn't lie. What is going to happen next? I'm going nuts waiting for the next update and you literally like just updated this. Please ohhhh please. More?

Reviewer: Melinda Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/05/20 09:47 pm
Title: Chapter 25

I've been reading you from the beginning. You're one of those authors I can't quit and always come back to. When I think you can't outdo yourself you outdo yourself. I never know how you're able to realize originality but you do it and you grow the characters too and further develop them. I say all of that to say that it's on point to have the old suspicions arise again and her doubting Jarod all over again. There are questions that need answered...that Jarod needs to answer. Alex didn't lie to Parker. We know that Jarod has Catherine's diary and the answers about Fenigore were in it. He didn't return the diary to Parker during the television series and I haven't seen him do it in this story either. Alex's words are ringing loud and true. Don't torture us please with a long wait. I'm still here and I'm still reading.

Reviewer: Rachel Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/05/20 08:48 pm
Title: Chapter 25

Eloquent as always Mirage. I've come to expect nothing less than eloquence and professionalism from you. The characters are the characters. I continue to come back for more as you can see. Thank you for sharing. It's been a pleasure reading you.

Reviewer: Miss Shannon Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/05/20 12:40 am
Title: Chapter 25

I want to re read this and review every chapter but for now I just need to say how much I love this and how her distrust still thrives after being physically intimate with him just like I expected it always would no matter what because of her training. It's going to take Jarod a lifetime to undo what the Centre did to them. That's why he should have been angry and closed that placed down back in season one so.... yeah I'm loving this. more please.

Reviewer: Leslie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/05/20 08:51 pm
Title: Chapter 25

Please please please please

please update soon.

You're still my favorite for a reason Mirage.

Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/05/20 07:40 pm
Title: Chapter 25

F*ckin awesome mate. Really topnotch. More of this please?

Reviewer: Gunner Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/05/20 04:38 am
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