Welcome back Mirage!
Thanks for taking the time to update admist all the insanity in the world.
I have to say your writing is brilliant as always but you've officially crossed over into Craig and Steven territory! AKA more questions than answers. Thanks for that! :)
I'd say i'm looking forward to the next chapter but there is trepidation as well. However, any story from Mirage is worth reading no matter where it leads.Reviewer: twisted Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/06/20 11:08 am
Ohh no! I'm so relieved that Broots and everyone is going to live but after the distrust resurfacing.. if ever went away and I guess it would take a long time for that to happen. I feel that the chances for a happy ending just nosedived. The story is brilliant and you're a brilliant wordsmith and the characterizations...Mirage I can't even sometimes. It's like being there watching from a front row. I want more and more.Reviewer: Lacy Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/06/20 08:51 pm
Lost my password like a dunce but I'm still reading fan fic and I'm totally addicted to yours. More please?Reviewer: Valerie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 31/05/20 08:46 pm
I will go back and review them all but just spent a beautiful Saturday reading you and you made my weekend with this story. Please keep the chapters coming.Reviewer: Tessa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 30/05/20 06:49 pm
Woot you're baack and with a hell of an update. Mirage wow. I keep repeating Alex was honest with her Alex was honest with her. He's not wrong about Jarod. Ohhh! You give it and you snatch it away from us. I'm so impressed. I need more please.Reviewer: Christoph Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/05/20 11:29 pm
awesome give me more please?Reviewer: lisa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 28/05/20 04:25 am
Alex! I should have known... but I never know with you. You somehow leave me guessing until the end and I don't want it to end. You're a lifesaver and now in the quarantine more than ever you are a lifesaver. Thank you for being you and for being here and sharing your gifts with us.Reviewer: Chloe Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/05/20 03:59 am
O. M. G.
I want to support Jarod so much all of the time and I want to disagree with Alex. I can't do either of those things right now. Mirage!! This is your fault. You do it subtlely too but you do it and it's like a sucker punch but it's one I should have seen coming. Alex didn't lie. What is going to happen next? I'm going nuts waiting for the next update and you literally like just updated this. Please ohhhh please. More?Reviewer: Melinda Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/05/20 09:47 pm
I've been reading you from the beginning. You're one of those authors I can't quit and always come back to. When I think you can't outdo yourself you outdo yourself. I never know how you're able to realize originality but you do it and you grow the characters too and further develop them. I say all of that to say that it's on point to have the old suspicions arise again and her doubting Jarod all over again. There are questions that need answered...that Jarod needs to answer. Alex didn't lie to Parker. We know that Jarod has Catherine's diary and the answers about Fenigore were in it. He didn't return the diary to Parker during the television series and I haven't seen him do it in this story either. Alex's words are ringing loud and true. Don't torture us please with a long wait. I'm still here and I'm still reading.Reviewer: Rachel Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/05/20 08:48 pm
Eloquent as always Mirage. I've come to expect nothing less than eloquence and professionalism from you. The characters are the characters. I continue to come back for more as you can see. Thank you for sharing. It's been a pleasure reading you.Reviewer: Miss Shannon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/05/20 12:40 am
I want to re read this and review every chapter but for now I just need to say how much I love this and how her distrust still thrives after being physically intimate with him just like I expected it always would no matter what because of her training. It's going to take Jarod a lifetime to undo what the Centre did to them. That's why he should have been angry and closed that placed down back in season one so.... yeah I'm loving this. more please.Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/05/20 08:51 pm
Brilliant! I think of you plowing away writing all of the time and I feel guilty because I get to read you for free. You get nothing. I want you to know that you are appreciated, your stories mean something. You have made my month. The characters ARE the characters. You nail them every time. Thank you for sharing your talents. You have a gift trust me on that and you're probably too young to know what that means right now. I trust you'll finish this and not leave it unfinished for decades.
I feel a bit guilty that you believe I'm plowing away. I typically spend no more than eight minutes on a chapter. I don't sit down to type something unless I know it's ready to be purged from my mind. I don't research. i don't rewrite. I'd love to edit. I don't feel talented. I'm not that young. I wish I had the time to plow away. You all deserve more. Thank you for reading and reviewing and the kind words.Reviewer: James Signed [Report This]
Date: 22/05/20 03:45 am
Is Jarod really evil then? Errmm but Alex just told her what we all knew... omg that's right Parker doesn't know about her mother's diary or that Jarod has it. OMG!!!
Jarod has been a little evil all along..
You have a way of saying it where it's like gentle bad news and still shocking but... how can we redeem Jarod? Please say we can!! It's just impossible because he had her mother's diary... oh no. I'm going to cry now. Please update soon! You write so well and I just want more.
Reviewer: Jillian Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/05/20 11:21 pm
omg the doubt and inability to trust has to keep resurfacing because that can't change overnight.. i mean she was trained to hate and distrust him and chase him and all that and she said it herself in carthis so yes she would absolutely battle desire and intimacy and try to keep it separate. You say that subtly but yes I think it would keep coming back just like you've written and maybe one day with time she can trust him more and want to make love and be really intimate and not just f***.Reviewer: Jillian Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/05/20 10:07 pm
So I melted at Jarod's little death comment. I'm fluent in french and english and i love how you keep it real and global tossing in other languages. You're reallly pro!
Jarod's a reallly funny guy lol.
Date: 21/05/20 09:56 pm
OMG! I love it. Parker got there first and destroyed everything. I don't blame her. Forcing someone to parents... it's hard enough to be a parent without being forced into it. Very intense and emotional and those characters are very intense and emotional and it's so good to see someone who can write and do justice to them and this series.
Gahhh the heat in this part tho... so hot.
Reviewer: Jillian Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/05/20 09:52 pm
I always lol at this
Date: 21/05/20 08:59 pm
lol I love it. Brandt is no nonsense. He knows they don't have much control and that Jarod can take all control and exclude them. Your original characters are real and well written enough to stand up and alongside the ones I know and love already.
"We're sharing sconces with Jarod," Rachel asked with a violent headshake, "She's annoyed by him, but he won't leave her alone. He's bugged her home, he bugs her. She chases him, but he's loyal to her. Why is he loyal to her?"
Best line eva.Reviewer: Jillian Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/05/20 08:53 pm