You should be indulding the muse all you want. I love it. A surprise ending short story. You are the master! Or mistress lol. There were no typos and I wouldnt' care anyway. Gah, you're amazing. Keep writing.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Gunner. It's much appreciated.
Reviewer: Gunner Signed [Report This]Date: 31/08/14 02:14 am
Oh oh!! I love it Mirage. You are spectacular. I've read other stories where Jarod jails Miss Parker but never done so well. I'd love to see where your muse would take us all. Keep going please!
Author's Response:
Thank you, Simone. I'll have to consult with the muse. We shall see.
Reviewer: Simone Anonymous [Report This]Date: 31/08/14 01:51 am
Amazing! What a lovely surprise! I'm glad you let your muse lead. She's always right. This is brilliant as are all your other fics. Do continue. I love that Jarod is sorry about having her imprisoned. Very strong emotions and characters here. This is why you are my favorite author. Please give us more!
Author's Response:
Thank you, Dark Angel. I'm glad you enjoyed this.
Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed
[Report This]Date: 30/08/14 11:42 pm
Perfect. Your fiction always is! You conveyed more than the gooyeenss which I love you conveyed emotions and loss, time passing, so much. It was beatufiul and heartfelt. Please continue this. I've always wanted to see you take this direction.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing, Pretenderoxx. Mm I wasn't intending to continue this- but then, I wasn't intending to write this little ficlet either. We shall see.
Reviewer: pretenderoxx Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/08/14 08:08 pm
