OH YEAH, you updated it! My respects for writing with a little kid on your heels. Your new chapter is amazing and I'm so grateful you wrote it! This is AWESOME dialogue. with so much dynamic between the five of them. And the way you let them recapitulate the history of the red files is absolutely great written. So  much flow, so autentic. And to act like it is very much in character for Jarod. I hope Parker is going to wash his head :). I also love your humor - the part with the goldfish and how he grinned at parker - this was so beautiful. Needless to say: you made my day again! I'm looking forward very much to your next chapter, but you know that I am the most patient reader. I'll be here.

Have great time with your family! I love your daughter's name, i think I already said that, but it's worth repeating. Take care!