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Title: Chapter 16: Retaliation ain't no good

oh wow, what a temper. and to let him walk home? that's kinda mean. at jarod's place, I would be really pissed at her. yes, his lie about Lyle wasn't cool either. but that's completely overreacting. she made her point clear by not really kissing him and telling him to sleep on the couch that night.

anyway, it's a wonderful opportunity to establich family dynamics and you do that extraordinary well. also you show us the children's characters in relation to their parents a bit more and that's just beautiful.

i'm so grateful that you found the time to write although you're getting married. - congratulations!!! I wish you the very best and it seems you found it already. But there'll be more to come. Thanks so much! I'll be here, patiently waiting for your next chapter. Have a nice one



Author's Response:

Thanks Lipamo.

Yeah, maybe Miss Parker was a bit overreacting.

But I believe that after having her head filled with lies of her father for twenty years, she wouldn't be so accomodating if finding out that the only person she truly trusts was lying to her.

I promise, she's going to forgive J, don't worry.

And thanks, yes, I'm really happy for my incoming wedding. It's like a blessing.

Reviewer: lipamo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15/10/14 09:29 am
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