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Title: Chapter 7: The Ex Parade

I have to make myself stop here, pause to review. I'm enjoying this. They tackled the dreaded 'ex' conversation well, I think.

Aw the bunny- I always wondered where that little thing hopped away to. Oh, and I thought the smut in the previous chapters was perfect.

Very lovely.



Author's Response:

Smut is always difficult to write. That was what I was dreading the most ;) 

But the all 'ex' thing is something I always face in my fics because I can't stand the idea of something between the couple, and I don't like the idea of a 'cheating' Jarod, it just doesn't enter my mind. So if he's with Parker, he must have left Zoe. At least IMHO :) this was so fun to make up :) 

Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/09/14 11:07 pm
Title: Chapter 7: The Ex Parade

oh i love this so freaking much!



Author's Response:

Well this was only my fave part of the story, as you see I didn't save up words in this chapter.

I wanted them to talk about past lovers and I tried to imagine everything they have thought and felt with all of them.

Of course the most difficult moments always come with Tommy and Zoe (which I particularly loath).

But it's always so much fun to write Jarod's reaction when he realizes that he is actually in love with Parker and not with Zoe. And I usually write different scenes in every fiction I write. But I always feel obliged to describe Jarod's change of attitude towards Zoe, because when the show ended we didn't know what happened between them.

The only thing I'm always sure about is the fact that Alex was ESSENTIAL for him to understand his real feelings. That's why I love Alex so much!

Reviewer: lipamo Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/14 01:44 am
Title: Chapter 7: The Ex Parade

“What kind of genius would seriously ponder words coming from a insane sociopath?”  loved this line.  But, it got the point across to boy genius didn't it?



Author's Response:

You know that I added this line just before updating the chapter, while I was reading it to find mistakes? :) so glad you liked it. And I added the "n" I had forgotten, too. Thanks ;)

Reviewer: KSPretenderFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 31/03/14 03:41 pm
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