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Title: Chapter 5: First Times

that sex scene is so special. i love how you captrue jarods thoughts when he enters her and recognizes that she hadn't been with another man since tommy and how strong she was for him. also how they grief together and the way jarod lights their mood at the same time. so incredible well written. i'm so deeply impressed how you imagine all this.



Author's Response:

Well smut is not really my strong point. But I tried to write it down as I "feel" it.

I don't think between them would be something hard or "weird", you know as in other fanfics I've read.

I think it would be the most natural thing.

Reviewer: lipamo Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/14 02:30 pm
Title: Chapter 5: First Times

Loved this chapter.  The heart to heart between MP & J.  Finally talking to each other and not as adversaries.  I especially loved the part about Argyle running a casino called The Vatican.  Classic!  

Your smut was classy smut, not trashy smut.  It was absolutely fine.



Author's Response:

You know I love Argyle, I think he really is Jarod's best friend. I'm sure he totally trusts him, even to ask help for saving the lives of the people Jarod loves most.

And this heart-to-heart was really due. You know I'm a hopeless shipper, it was only a matter of time.

And I'm thankful for you comment about the smut part. That's not my strongest quality in writing, you know... =) Couldn't get much over that ;)

Reviewer: KSPretenderFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 31/03/14 03:24 pm
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