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Title: Chapter 2: Taking a Turning Point

I am reading it again - maybe gor the fourth time , i didnt count it - and it is still soo exciting and beautiful to read. It just doesnt get boring or old or anything. This quality - it makes it simply fine literature. Amazing. I should pay you fir evety word just because it is worth it.



Author's Response:

You're the best fan I have around here ;) You deserve a conclusion and I hope I'm getting to it. Be faithful! Roxy

Reviewer: lipamo Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/04/17 10:07 am
Title: Chapter 2: Taking a Turning Point

I'm re-reading this right now (not logged in, but well..) and i just have to tell you again how lovely this chapter is. i'm all over the moon about it. and the magnificent thing is, that it just goes on like this: so much atmosphere, that's as palpable like only the best fiction can. love it!



Author's Response:

And...you are very sweet ;)

Reviewer: lipamo Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/09/14 10:44 am
Title: Chapter 2: Taking a Turning Point

so incredibly sweet and so much authenticity .. like ~ "i hope for your sake that you eather rob me or kill me because I'm to tired for anything else" - that's sooooo fucking good, i was laughing in astonishment. love your writing,  but that's nothing new. by the way: i read one of phenyx stories and it was good, but the story a bit too strange and heavy (for me at least. it was the one when parker seduced him just to let lyle catch him and jarod changed into that emotionless businessman). so i still like your style and storylines better.

“I hope for your sake that you are here to kill me or rob me, because I’m too tired for anything else.” - See more at: http://www.pretendercentre.com/missingpieces/viewstory.php?sid=5650&textsize=0&chapter=2#sthash.KsPXOUeV.dpuf
“I hope for your sake that you are here to kill me or rob me, because I’m too tired for anything else.” - See more at: http://www.pretendercentre.com/missingpieces/viewstory.php?sid=5650&textsize=0&chapter=2#sthash.KsPXOUeV.dpuf
“I hope for your sake that you are here to kill me or rob me, because I’m too tired for anything else.” - See more at: http://www.pretendercentre.com/missingpieces/viewstory.php?sid=5650&textsize=0&chapter=2#sthash.KsPXOUeV.dpuf


Author's Response:

Yeah, I enjoyed writing that line. I know what story of Phenyx you're talking about and it's very cool. I love the way she describes J's faults and Parker's good qualities.

Anyway, I'm so glad you still enjoy my style, thanks :P

Reviewer: lipamo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/05/14 11:41 am
Title: Chapter 2: Taking a Turning Point

I'm enjoying it!  Can't wait for more.  Please!



Author's Response:

Ah Ah, thanks. And I'm going to add something new very soon, hopefully next week! :) Maybe before.

Reviewer: KSPretenderFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 29/01/14 04:04 pm
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