Loved this so much! You created a great mood through imagery and Miss P's thoughts. I enjoy seeing them interact after Carthis - there's a new energy between them after that story. Well done!!
Reviewer: Laura L Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/12/13 08:31 pm
I enjoyed the story. It was well-written. Sydney has always been favourite of mine. I feel like the romance is far too much, too soon to be realistic. That said, I'm not a shipper so my opinion doesn't hold much water in the world of Pretender-related romance and that's okay. :)
Reviewer: Tintinrulz Signed [Report This]Date: 16/12/13 12:00 pm
I'm afraid we'll never know her real name. Anyway until then we can imagine whatever we want, can't we? I loved this, every chance is good to think about them kissing. Thanks a lot!
Reviewer: missparker87 Signed [Report This]Date: 15/12/13 01:57 am
That's a good first name. :) Very sweet story!
Merry #CentreXmas :)
Date: 13/12/13 05:15 am
Hi just read your story it was good. Hope you have a Marry Christmas and a Happy New Year.
Reviewer: Katescats Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/12/13 07:07 am
Awww! That was sweet. Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response:
Hi there! It's been a while! Thank you so much for reading! I'm glad you liked it! I fixed the word count today because I just now realized I went over and went into a panic, LOL.
Reviewer: KSPretenderFan Signed [Report This]Date: 11/12/13 02:58 am