The PERFECT pretender xmas tale. Sequel? Jarod's going to know she killed Raines and he's going to have questions. Please make it so Queen!!
Reviewer: Xena Signed




Date: 17/11/23 07:18 pm
Love it so much. Merci!
Reviewer: MlleParker Signed




Date: 16/11/23 02:40 am
THIS! This is what I'd expect hols at the Centre to be like. Parker out seeking the BEST for Raines and boom there's Jarod and then Parker gives everyone the gift that keeps on giving. Raines being gone! This. I love this. So many good tidings and Christmas feels too. Christmas ain't Christmas without Ella singing Have Yourself a Merry Little Christmas. This is beautiful. The Gift. Pretender Perfect.
Reviewer: Revenant Signed




Date: 14/11/23 10:57 pm
It never gets old. I love this. It's the Centre meets the holidays in a legitimately plausible way. All that evil isn't going to take a holiday break. Raines dead is the best gift Parker could give herself.
Reviewer: needlepoint Signed




Date: 31/12/22 10:45 pm
Ahh the gift that keeps on giving... Raines out of their lives. Thank you for this. Still the best holiday story I've ever read . Happy Holidays Mirage.
Reviewer: Jen Signed




Date: 24/12/22 11:39 pm
Raines gone is THE gift that keeps on giving. This is my favorite holiday tale. Plausible and perfect. I would love to read more. This story can't be over.
Reviewer: Michael Signed




Date: 10/12/22 10:54 pm
Was feeling nostalgic for christmas and this always puts a smile on my face Mirage. Thank you.
Reviewer: Contessa Signed




Date: 13/07/22 12:19 am
Merci! You have no need for a beta. This is my supreme Christmas Pretender tale. I read all times of the year.
Reviewer: Garbiella Signed




Date: 19/05/22 09:25 pm
I hope you don't mind so many reviews all at once but I joined months ago and didn't have time to read and now I'm quarantined and binge reading lol! This is hands down my favorite pretender christmas story. It's beautiful and sweet but not so much that christmas cheer prevents Miss Parker from doing what she should have done a long time ago. I can think of no greater gift. I love this. It's like one of those christmas ghosts stories but with a centre styling.
Reviewer: Sammi Signed




Date: 07/01/22 12:38 am
Still in love with this story.
Reviewer: Ashley Anonymous




Date: 24/12/21 11:05 pm
Sequel. Sequel. Sequel!
I love this so much. The Centre would never stop the darkness for christmas.
Reviewer: thepretenderoxx Anonymous




Date: 23/12/21 06:39 am
It's cold where I am and my mum is sending me her speciality yule cookies so Im glad to have found this. Is the child Jarod and Parker's? How about a sequel? Continue writing. This is your calling.
Reviewer: Jeremy Signed




Date: 02/05/20 04:17 am
i'm still here and i still love this story. i hope you'll give us something christmasy again this year.
Reviewer: pretenderoxx Anonymous




Date: 23/12/19 11:21 pm
Oh, I love this. I wanted something Christmasy but not too much. I'm sick of hallmark christmas shows but I wanted something Pretendery and Christmasy and this it. Thank you. I love the chacterisataions how in character they are. I would like to see what happens next too but I see that you're also writing other fics. I may check those out too. I'm suppose to making cookie dough to freeze and wrapping pressies lol.
Reviewer: Mackenzie Rae Anonymous




Date: 20/12/19 06:01 am
You're a rock star. Xmas fics are usually sappy and cheesy. You put the typical american stuff we expected from an american tv series with the bells and the crowds in this but kept it classy with the music. Good choice. It was epic. Oh, and is the child hers and Jarod's. Can there be a sequel please? That ending... wowz. Amazing!! Happy hols!
Reviewer: Kelsea Anonymous




Date: 14/12/19 02:19 am
Oh this is a xmas story? I don't like xmas stories usually but I love this one. This is what xmas at the Centre would be like, too. The Centre doesn't stop being evil to give santa a chance to come. It's evil every day. I like that Jarod and Parker were both startled. He was afraid she'd brought sweepers. She was afraid he'd discover her intentions and stop her. This is probably the only xmas story where Jarod and Parker don't end up together and I appreciate that...which they never have a happy ever after in your stories anyway. It is trite but especially during the hols. She turned down his offer of dessert... and he would know where to find all the best desserts because he eats a lot! I'm so glad I saw this and decided to read it even if it is a xmas story. It wasn't cheesy at all.
Reviewer: Jameason Signed




Date: 15/08/19 10:19 pm
Ahhhh I love this. What a Centre xmas would be and everyone is in character. Bravo!
Reviewer: Melinda Anonymous




Date: 27/12/18 12:50 am
I always come back to this GIFT you've given us at Christmas. I love this. The gift of peace without Raines will surely keep on giving. This was epic! The Centre doesn't stop being evil just because it's Christmas and Miss Parker doesn't stop being bad ass just because of the time of year. Pretender Perfect. We know the child she thinks of is hers and Jarods isn't it? Was brilliant! Give us more gifts please.
Reviewer: The Miss Parker Signed




Date: 21/12/17 12:14 am
I always come back to this story at this time of year. Mirage you give us the greatest gift of all in keeping this fandom, The Pretender, Jarod, Miss Parker, Broots, Sydney, Lyle... all of it all of them alive. Thank you so much. Just...really I thank you so much.
Reviewer: needlepoint Signed




Date: 15/11/17 03:53 am
Hi just read your story I love it.
Reviewer: Katescats Anonymous




Date: 31/07/17 05:44 pm
This. I still love this so much. The original gift. To us from you. Thanks for staying true. Merci!
Reviewer: MlleParker Signed




Date: 29/09/16 07:28 pm
Ahhhhh. I alwasy visit this again and again. It's my favorite Christmas fic hands down of all time, all genre, fandom. Love it. I'd like a sequaal.
Reviewer: Miss Parkere Signed




Date: 29/12/15 03:55 am
It's fall and I'm reading a Christmas story lol. It's been here over a year and I just found it! Let me tell you something, girl, this is awesome! It's exactly what I imagine a Pretender Christmas fic should be. She is soooo nice to Jarod..I know she's trying to get out of there so she can her give her gift lol but I think afterwards she will get herself a rain check and get their child and they will live happily ever after, she with Jarod and their child and have their desserts. You should write a sequel and share it now...or at Christmas. The sooner the better. I know you aren't a Jarod/Parker shipper but we need more really great awesome fics. You write them so well Mirage, you stay true to the characters. And write a sequel to Nemesis too. I need more! You are so addicting. The crack cocaine of all of things Pretender. I need more!! Please!! ohh uhh!
Reviewer: Miss Parkere Signed [Report This]Date: 31/08/15 10:20 pm
OMG! I was so sure that I reviewed this and just read it again and don't ask me why I read xmas fics in flipping August either lol. This was amazing. First you open with the actual gift. You describe it perfectly and then tell us how and where Parker bought it and who she meets along the way....Yay Jarod! I love the playful chat between Jarod and Parker and how Christmasy everything is in the store....can't have xmas without Ella Fitzgerald and salvation army bells and you tie it up with your special Mirage bow and ribbon and end with the gift by having her give it Mr. Raines. THAT WAS FLIPPING AWESOME. When you care enough to send the very best. lol. "Of all the shops in all the cities in all the world, Frankenboy walks into this one" lmao! a twist on Casablanca. "We could," Jarod stammered hastily, and observed as Parker swung her gaze at him, "uh, there's a diner across the the street," he explained, hanging a thumb over his shoulder as he spoke, "that serves the best chocolate cream pie in the contiguous United States."
oooh you are so great with the characters and knowing Jarod he tried all the pies in the US to find out before saying that lol. Thank you for your gift Mirage. Keep on writing and giving us more gifts.
Reviewer: Jen Signed




Date: 20/08/15 03:48 am
I love this story so much. Christmas or not! The best.
Reviewer: Xena Signed




Date: 02/06/15 12:36 am