I really enjoyed reading this and hope you can write more soon. Your writting was perfect, didn't noticed any grammar problems at all.
I can't wait to find out what is Lyle talking about and especially why is Parker so upset - apparently because of it . enough for her to seek solace.
Keep it up and don't leave us waiting for too long.
Reviewer: Vania Signed [Report This]Date: 24/09/13 10:54 pm
I'm with Nath. I am intrigued and didn't notice poor grammar whatsoever. Please continue.
Reviewer: KSPretenderFan Signed [Report This]Date: 16/09/13 03:31 am
Well, I'm intrigued! Like, like, like. Wanna know why the sudden visit, and what Lyle is talking about. Keep going :)
Reviewer: Nath Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/09/13 12:22 am