Ohhh I'm realizing that the Queen of Darkness Mirage is also Queen of the HOT. You are a versatile one. You don't write smut, really. It's classy not trashy, it's anatomically correct, no slang, It's dirty without being gross You say exactly what is going on so that we know because sometimes authors will be like "down there" and I'm like, "Florida? Australia? Toes? The floor? Where down there?" I want to know where the tongue is, so thank you. I'm gotta get a shower. I gotta grab the machine in the drawer first but then a shower. HOT.Reviewer: Revenant Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/11/23 10:52 pm
STILL the HOTTEST piece of fiction EVERRRR!
I don't even mind the plot!! I hate plot. But this was cool! It was worth reading through the plot to get to the goody!!
Now I have a question. Don't panic. I'm not going to harass you about Michael T. Weiss. You don't have to get a selfie with him and you two don't have to kiss or even hug or anything like that. You two don't even have to touch. I'm not accusing you of not wanting to touch him either. I'm not going to ask you if you're stand offish or SHY either. Are you shy tho? Or is the not wanting to bother him? I guess I get that. It's just weird. Most people don't mind bothering the really hot celebrities. It's just a selfie and a hug and a kiss and some touching, it's not like I'm asking to have his baby or money...
I just want to ask you a ONE question. What if he showed up here and read your work ORRRRRRrrr what if I met him and pulled up this page on my phone and showed YOUR writing to him?
Would you physically hurt me if I did that? Would you completely freak out? Would you scream? Cry? Say bad words? Call me bad names?
You wouldn't leave 4ever over a little something like that would you? I don't want you to leave. I want you to stay.I would like to know your reaction.
My question to you is IF Michael T. Wiess came on this site OR was shown this sight, and he read some of your writing what you do?
Be serious please.
Keep writing. I love you to the moon Girl!
I'm straight up ignoring the parts of your review that are too much, which doesn't leave a lot to address.
There isn't anything I can do if you go darkside and introduce him to the delightful horrors of fanfic hell, but if you care about him the way you claim to care about him you won't do it, because when you care about someone you want to protect them from the horrific. Incidentally, Brutus, I'm the horrific.
If you like him, and if you absolutely MUST show him something show him a smol cat, a genuine criminal cat. Showing someone a cat (gif/meme/photo/video/living, breathing, mrowing cat) is the universal language of kindness and love. It means you care about them, and that you want them to be happy. It's a grand gesture. The peson might even laugh if the cat is being silly, and it's always nice when you can bring a smile to someone's face.
I will answer the other question, because if I don't you'll simply ask it again, and I'd like to permanently shut down this kind of talk: I'm not going to panic. The word "panic" shouldn't even be included in any conversation regarding him. It's senseless, really. Please try to stay on topic if you review me again, and limit your review to the characters, the scribblings, Pretender lore and theory. Thanks.Reviewer: Lorraina Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/09/23 06:20 pm
I'm not the biggest smut fan..like you. You say you don't like writing it but you are quite accomplished at it. This was tastily written. The plot, grammar, solid storytelling, and writing skill was strong enough to carry the story and strong enough to beat the smut.
If it had been tasteless, blind smut and excessive slang which always make me chuckle and is like comedy to me I might have laughed and not reviewed and it wouldn't have been a memorable read but you know where the boundaries are, and you're a wordsmith and everything I've read by you so far has been memorable and brilliant. Please continue writing. Perhaps you can even find it in your heart to write a sequel to this, a post transcendence update.Reviewer: Kyle McLane Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/23 07:28 pm
Reading this again..I love it.
It's really in character. You really know the characters and where to put them. Have you ever considered writing and directing a movie? You'd be terrific.
I love the picture you added to the summary too. That look they share after they are interrupted...ohhh uhh. They are so shocked by what they almost did.Reviewer: Cal Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/06/23 09:28 pm
I read this last night and I still am speechless. I shy away from smut sometimes because of the slang. Like if the characters are slanging and dirty talking each other it's not so bad but mostly I only go in for that trash talking IRL. I can't stand the narrator using slang at all tho. This is perfect. It has plausible plot and then the most steamy dirty smut written in the classiest most tasteful language ever and so I can see what they're doing and I understand what's happening. I read a pretender smut story by another author once and I couldn't tell which orifice Jarod was poking around in. It was so confusing. You make it really clear what's going on. I'm still speechless. I've never read anything this hot. It's hot plot smut. It's delicious. I love that ending. Jarod wont' give up but doesn't seem stalky about it. I love how in character they always are when you write them. I love everything about your stories and your writing and voice. You have a cohesiveness, so much skill. That's all know to say. I'm still speechless. This story will stay with me always. All stars.Reviewer: April L Signed [Report This]
Date: 18/05/23 02:45 am
I met someone in real life yesterday who is also a Pretender fan and he recommended you and this novella and I just loled because I already have this and you in my favorites 😂 and I was like yeah I know Mirage rules. He agreed. This is hot and smutty and also has serious elements and plot and hope. It's wonderful and I love it.Reviewer: Cal Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/23 05:41 pm
*whistles* Holy smokes! It's almost uncomfortable how IN character they are when sex is involved. I feel like I'm peeking in a window at them. I won't mind if you write more like this. Very classy and tastefully done and with plot. "I've half a mind to introduce myself." I can hear him say that. You're really good at this.Reviewer: richie Signed [Report This]
Date: 31/01/23 09:12 pm
I'm in a smut mood today. You only have 4 offerings. You can do better than that, methinks. Smut, no plot, just mindless, endless nasty things going on with Jarod and Miss P. Please write more smut. This is hands down my favorite smut piece of all time because it's from Jarod's POV which isn't something I see often. Is it true that you don't like writing Parker POV smut because you have to write "me", "mine", "I" while writing about Jarod and sex? I get that if it's true and it can be weird but I know you can do it skillfully and HOTLY. This novella is steamy and perfection. You took the genre to an entirely higher level. Congrats!Reviewer: Monica Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/09/22 08:52 pm
This is so satistying and has aged brilliantly. It's my favorite Pretender story of all time. Any chance that I can bribe a sequel out of you. I love Jarod's "I've half a mind to introduce myself."
I can see that and I understand. Having sex with him would be so stunning. They were both so stunned and so satisfied. It's hot. I love it. I love that it's not just smut too. Real emotion just like on my dvds, and a plausible crime scene and reason for them to meet up that way. I love it. Can't say it enough. Mirage you should be writing novels.Reviewer: Sela Signed [Report This]
Date: 18/08/22 07:04 pm
Just saw the images you posted on some of your stories mate and well played. They do look shocked here after almost being caught kissing by a blind woman, and in the story they are both shocked and ready to blame each other. They look so bloody shocked here. Good choice mate for a perfect Pretender one off. I don't go in for smut usually but this was a crime scene and had some action and it seems inevitable on the series you gave us what the networks failed to give us.Reviewer: King Of Pain Signed [Report This]
Date: 13/04/22 11:30 pm
*Fans self* This is hot. I'm serious. I love this so much. It's not just hot. It's also professionally written and not cheesy and not trashy. It's still in character and classy. It can't be an easy line to dance along and not cross. Well done. I hope you'll update this.Reviewer: Sammi Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/01/22 12:33 am
Please to a sequel? I love this.Reviewer: Kelli Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/03/21 02:39 am
This is THE best thing I've ever read in my entire life. I'm serious. The characters were easily recognized and fleshed out and their dialogue is what I'd expect from these two. You move them well and transition brilliantly. I'm hella impressed!
Please write a sequel and please never stop writing for us.Reviewer: Lana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/02/21 03:00 am
This is incredible work, the way you set up the crime scene and plot, the reasons Jarod and MP are there and then transitioning into the more erotic parts but keeping it plausible by having MP uncertain about a life with him. SHe chased him, is suppose to hate him. She has to admit she never hated him. I don't think it would be easy. You recongize the complications. Really descriptive erotica there. I don't mind. I was a little shocked. Well done.Reviewer: Jeremy Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/20 04:24 am
Bravo! This is magnificent and the characters, my dear, are the characters and in their proper places. I've only ever seen them this in character when they were on NBC and you bring back all sorts of fantastic memories. I've been out of touch with this series for fifteen years and I'm glad to see some new faces in fanfic and I want to see more of you and more often. The talent is strong with you Mirage. As an aside I want to say that smut makes me blush but it was appropriate here and well written. They are adults and adults have sex. I applaud you for using anatomically correct terminology and not the childish trashy slang. This is classy. You seem like a classy person. I won't assume your gender as my children tell me that's not cool. Are you never planning to continue this? It's very good. I see you have a few other stories that I plan to read when time allows. Thank you for keeping this old series alive.Reviewer: James R. Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 28/10/19 04:52 am