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Title: Chapter 5

I could read this chapter a hundreds times, and I think I did. The two final scenes at the motel and at Ben's are AWESOME, I love the way they interact now that they're on the run together, it's amazing what you wrote for Parker's emotions after she saw Jarod coming out from the shower!! Really I can see the whole moment in my head so clearly!! Thanks a lot!! 



Author's Response:

Thanks again! (and yes, I keep replying to you both here and on ff.net because you review at both places! :D)

 Reviewer: missparker87 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/09/13 08:04 am
Title: Chapter 5

Where's the rest?  Where's the baby?  Don't stop here!  :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! A sequel will come in about two months, I think. It'll answer your questions, I think.

 Reviewer: Kelly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/07/13 02:53 am
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