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Title: Gone (Part VII)

"What the hell, Jarod"... that's definitely Kyle. Thank you for bringing him back and in a way that is more plausible than the heart donation storyline thing from the tv series because as a nurse I can tell you the heart isn't likely to be any good to anyone if it hasn't been perfused and the only way to do that is to keep the donor body on a respirator. Even with that, some hearts can't be used due to sepsis and other issues. Given what we saw on the show it's impossible that Kyle's heart would have been of any use. AS of now there are new devices that improve this, keeping the heart warm and monitoring the heart's vitals. When I first read your explanation for Kyle still being alive I screamed aloud because you got it right. I've been saying for years that the heart would have been medical waste. I think you probably have some medical training. Anyway the characters are just as I remember them except maybe wiser. You do a job good of developing them and also creating and developing your own original characters. I feel blessed to read you, blessed that this fandom has a Mirage to wow us. Thanks for being you and thanks from all of my heart for writing and sharing your talent with us.



Author's Response:

Thank you, Jameason, for reading and for the lovely review. 

Reviewer: Jameason Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/11/17 07:28 pm
Title: Gone (Part VII)

I conitinue to be impressed Mirage. I hope real life won't keep you away from us so long in the future. You are sorely missed. More, please?



Author's Response:

I'm sorry about that. Sometimes real life will keep me away and it can't be helped. More will be posted soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: needlepoint Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/11/17 03:39 am
Title: Gone (Part VII)

Oh . My... God... Mirage Mirage! I wish I knew a real name to call you by but Mirage is good too. Imma gonna second what Twisted said. I know you don't want us to say negative things about Craig and Steve... and I don't want to piss you off. Twisted is braver than I am so refer back to that review again. You need to be writing the official novels. Until you are I will keep considering your writing the official Pretender story. The clarity you write with and our ability to flesh out the characters...yeah, honey you've gone and outdone the creators. Keep writing please. I totally honesty love your writing style and stories even the more graphic ones. I am worried about Miss Parker... she's not dead is she? Oh god more please?!!



Author's Response:

Please don't speak that way about those men. Please. There are many things I should be doing or need to be doing but what I'm actually doing here is writing fan fic and it's not official and most of the time I revolve my eyes at what I've written and then shrug and publish it anyway. It is what it is. I don't believe I've outdone anyone. I'm not competing with anyone (except myself). I'm glad you're liking this but let's be realistic. Okay? Moving on. Miss Parker probably isn't dead but who knows? Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Christoph Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/11/17 08:06 pm
Title: Gone (Part VII)

This reads like a murder (and it had better NOT be Miss Parker's murder) mystery. With a huge amount of humor injected (thanks to little Miss Parker tormenting Jarod).

I'm very keen to discover what happens next. I wish you could devote every waking hour to this (and all your fan fictions) but I realize you do have a life. It's enough that you write and update your stories frequently. Thank you for that!I

I remain very appreciative of your talent. I wish you were a Hollywood producer with millions of dollars so you could film an ending to the Pretender seriies. I still feel Craig and Steven should turn over the right to you since you are willing to keep Jarod and company alive!



Author's Response:

Aw thank you, Twisted, for reading and reviewing. You are extremely kind. I appreciate every review.

Reviewer: twisted Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/11/17 12:58 am
Title: Gone (Part VII)

More please! Oh godd girl you rock. Your writing is amazing!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Missy.

Reviewer: Missy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/11/17 11:15 pm
Title: Gone (Part VII)

Oh yass! Honey every time I see that you've updated I scream and worry the neighbors and upset my pugs. Little Miss Parker always has had a smart mouth and I so love that she's still in character and still driving Jarod nuts. Ethan's POV of Jarod was really telling...that's when I knew how badly Jarod was handling Parker's abduction. I know he almost struck Rachel in the previous chapter but when his eyes are saying one thing and his mouth is saying something else...ahhh I love your words. Mirage thank you so much for writing and sharing your work. You keep the fandom alive and wow, those characterizations are so spot on! More, please?



Author's Response:

Thank you, Dark One.

Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/11/17 03:48 am
Title: Gone (Part VI)

Oh thank YOU! Please don't stop. I mean like ever. Just keep all the stories going you know. Forever. LOVE Your stories.

 



Author's Response:

Well, I have to stop eventually. Ha. Thanks, Christoph, for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Christoph Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/08/17 01:55 am
Title: Gone (Part VI)

Am laughing out loud at your author chapter note at the top. HE DOES HAVE IT COMING. And I love Jarod so... jus sayn.

Great work Mirage and I can tell you put effort and thought into it no matter what you say. These characters POP off the screen in much the same way they do when I POP the Pretender dvds into my player and watch them. Superb writing!

So you told me in email that you had something new planned for fall and that won't be long now. Just reminding you. I know you already have 4 or 5 fics in the works at the same time but I want more! I looked at your stories just now and most of them begin between August and November. Hmmmmmm interesting Mirage.



Author's Response:

He DOES have it coming. I'm glad you can read anything I write and laugh. Okay. I wish I had the time to put effort and thought into anything. I did mention a new story (because apparently I don't have enough of them). Strange. There is something about Autumn. And - what do you know: as of a few moments ago it's Sept. 22 (it's official). Thanks for reading and reviewing, Gunner.

Reviewer: Gunner Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/08/17 07:17 pm
Title: Recompense

I absolutely loved this! I really did.:) I can't wait to come back and read more. All the characters feel very spot on. I didn't jump to this story right away because by the summary, I thought it would be a Raines/Kyle centered story with Jarod long since dead and having no parts in it.

Instead I opened paradise. The use of the vocabulary and clear detailing really made this a fantastic read. You captured the characters extremely well, and as soon as Jarod took her from the Centre, I was hooked. This is a new and interesting world you've painted up in here. Keep splashing.



Author's Response:

Hi, Serenaspacey. Thank you for reading and the extremely generous review. You're so kind. Also: I see you've posted a fic (I'm not ignoring) and I look forward to reading and reviewing it when I'm not completely swamped. Welcome to the fandomly.

Reviewer: Serenaspacey Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/08/17 01:27 pm
Title: Gone (Part VI)

Wow. That went fast and was amazing. You're writing like six stories like a boss and I can't even write one at a time without getting blocked. How do you do it?

And they are all high quality Pretender-calibre stories. Mind. Is. Blown. I need more of this in my life! Thank you for giving us Little Miss Parker in Big Miss Parker's absence. I'll take the snark in any form I can get it. So plausible, so well written and in character like they are my The Pretender dvds. Please please don't stop now Mirage.



Author's Response:

Not like a boss, Jen. It's just fan fic. Mm. I've never been blocked. I'm the opposite. The words spill out of my fingers and all over the page. What a mess! And there's a constant stream of ideas. Tell me how you get blocked? I'd like to know. Thank you for reading and reviewing, Jen.

Reviewer: Jen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/08/17 12:45 am
Title: Gone (Part VI)

Oh YES! Mirage. This chapter is thrilling, frightening, humorous, enraging, filled with suspence, action, angst, tragedy, and adventure AND heartbreaking and just- god. It's drama at its finest sweetie aww I love it. All in under 2000 words! Wow!

The back and forth between Little Miss Snarker lol and Jarod is perfect. I love it. "Nancy Drew" "Einstien" "Wise Guy" lol. You added just enough of the funny to keep us from losing our minds about missing Parker. Top notch Mirage and all around solid chapter. Thank you for keeping these characters alive (MISS PARKER IS ALIVE AND WILL CONTINUE TO BE RIGHT?). Thank you for staying true to the story.



Author's Response:

Hello, Dark One. Suspence? Mm. Action? Really? I had no idea. I am being punk'd. Yes, Miss Parker is alive (of course). Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/08/17 09:41 pm
Title: Gone (Part VI)

LOVE this chapter! It's hilarious. Jarod does deserve to be tormented and who better to torment him then little Miss Parker. I bet they got into loads of trouble when they were younger.

I also LOVE that he handcuffs Rachel to a bed. I never liked her. Either as a potential partner for Jarod nor on the Profiler. When Miss Parker is rescued (or rescues herself more likely) I hope she kicks Rachel's A-!

Thank you for updating this story! And as always thank you for breathing life into the characters. You keep them alive for me which is no small feat!

Reviewer: twisted Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/08/17 07:50 pm
Title: Gone (Part VI)

Still haven't gotten my password to work but dear I'm here and I love this story so much and would love to add it to my favs but.. oh well. Anyhoo you wrote Little Miss Parker brilliantly again.. the petulance and precociousness, the snark. It's brilliant. Her "ew you're sleeping with her" had me loling. Sex is gross at that age and Mirage...but then I stopped laughing because I realized something. You show how children feel about sex and then Jarod and Rachel discuss the abductors and "child prostitution" and how children can't legally consent...with Little Miss Parker's "ew" still fresh in the reader's mind... not to belabor the point but to make us feel something to take us back to childhood when we thought "ew" about sex and now to put us in the shoes of children forced into prostitution to show us that no children don't consent to that because it's "ew". It takes my breath away and it hurts me in my soul. Again I wonder why you are here and not on a best seller's list and I'm grateful to you. You did it subtly too and without getting political.

The way Jarod goes off in his mind about setting the record straight on child prostitution...chilll bumps on my skin. I think you are very similar to Jarod in more ways than you want to admit...and so you can't really hate him can you?

The need for justice comes through in every story you write, the way you protect victims, the way you express empathy and sympathy for victims and what you said about calling a fucking spade a spade and I agree with you and with Jarod (peas in a pod you two) it shouldn't be called child prostitution it should be called paying to rape children because that's what the monsters do...and monsters...

I got the word monsters from another of your stories. I don't think I'm reading more into this than there is... so don't go there. You don't have to get defensive or try to avoid answering my Pretender fanmily friend. You don't even have to respond to this.

You have a sweet soul and a kind heart and and a special careful way with words and you probably have to so people who support a certain politician that trafficked beauty contestants and grabs women by the genitals won't be offended by the truth. We forget about politics and think of only the victims. It's magical Mirage.

 

More please? I hope Jarod finds Parker and the girls alive and well.

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Date: 24/08/17 07:25 pm
Title: Gone (Part V)

ooh this is so awesome! i love how your storyline develops and how you draw our two favorite characters. absolutely in love with this story - i am deeply impressed with your writing skills. i am so very much looking forward to your next chapter!

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Date: 04/07/17 05:03 am
Title: Recompense

wow. damnit wow. makes me a little uneasy... she is a damn hard one. i wonder what needs happen in order to make her open up

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Date: 03/07/17 06:34 pm
Title: Demons

hmm.. does she lie to kyle? i guess so but she would have done it anyway just to find a way to get even with him..

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Date: 03/07/17 05:53 pm
Title: Tension

oh damn you brought rachel into it. although i realy like her character amd i think she is good for jarod. but first and foremost i root for our starcrossed pair to finally be un-starcrossed. they only have to really tell each other what they feel i guess. and for that happening.. i am stoked to see how you make it happen..

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Date: 03/07/17 05:44 pm
Title: Unfinished Business

whaaaat is going on!? biti live to be in parker's clueless shoes. her üerspectiveis wonderfully wrong and ehr deveöopement great to see. also how kyle and her were bonding over they common experience with brutality after her defending that little girl... love it.

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Date: 03/07/17 05:20 pm
Title: Exile

oookay wow this developement is wonderful. i am addicted damnit

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Date: 03/07/17 05:10 pm
Title: An Ace in the Hole

how can he still fight him? how deeply integrated is this urge to fight her feelings? but i am so stoked to see where you are leading them...

Reviewer: lipamo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/07/17 04:59 pm
Title: Flight of Fancy

never have i ever seen this coming. what a bold decision from jarod. wow. love to imagine her face at this sight. awesome twist!

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Date: 03/07/17 04:41 pm
Title: Help

oooh so good

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Date: 03/07/17 05:13 am
Title: Welcome Back, Jarod

oh my gash.. this was the plan - no wonder parker was more than sceptical. or maybe her involvement to this extent was her idea? i am stoked!

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Date: 02/07/17 08:47 am
Title: Truce?

at least they didnt kill each othef.. but you know we all want mooore

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Date: 01/07/17 05:49 pm
Title: Silent Treatment

oh wow.. so many emotions wonderful on display and hodden - love it.

Reviewer: lipamo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/07/17 05:37 pm
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