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Title: Chapter 1

Hi that was a good story

Reviewer: Katescats Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/04/19 07:32 pm
Title: Chapter 5

Oh, naughty, naughty Jarod. Very sweet fic with a twisted dark ending. Very nicely done. I hope to read more and more from you and perhaps a sequel to this fic to see how Miss Parker copes with being rendered unconscious and abducted by Frankenrat?



Author's Response:

Well some mysteries are best left undisturbed but I'm intrigued u think Jarod is anughty, why the young cherub has no clue what there doing. However if My Troll Sam inspires me then I'think u might have a sequeal.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/04/13 12:18 am
Title: Chapter 4

Oh wow. What a clever child she is. I love this original character and love too the way she asked pointedly whether or not Parker would join them. Great job.



Author's Response:

Yes, isn't she a clever one amazing what two red files can create. Every once and a while I toy with an orginal. Yes it's always nice how a child can voice there own mind. Thank you.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/04/13 12:13 am
Title: Chapter 3

I didn't see that one coming. So short. But very nice.



Author's Response:

Well with any good story the idea is never to be seen until it's needed. Yes I keep them short for the reader. Yes as nice as I can be.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/04/13 12:09 am
Title: Chapter 1

(how did I miss this one?) Very nice. Very short chapter, but so much content. Very curious now.



Author's Response:

Because being missed is how u begin to cherish. Yes I like to keep the chapters short but full of plot it makes for a happy reader. Stay curious and more treasures will be found.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/04/13 12:05 am
Title: Chapter 5

please continue! I want to read about Miss Parkers reaction to Jared shooting her and taking her.



Author's Response:

Aww the ever serious moment of shoot first and abduct. Hope u enjoy.

Reviewer: charmed Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/03/13 11:47 pm
Title: Chapter 1

This is very original story!Looking forward to your next fic!



Author's Response:

Thank you hope you enjoy every one of them.

Reviewer: dimana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/03/13 08:39 pm
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