Yes, of course, we like the story. It's good to see the pair engage in playful banter. I'd even say that they were flirting. Mhm, they were. Agent Zane tied loose ends up rather nicely I think. Again, I enjoyed Jarod's concern for his pregnant huntress. Well done, Miss Parker.
Date: 07/09/13 08:59 pm
Lovely, MissParker. I'm still reading and very much enjoying. You know, this chapter wasn't sappy at all. It was perfect. They are so cute together and obviously have feelings for each other. Yes, together. Jarod's concern for her and the baby is sweet. He is just absolutely like-able when you write him.
Mirage, your revies are so much appreciated... Well I know for a non-shipper this chapter might be too emotional, but I guess Parker's would be the only voice that would wake Jarod up. And you know how sweet he is, he always thinks about other people before than himself, so I guess the first things he would ask about would be Parker and the babies' condition... I love to see him as the sweet generous Pretender we all love...:)Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/13 08:48 pm
Thank you for this awesome journey. Your English is fine and so are your writting skills. I definitely hope to read some more of your stuff soon.
Thanks Vania. That's sweet coming from you! Thanks a lot!Reviewer: Vania Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/08/13 01:30 pm
Can't wait to read what "surprise" you will write next. Love your idea of bringing all the people Jarod has helped and how they all coming to him to show their supports.
Thanks! Well the story is almost over. I know it's very long, but I hope that you're going to enjoy the ending...Reviewer: cle J&P shipper Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/07/13 08:18 am
I love how you portray Ethan as not so much a tortured soul. How he found his way with the help of his mother. This is great. I'm still reading!
Yes, I thought Ethan might be able, just as Jarod, to find his own place in the world. And his mother voice might be very helpful!Reviewer: KSPretenderFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/07/13 03:28 am
I love this story so far. I like that you're tying up lose ends and that there was more to their relationship even back to the beginning.
Thanks KSP. Yep, my main idea was "Hey, what questions didn't have an answer?". So here we are! I hope you're going to enjoy the next chapters too!Reviewer: KSPretenderFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 23/07/13 07:49 pm
I'm still enjoying this, missparker87. Wow. And the plot thickens! I'm looking forward to an update.
Thank you so much, Mirage. I'm updating in the afternoon, hopefully a couple of chapters!Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/07/13 04:13 am
Love your story. It's fun reading a story with romance, suspense, and humor in it. Very much enjoy the idea that Jarod is not the only genius around.
Date: 23/05/13 08:54 am
Very nicely done. Wow, I can just imagine the look on Jarod's face upon hearing the news. I'm eager to know what those two will do now that they know the truth. I anxiously await the next installment.
Hey thanks for the nice comments Mirage!!! I'm very happy you're reading this. I'm actually over with this fic, even if I'm updating it more slowly because I had a beta-angel who's helping me with the translation! Anyway I'm going to put a few new chapters on line during the next days. It's getting more and more intriguing, and you're right. Jarod's face might have been priceless to see. And it's not over yet, the best (worst?!) is yet to come! Thanks for reading!Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/04/13 12:02 am
awesome story! cant wait for more
Thanks "tj", I'm glad you're reading it. This is going to be veeeeeeery long, I hope you're keeping reading the next parts too. I promise I upload something very soon!Reviewer: tj Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 31/01/13 09:36 pm
Can't wait for the next part!!!
I'm very glad you liked it! More is coming soon! :)Reviewer: dimana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 28/01/13 09:45 am
Awwwww! Thanks for sharing! I love, love Miss Parker and Jarod.
Thanks for the review. And more is coming soon... :)Reviewer: Monika Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/01/13 08:22 am
Don't apologise for Castle quotes!! It's good to have cross-fertilisation of ideas...even in fanfics...keeps things interesting! I love Castle so I may be a bit biassed!
Great job so far, especially considering your language barrier! Loving the journey!
Such an honor to have you commenting here too. Thanks, A. It's most because of you ;)Reviewer: Miss Parker Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/01/13 12:34 am
I like it. It's sweet like chocolate ;) I like the flashbacks and how they talk about the past. I'd like to read more. :)
Thank you MissCatherine. I'm updating soon, I hope in the next days...;)
I'm glad you're enjoyin my fic! Thanks!Reviewer: MissCatherine Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/12/12 01:21 pm