I should have known that when you rate 'R' your story, you really mean it:):)
Jarod is a real freak here and I can't wait to see whether M.P. is going to pay him for all this:)
Author's Response:
Hi, Kama, thanks for reading and reviewing. Oh, yes, R means R. Always. Jarod has grown into a true freak in this fic. Oh, yes, Kama, I believe Parker is going to return the *ahem* favor (favors) to Jarod. Coming soon.
Reviewer: Kama Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/07/13 07:33 pm
Holy hell, Mirage. That was freaking amazing and hot! And amazingly well written. I agree with Twisted. Craig and Steven should employ you! Update all your fics soon PLEASE!!! I'm going to eat some fruit some. Lol.
Author's Response:
Haha, thanks for reading and reviewing, Dark One. Again, I appreciate the kindness but- well, it's embarrassing. The bowels of literature. I think you guys feel sorry for me? Or this is a joke? Or shall I abandon fan fic and submit original work somewhere? I suddenly want to be a writer MORE than I want to be the sweeper that drags Jarod back to the Centre! (I fear I have snow ball's chance in hell of either happening). Ah! I digress. Fruit is good for you! An apple a day...
Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed
[Report This]Date: 21/07/13 05:29 am
I have no idea what to say... I was sitting for 5min thinking 'what just happened?' after reading the last chapter...
Update... soon please...
I'll never look the same at fruits...
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nathalie. I know. Shame on me for using fruit. I will update soon.
Reviewer: Nathalie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/07/13 02:20 am
WOW! That was worth the wait! So f-ing HOT! Jarod is a true sociopath in this. I hope at some point Miss Park regains control and tortures HIS ass!
I so much enjoy your writing. Steve and Craig really should employ you as a writer in some capacity in this new journey of theirs. You are the only one worthy of it.
As always thanks so much for writing and even more important updating which must be hard considering how many stories you have.
Please please PLEASE Dom Mirage, don't make me wait to long for the next chapter of this! It would be TORTURE!
Author's Response:
Thank you, twisted, for reading and reviewing. You're right: Jarod deserves some sweet torture too; that should be great fun indeed!
Now, now, twisted, Craig and Steven are professionals. They are The Pretender writers. I, on the other hand, write fan fic. Haha. See? I'm only a pretend writer. Don't get me wrong: it would be an incredible opportunity (even to write on a voluntary basis with them) with, of course, the added bonus of truly loving one's job. Sounds lovely! Sign me up.
Apologies. I must torture you for a little while (I have other fics to update) longer. I will update this in the coming weeks.
Thanks again, twisted
~Dungeon Mistress Mirage
Reviewer: twisted Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/07/13 02:51 pm
Mirage I don't know what to say only that I love this and oh my god!!! The things you describe make me feel so strange. I can see this happen!! I lvoe your writing style.PLease update all your fics soon. I will reading you no mater what happens with the continuniation I feel sure Craig and steven can't do any better!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks, MlleParker, for reading and reviewing. The things I write ARE strange so it's perfectly natural to feel so. ( Bourbon helps.) Ah, now, on the contrary: Craig and Steven actually do this for a living; they are pros. That's more than I can say for me. I read these types of reviews and feel like I'm being made the butt of some joke. I wish I were a truly gifted writer (Shirley Jackson, Parker, Whetley, O'Connor, King, James, et cetera). Perhaps "practice" will eventually "make perfect". Until then, I remain in literary purgatory.
Reviewer: MlleParker Signed [Report This]Date: 20/07/13 11:27 am
So I decided to buy 50 Shades of Grey out of curiosity... pretty good book I think... but what was my surprise when in the middle of book two a familiar name came to view... the name of Grey's assistant... Andrea... Parker? Thought it was funny since I bought the books after reading this FF :)
Please update soon Mirage, I'm sure you're really busy but you're one of those writers we cannot stop reading :)
Reviewer: Nathalie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 13/11/12 11:46 am
Chapter two was awesome to! Can't go wrong with sex when you write it so well...d we don't mind how dirty it gets. You just gotta have faith in yourself. Please update soon.
Reviewer: Christoph Signed [Report This]Date: 11/10/12 11:17 pm
:) I'm not a fan of smut but your fics are extremely well done, and easy to follow. They are eloquent and clear... you have a firm grasp of these characters.. your stories are believable. I hope you never stop writing.:) Thnx for sharing your imagination and supporting authors by reviewing. :)
Reviewer: Angel Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/10/12 09:36 am
This will actually be my THIRD attempt at a review! I read Chapter One whilst returning from the Folsom Street Fair so it was at the time very apropos. I reviewed Chapter Two earlier as well but evidently it doesn't work on Androids! Hence this my third attempt.
LOVE this story!! Have had many a fantasy about Jarod and Miss Parker in various S&M and B&D scenarios [of course MP was always the Dominatrix in them! :-) ].
Thank you for this! I am very much looking forward to reading more. And thanks as always for not only writing but taking the time to update and finish. It is VERY much appreciated!!
Reviewer: twisted Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/10/12 03:07 am
Girl..or do you perfer master?..I can't stop reading this! Had to grab the boyfriend after last chappie and Jarod hasn't touched her yet other than to massage! Very erotic! And love Parker's reactions and Jarod's near loss of control. Thank whoever you overheard talking about shades. lol Lol @ your chapter 1 review repsonse.
Author's Response:
I prefer Master. Ha. Thanks again for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed [Report This]Date: 02/10/12 02:24 am
Ooh, smut biscuit time and they are so in character, uhhyum. I love this already! Thanks for keeping our favorite show alive with your stories.
Reviewer: LD Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/10/12 06:34 am
WOW!
Even better than Chapter One which I just noticed my review for was not posted! :-( Which is too bad as I read it coming home from the Folsom Street Fair do it was quite apropos!
I LOVE this story! I have long imagined various S&M and B&D scenarios for J/MP. Of course in most of them MP was the Dom!
Thank you for this. Looking forward to more! And as always thank you for not only writing but updating and finishing!!
Author's Response:
Ah, the Folsom Street Fair. That sounds like fun. Darn. I live on the wrong coast. Well, I'm glad that you are loving this. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Twisted.
Reviewer: twisted Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/09/12 05:46 pm
As always Mirage,
brilliant story, and it fits so well. i read fifty shades .
then , I was wondering why there is no J & P story, but now thanks Mirage.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, Preity.
Reviewer: Preity Anonymous [Report This]Date: 29/09/12 03:24 pm
Hey! Where did my review go? I first read this story last Sunday on the way home from the Folsom Street Fair so my response was very apropos. :-(
Regardless I think it's a FANTASTIC beginning! I have to admit I have had several S&M/B&D fantasies about J/MP (of course SHE is usually the one in Dom gear :-)
Looking forward to reading more! I do SI appreciate all you stories! Thanks for writing! And even more important updating AND finishing!
Author's Response:
Folsom St. Fair, you say? Hmm. I had to google it. I just HAD to google it.
It would be fun to explore dominatrix Parker! (Not fun for Jarod haha.)
I appreciate your reviews, the honesty, and the humor. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, Twisted. Be safe out there in Folsom! *winks*
Reviewer: twisted Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 28/09/12 10:30 pm
I am excited for the new fic and a R rating at that. I think is plausible because we know she'd think she has him only to find he wins again. Its wonderful so far and if it goes like your other fics it will be wonderful to the end. A ten of course.
Author's Response:
Thank you, MlleParker. That R rating is terrifying. I tend to agree; we've seen Parker get into worse (well, maybe worse) predicaments during the series (and all alone with Jarod on the isle *shudders*). I'm afraid I'll never meet all these (great) expectations but thanks again. Really.
Reviewer: MlleParker Signed [Report This]Date: 26/09/12 11:23 pm
Bring on the smut! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing, g18. I'll try to not disappoint. *fingers crossed*
Reviewer: g18 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/09/12 03:12 am
Okay so all i'm saying is i totally am comfortable with where u are going with this story!!! Write more soon please!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing, JaParker Fan. I appreciate the encouragement and I'm actually a bit envious because I'm not comfortable at all with this, nevetheless, I promise, I will be writing more. Thanks again.
Reviewer: JaPark Fan Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/09/12 08:31 pm
:) Fantastic fic you got here Mirage! Don't leave us hanging 2 long. And update Devil's Advocate already. ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you, Miss Parker. Real life is being a pill but I'll update everything when I can.
Reviewer: Miss Parker Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/09/12 01:29 am
It's really brilliant work, you have a talent for writing, and have a strong grasp of the characters. I'm fasinated by this plot line and can't wait to see what Lady Muse has in store for Parker who is at Jarod's mercy at last! Please update this one and your fics too!
Author's Response:
Thanks, Christoph. Eek. Parker at Jarod's mercy. Oh, my, what have I done? I'll update (and even finish) them all as soon as I possibly can.
Reviewer: Christoph Signed [Report This]Date: 22/09/12 05:11 am
A billions shades of YAY for shades of J!! This is perfection tho you could have totally written in first person Let Me In style..werid thing is I like this fic more than the book! J has to totally whip her and I wont get started on teh plugs. Be sure to give Lady Muse a smack on the behind for me, will ya! Write, write write.
Author's Response:
Aw, thanks, dark one. Parker pov is awkward for the following reasons: "I", "me", "my", "we", etc.. It's- mm, awkward. Haha, no, please, don't get started on those. Please.
Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed [Report This]Date: 22/09/12 12:09 am
Ok so I think Jarod with a whip is a first in fanfics history and I like it :) I have to say I'm a big fan of Circles of hell and Forces of nature... oh and also Let me in and Nemesis. It's a real pleasure to read you :) Can't wait to see what's gonna happen in this one!
Author's Response:
Thank you, Nathalie. I'm so pleased that you like it so far. Oh boy, Forces of Nature was a wild ride for me. I'm glad you like those fics, and although I feel I don't deserve it, I appreciate all the kind words and lovely reviews. It's a pleasure to be read and reviewed. Thanks again.
Reviewer: Nathalie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 21/09/12 08:02 pm
OOOOOKay. I'm hooked. Keep writing Mirage!
Author's Response:
Thank you, KSPretenderFan. I always have reservations, and especially with this genre.
Reviewer: KSPretenderFan Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/09/12 02:06 pm
