There are some stories that make me ignore their every imperfection, because of the way they are written. Form over content may not be the best way to appreciate a story, but it's nice sometimes. This story has both. I liked it.Reviewer: Joel Gomes Signed [Report This]
Date: 17/09/13 09:58 pm
I really like this one. You stay focused on the characters and I can feel the yearning that´s always present between these two.
THanks for writing.Reviewer: Monika Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/12/12 09:42 am
Mm, this is very well written, allfireburns, and obviously well thought out. It's Pretenderesque, has all the elements of an episode: the phone call, the surprise visit, dialog. The characters are well done. Indeed, it's all there. It's a perfect snapshot of a moment our favorite dysfunctional duo might share at some point and I enjoyed every word. I would love to read more from you. Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/09/12 04:26 am