Title: Chapter 2

Sad! But dead on at least in the way I always imagined it. Once again you show your knack for getting into the charecters psyches even in a short piece like this! :-)

And by the way I have been listening to Within Temptation on Itunes and watching videos on YouTube. I like them! Thanks!

Author's Response:

thanks, had my first negative review today, so yours is doubly appreciated.


cant take credit for within temptation, someone did a vid and its posted in the vid section to What Have You Done, and the song embedded itself in my soul.


Also - Trapt try them

Reviewer: twisted Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 16/08/11 04:31 pm
Title: Chapter 1

That was very nice, BlueRos.

I think you really captured her point if view.

I really like your stories and I'm looking forward to next :-)


Reviewer: Ivyleaf Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15/08/11 09:18 pm

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