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Title: XIII

Holy wow! Mirage you are breath of fresh air. You keep me spellbound by your talents. Incredibly written as your stories always are! You own these characters. What typos? Don't ever apologize. Just write. You are my favorite author, hands down my favorite Pretender author. God. I wish you were writing the novels. I know you are tired of hearing it but it's a crying shame. We still have your fics thankfully!. Thank you for skillfully illustrating each chapter, each action. So amazing. Always Pretender perfect! I love how in character all of the characters are. Thank you thank you thank you!



Author's Response:

Hello, Dark One. I'll just have to ignore that part about the novels. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

 Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/06/15 07:07 am
Title: I

There are one problem here. You spelled the name 'Alan' several different various ways. Seems like you would have noticed as many times as you were inconsistiant with the spalling. I think it was ok other than that. It really bothered me that you could spall Alan, allan, allen and alen and not know it. I heard you don't edit but it just seemed wrong. You probably won't reply to this because it's what you might think as negative but I just wanted to point it out so you would correct it. Thanks. You do have natural talent. I hope you will keep writing even though this isn't glowing review.



Author's Response:

I respond to every review (eventually), Carl. You are correct: I did spell that "handle" every which way it can be spelled, and I'm still not certain that I spelled it correctly. Haha. Don't be too disheartened to find a variation ending in "un" soon. I don't know how that dastardly character spells his name. Overkill? Certainly. I will not change/alter/correct the names. You have a few options: recalibrate your things-that-bother-you settings to 'less sensitive' (see manual); stop reading Mirage--okay, that was rather misleading; there are only two options (and there is no manual). And you are incorrect: I'm talentless. Also: there are a gracious plenty errors in most every sentence I write (T.A.L.E.N.T.L.E.S.S. Clearly). I'm afraid I squeeze every drop of not-quite-perfect-but-as-close-as-I'll-get, sparingly (heaven knows that I wasn't alloted much of the stuff), over my RL, and paying readers, and have nothing approximating perfect left to offer fanfic. Priorities. Don't worry: I will continue to write. Although, perhaps you might not be aware of it. Thanks for reading and reviewing, nonetheless. I hope you have better luck with some of the other authors (the talented ones) here.

 Reviewer: Carl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/05/15 02:23 am
Title: I

Please update this.

Author's Response:

I will. Soon. Thanks.

 Reviewer: Archange Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/05/15 10:00 pm
Title: I

Please update. I love this and I'm dying to know what happens next. Thanks for sharing your talent. :)



Author's Response:

I hope you're not dying? Thanks for reading and reviewing. The update is- not going to happen with this headache.

 Reviewer: Harold Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/04/15 04:26 am
Title: I

Jarod is so whacked in this so I was glad to see it isn't too dark. Please post more soon. I love your writign so much.



Author's Response:

No, not too dark. I don't like dark fics-- no one believes it, but it's true, I assure you. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

 Reviewer: Kelli Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/04/15 09:32 pm
Title: I

Awesome update Mirage but YOURS always are. This is probably my least favorite fic of yours but I still like it more than the Pretender novels so there ya go. :) What the hell can I say? You are the best!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Contessa.

 Reviewer: Contessa Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/04/15 01:31 am
Title: XII

GREAT chapter! No real surprise there. I thought you'd given up on this one. I do so love how you write Miss Parker and Jarod usually but in this he is just so pathetic. 

 As I've said before thank you for keeping the Pretender alive! You are definitely the best writer of Pretender fan fiction that there is. Probably all fan fiction actually! Seeing as how fan fiction seems to be a lucrative business these days maybe you should get a book contact!

Thanks for writing and updating and juggling the three, four or five stories you have going. Steven and Craig could learn something from you!



Author's Response:

He is pathetic. I know, I know. Thank you, as always, for reading and reviewing, twisted.

 Reviewer: twisted Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/04/15 01:26 pm
Title: I

Awesome. Jarod is crazy dark but not so bad. Just the right amount. Thank you for not killing him or Miss Parker. I'm on the edge of my seat. Please post more soon!



Author's Response:

Now, now, you know that I wouldn't kill Jarod. Haha. Oops. I mean, Miss Parker. Jarod definitely gets to live in the story. He earned it in chapter one. Thanks for reviewing.

 Reviewer: Christoph Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/04/15 04:10 am
Title: XII

I'm going to begin this review by thanking you Mirage for your contributions to the fandom. It's refreshing to read quality, well written fiction that is both plausible and exciting, and not only in fan fiction but in general. This fandom lacks quality writing, quality fiction. The bonus is that you never lose your grip on the continuity or the characters. Too many writers paint Jarod in the image of some man they know and Miss Parker as unbreakable or too friendly with Jarod. It always take a little bit of time for her to warm up to him. You have a nautral talent for writing, for sketching the characters, the setting and plot and breathing life into the characters. Another bonus is that aside from Devil's Advocate, which I believe is the best piece of alternate universe Pretender fiction ever to grace this fandom, you stay true to the original series. I can't ask for anything more. Continue doing what you are doing. Your formula works. Until next time...



Author's Response:

Thank you, Michael, for reading and reviewing.

 Reviewer: Michael Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/04/15 09:04 pm
Title: I

OH MY GODDD! Mirage I want to grab you and hug the hell out of you...but then you might not write so well lol! Honey HONEY HONEY! Tell you what, baby, don't worry about responding to the millions of reviews that I know you must have in your inbox and here combined and just write. Write write write. Hurry and do it really fast.



Author's Response:

Thank you, Chloe. No I intend to respond to every review. I finally, finally, finally answered every email review and I will get to them all here. I'm updating as quickly as I can. This story has been finished for years and I haven't had time to upload the chapters. I have to search the old hard drive and scraps of paper to find all of the chapter parts. I will get it posted eventually. Thanks again.

 Reviewer: Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/04/15 01:44 am
Title: XII

OH MY GOD! Mirage! Girl you are on a roll! I love this chapter. Jarod can be a regular devil sometimes can't he? I love how strong MParker is. Please give us more. NOW>



Author's Response:

Haha, I suppose we can all be devils sometimes. More will be posted when I find the rest of the story. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Lorraina.

 Reviewer: Lorraina Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/04/15 09:38 pm
Title: I

You didn't forget this did you?



Author's Response:

I do forget this story sometimes. Chapter one was my ending. I will get all the bits uploaded. I will. Thanks.

 Reviewer: MlleParker Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/15 11:23 pm
Title: I

Don't forget this and The Return and Devil's Advocate and Hero's Heart. Feel free to add a few more fics and sequels. ;) :) I will never get enough of your writing.



Author's Response:

Haha. I love your enthusiasm. Thanks.

 Reviewer: Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/04/15 05:05 am
Title: I

I hope you will update this and all your other fics too! What a hell of a ride Mirage!



Author's Response:

Aw thanks Darkone.

 Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/03/15 12:02 am
Title: I

I spent the night reading this and had no idea how dark it would be. The first chapter blew my mind! I've always wanted to see Jarod screw up this way and kill someone and I can't think of anyone more deserving than that creep Allan. You spell his name many different ways and you did it too often for it to be a mistake. Do tell Mirage.

 Reviewer: d_el1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/03/15 04:54 am
Title: I

Parker is always so defiant.

 Reviewer: Katie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/03/15 10:20 am
Title: I

One brilliant chapter after another! I love them all. Thank you!

 Reviewer: Katie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/03/15 10:18 am
Title: I

So great it's scary. You know them so well.

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Date: 12/03/15 10:09 am
Title: I

OHhh you make me so happy. Jarod tried to get 1 over on Parker, syd, and Broots but he failed.

 Reviewer: Katie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/03/15 10:03 am
Title: I

I've always wanted to see Jarod take a Pretend too far. Count me in tho I know I'm late to this. I love the dark imagery of the swamp. Terrifying and beatutiful Mirage.

 Reviewer: Katie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/03/15 09:59 am
Title: XI

Happy! I love to see Miss Parker like this. It reminds me of when she was in the car to go find Briggite and kill her and Thomas was in the back seat...but he wasn't really there! It's so very amazing!

 Reviewer: MlleParker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/03/15 11:39 pm
Title: X

Sydney is great. You bring him and all characters to life. You are amazing! Merci!

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Date: 10/03/15 11:31 pm
Title: IX

The geese walk barefoot song is a curse. The Centre people know it.

 Reviewer: MlleParker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/03/15 11:02 pm
Title: VII

Thank you that the scenes are not seen by us. I did wonder what it would be like for Jarod and I'm thankful for the missing scenes that are graphic. I feel so bad for Jarod now. He didn't get back out the Centre quick like he does on the series and I'm glad for that.

 Reviewer: MlleParker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/03/15 10:58 pm
Title: VIII

Every word pulls at my heart. This is so beautiful but it is tragic.

 Reviewer: MlleParker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/03/15 10:44 pm
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