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Title: IX

Just keeps getting better and better! I love your fics.



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Thank you, Bella.

Reviewer: Bella Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/04/12 08:38 am
Title: IX

Nice chapter. Not as dark as previous ones which is actually a relief. Thank you for updating. Looking forward to the next one.

Author's Response:

Hello, Twisted. The next update is in the works. More or less. Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: twisted Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/04/12 09:18 pm
Title: IX

Good thing your keeping Broots alive. I wanna read a converation with a stuttering Broots and an uncoherent Ethan. :) Your fics are always awesome.



Author's Response:

Hello, g18. Hmm, I like the idea of a stuttering Broots and inchorent Ethan conversation- that would probably span quite a few chapters all by itself. I'll see what I can arrange- the muse is being moody. 

Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: g18 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/03/12 12:12 pm
Title: VII

Hey, I am back in the pretender world and love what you have done with this story so far! Don't let us wait too long for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Hello, Anna. Welcome back to The Pretender universe! I'm so pleased that you're liking it so far. I'm working on the next chapter- and annihilating aphids.

Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Anna Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 19/02/12 04:23 pm
Title: VII

Great Chapter. I am on the edge of my seat waiting for more!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you, TJ.

 

Reviewer: TJ Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/02/12 02:58 am
Title: VII

I think maybe you should take my 'name'. That was a truly twisted chapter. Mr. Cox is even more repulsive than Lyle. Thank you for not being too graphic with the non-consensual acts. This is getting to be a very dark story.

I hope Miss Parker kicks some serious ASS when she gets back to the Centre.

Thanks as always for the update.



Author's Response:

Haha. I like your name very much, Twisted, but my name ("Mirage") has always been more - mm, befitting me.

Indeed, Cox is a rather disturbing, rather creepy son of a bitch- Lenny Von Dohlen nailed it! He is so weird (in his TP appearances) that it's comical and he does play the creepy guy often enough, but he actually plays a normal person in the movie Tender Mercies. Shocking.

Yeah, I hoped I could be subtle and still get the idea across. I really didn't want to write out the horrific details.

Miss Parker will be kicking some ass; it's what she does best. Thanks for the r & r, Twisted.

Reviewer: twisted Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/02/12 12:58 am
Title: VII

Thanks for making their lives realistic and not so perfect, please don't stop writing!



Author's Response:

Hello, Anonymous. Easily done; life is not perfect for anyone. I don't think I could stop writing (scary, isn't it?). It's quite addiciting.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/02/12 12:39 am
Title: VIII

This turned so sad all of a sudden, now I'm rooting for Jarod to get it together and kick Lyle's and Cox's ass for baby Lucien.



Author's Response:

Hello, g18. Indeed, it is sad. I can't believe I wrote off a child. Lady Muse is wicked. Jarod will (eventually) kick some arse. He and Parker both will have their revenge. Thanks for the R&R!

Reviewer: g18 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/12/11 07:20 am
Title: VIII

Wow. What a great chapter! I am so happy that Parker isn't evil as I thought. :-). So I have hope that she and Jarod will prevail. Thanks once again for updating! I am sorry I never reviewed the earlier chapters.

Author's Response:

Hi, Twisted. I'm pleased that you like it. I think she and Jarod will prevail. In time. Please, don't apologize. No worries.

Thanks for reading and reviewing- as always.

Reviewer: twisted Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/12/11 10:08 pm
Title: VI

You know I am a fan of your writing but I feel this story has gotten off track. Maybe it should have ended with 'The Die Is Cast' which I believe was your original intent. The idea that Jarod accidently killed someone and seeing what that would cause him to do was intriguing. But now it just seems to be about... I don't know, Centre business as usual.



Author's Response:


Thanks, twisted. No, I didn't know you were a fan of my writing. In fact, I wasn't aware that you were following this story, after all, this is your first review of QCIC.

There are moments (many, many moments) I feel I shouldn't write/continue any fic so I can empathize with you, however, other readers (readers who have given feedback, asked me continue, requested sinister, Centre- based themes) want more and they tend to agree with Lady Muse that in true "cautionary tale" fashion, Jarod's missteps will lead him right back to the Centre (and in Persona Non Grata, that's exactly what happened) - it's a sorta twisted cause-effect irony that I didn't foresee but the muse loves it! And I will not, under any circumstances, defy the muse.

Reviewer: twisted Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 16/11/11 09:55 pm
Title: VI

Cox sure is a doctor from hell. Poor Jarod, well at least now, becoming a monster is the last thing on his mind....(evil smirk)



Author's Response:

Thanks, g18. Yep, Cox is one sadistic SOB. Haha, you're right: becoming a monster is the least of Jarod's worries now, haha.

 

Reviewer: g18 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/11/11 09:31 am
Title: V

F*ck, that was intense (I am quite fond of that word too :])! Parker's strength never ceases to amaze me and I'm very judgy when it comes to people's perceptions of Parker, since she is my favorite female character (after Agent Scully, of course), but you write her so well, it makes me love her even more! Please don't make me beg, update soon!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks, xibadgurl. Aha, so I'm not alone in my fondness for the "f" word, haha (verb, noun, pronoun, adjective, adverb, interjection- it's quite a versatile little word)!

I've never watched xfiles but I've read many xfiles fics in which Scully kicks some major ass, and I've been planning to redeem myself and set aside some time to play catch up with the show. If the depiction in fanfic is any indication, I'm going to like her. A lot, haha. 

I will absolutely update as soon as I possibly can.

 

Reviewer: xibadgurl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/10/11 06:25 am
Title: V

when will the morning light be there? hehe

very good chapter! as always. I especially enjoyed Miss Parker talking to herself. Very good.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Leonie. The morning light is coming, slowly but surely.

Reviewer: Leonie1988 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/10/11 02:33 pm
Title: IV

Intense and very angsty...but awesome jest like all you're stories are. You have a great writing style and a nack for staying true to the characters. I can't wait 4 more.



Author's Response:

Thanks, tpfan.

Reviewer: tpfan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 22/08/11 01:18 am
Title: IV

Can't wait for more!!



Author's Response:

Thanks, Anna.

Reviewer: Anna Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 20/08/11 11:33 am
Title: III

Awesome! Please update soon!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reaading and reviewing, Anna. I will update as soon as I can.

Reviewer: Anna Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/08/11 12:10 am
Title: III

Excellent! I'm the first to review this chapter? I'm still thrown by the latin maybe everyone else is to but I love the descriptions and it's always a pleasure to see Jarod upset and Sydney doing what he does best. Great interaction and realistic. The Miss Parker and Broots side was very funny and entertaining and I like the message you send about women's clothes not meaning they are whores. That was good. I'm guessing Jarod is going to be pissed when Parker shows up with Broots.



Author's Response:


Thanks for reading and reviewing, dark one. No, you're not the first to review chapter three (most reviews have been coming via email or IM) but you are the first to review chapter three here at MP. *winks* Yay, haha.

Yeah, wow, a couple of others are also put off (resistant, even) by the Latin ("aww, but it sounds better in Latin!", the muse pouts) and I'm considering making changes. Mhm, Jarod is going to be extremely displeased when Parker arrives with Broots. In fact, Jarod's going to abduct Parker at gunpoint and that's going to be ugly and- darn, that's all Lady Muse will tell me- at least until I get myself off the beach and finally commit to continuing. *shrugs* I'll do it later.

Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/08/11 07:01 pm
Title: II

I thought the sweeping of Jarod's hotel suites by Parker was well done. I don't read about those types of details much in stories, loved every word but the twist of Jarod phoning and forcing Parker and Broots out of the car was prolly what I liked the most. What do you mean it will be a while?



Author's Response:

Thanks again, Jules. I'm pleased that you're happy with the fic and the its little twists.

Reviewer: Jules Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/07/11 06:32 am
Title: I

I'm so glad that you're back Mirage. I was suprised when I read this three days ago although I thought it might be another language and didn't want to google translate. I wanted to review but the comp crashed...that's why I'm here. I can't tell you how much I've wanted to write this or see it written. It's a fresh idea with amazing writing that paints the picture and shut up lol what do you mean typos?



Author's Response:

Hello and thanks for the R&R, Jules. Ah, the chapter/fic titles- I've had quite a few questions about that. I like to experiment- I'm just crazy that way. I'm pleased that you're liking it thus far. *smiles*

Reviewer: Jules Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/07/11 06:25 am
Title: II

You've been missed!!! Great side bars, characterisations and visualisations, would love to see this in the serie!!! I can't wait for more!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to read and review, anon. At the moment, I have no plans to write a continuation but I had no plans to ever write fan fic anyway so who knows?

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/07/11 12:48 am
Title: II

Groom and clean, lol, yukky greasy stuff and something I could totatally see Jarod and MTW using, lol. Fab job with the little adventure in finding Jarod, like that Miss P used "please" to get Gil to listen and the little emotional slips, and how she covered them. Stubborn woman. Evil cliff hanger. Update soon.



Author's Response:

Ah, so you're familiar with the blue stuff? I assumed I lost any readers that may have glanced at this fic right then and there but the guy does have quite the unruly mane and was indeed rocking the greasy slicked back "do" in TP 2001 and IOTH and he was um, nasty (well, he was!). Right you are, Parker pulled a Jarod with Gil and chatted him up sweetly to get her answers but she did get her answers. Sorry, dark one, but I'm currently not working on an update. It is summer and I've become quite addictive to the beach scene. Girls just want to have fun! Right?

Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/07/11 02:11 am
Title: I

lol, I feel better too now that you've purged this from your mind and shared with us!! Mirage, Mirage, Mirage, woman you can certainly grab our attention. Jarod junxtaposed in a hell of a predictment....he wants revenge for that woman and absolution for himself. Always wondered what would happen if his angered got the best of him. Very Anne Rice-ish scenery. And you finished Nemesis!!!



Author's Response:

Hello, Dark One (ever the flatterer haha) and thanks for reading and taking the time to review. I did finish Nemesis and I'm quite pleased to be done with it for obvious reasons.

Indeed, Jarod is in a bit of a bind and he may be there for a while.

 

Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/07/11 02:06 am
Title: I

Yippee another Mirage fic. :)Thank you for this!



Author's Response:

Thank you, Anonymous, for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/07/11 01:59 am
Title: I

Two Mirage fics! Poetic justice indeed lol! Your writing is compelling and intelligent. It evinces imagery that rival the great graphic novelists. Sinister serpetine vines..I could see it so clearly. I want Miss Parker to help Jarod. I want more. :) I want to thank you for your review also. ;)



Author's Response:

Hi, Jade. I lived in New Orleans for a few years, spent some time swatting pesky critters and still, I can only dream of describing that place the way I'd seen it everyday. I can still see the "sinister serpentine vines", but I'm no writer. Still, I hope it works okay. Hmm, I'm not sure if Miss Parker will help Jarod, still not sure that I'll continue this. I'll try. Thanks for the lovely review and you are welcome.

Reviewer: Jade Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/07/11 08:11 pm
Title: I

Hooray - Mirage-fic!  :)  So glad, as always, to get more from you!

And, speaking as someone who took three years of Spanish (many moons ago) in school instead of Latin, I'm glad you added the translation to the title.  :)  I love this idea.  Sure, he's a genius, but no one (especially someone who has been locked away for 30 years) is perfect and can account for each and every eventuality.  Surely, in all of his pretends he supposedly did, Jarod went over the line at least once.

It would be interesting to see how Parker and/or Sydney would react...



Author's Response:

Hi, Jane, this is another plot that's been pestering me for a while and I've tried to ignore it but the muse won. Right you are. Certainly, Jarod would have either lost control or had malfunctioning gear (ropes, etc.) during at least one of his little power trips. I wanted to explore the "what if". It shouldn't be too long of a read, I hope. Thank you for reading and reviewing, Jane.

Reviewer: Jane Q. Doe Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/07/11 03:07 am
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