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Title: VI

You had me Mirage! I thought Miss Parker was shot and dead. I was afraid she was dead. It was her mother's cardboard picture.

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Date: 10/03/15 10:37 pm
Title: V

The way she and Jarod both talk to themselves is so perfect. I'm gald nothing wose happens

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Date: 10/03/15 10:32 pm
Title: IV

I think Jarod would have beat her if she had used his family the way he uses her mother. Great insights.

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Date: 10/03/15 10:25 pm
Title: III

Jarod is wrecked from what he did and you write the way it should be. I love it!

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Date: 10/03/15 10:13 pm
Title: II

Your voice writing is wonderful and the way you write these characters is perfect. Merci! I want more and more!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, MlleParker.

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Date: 10/03/15 10:05 pm
Title: I

I LOVE Jarod in this and I can't believe I haven't read this before. Over 3 years old! Jarod was really himself here but the end...ohhh Mirage. I shake from this.

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Date: 10/03/15 09:58 pm
Title: XI

Whoa! This Miss Parker came to chew gum and kick ass and ....oh boy she's all out of gum. Action packed and well written. Damn! Every guy's dream. The little chat with satan is something I'm looking forward to. Gotta say. Jarod is not going to kill Miss Parker? Come on! Mirage you wouldn't! But I'm going to keep reading anyway teheehee. Evil cliffhangers... I hope the tecnological sorcery you mention works out ok...I had a computer like that once too. Really blew. Jarod singing I will survive...I wonder if we can get Michael T Weiss to do that for us. Please tell the critics I said flick you too. ;) Thanks for updating! You are the best!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks, Gunner.  Oh, I don't know. Jarod is capable of anything, and there's no telling what might happen. Mm, I don't know. I'm not all that comfortable dragging the players (actors, RL people, etc.) into ff. I write about the original series/characters (not the players). Mm, yes, definitely, all critics should flick off. I agree. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

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Date: 08/03/15 07:02 am
Title: X

Wow! Oh, shit. You're not going to kill off Sydney? What a stroke of genius to have Jarod become himself...younger self. Genius!

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Date: 08/03/15 06:54 am
Title: IX

Miss Parker won't really be dying? Mirage? Crap...I really have to go to  work..

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Date: 08/03/15 06:45 am
Title: VII

Very disturbing...just like The Centre is. I like how you are clear about sexual assualt and not just the male on male abuse, but male on female as well. The body repsonding because it was designed to respond and having to cooperate to survive. It's amazing. You have incredible insights. I'm glad you're here. You have so much to offer. I'm glad you offer it to us.

Reviewer: Gunner Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/03/15 06:40 am
Title: VI

Oh, shit. So she found out they had her brother...her son...and tried to deal...and she traded Jarod for their child? But that's probably what Jarod would have wanted. No one wants their kid in the hands of the Centre. That examination was just damn...horrific. You wrote this WHILE YOU ATE? You ate lunch and wrote this? You are one kick ass woman! One kick ass author too!

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Date: 08/03/15 06:35 am
Title: I

You don't like the f word much...speaking of that. If they'd slept together then it would been fucked up lol. I see that she wanted to end the ugliness but couldn't go through with seducing him to fool him. Poor Jarod would have followed her to the Centre with his tongue wagging. But we see here that she was wrong and he playing the game to see. He knew because he wanted to know how sorry she was ... ohhhh. Spot on job with the insights.

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Date: 08/03/15 06:28 am
Title: I

Angst. Double servings of angst from Mirage. Jarod can be mean..and sometimes I forgot how dark he can be. This refreshsed my memory!



Author's Response:

You're very welcome, Gunner. Haha. Thank you for reading and reviewing.

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Date: 08/03/15 06:24 am
Title: I

Boom and Parker knocks it out of the park: "tripping over their erections or drooling over my legs"... lol! oh noooo. Why can't Parker listen to Jarod? Splendid writing, perfect descriptions and characterisations. I don't care what anyone else says. These characters belong to you.

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Date: 08/03/15 06:20 am
Title: I

Like that Jarod tried to mislead them, two hotels, a key in one hotel, a safety deposit box in the other. Good investigative work by the Parker and gang too and a clear process of the progress. No sudden...oh it must be here...fantastical leaps of logic where Jarod knows because he knows...smh Great work Mirage.

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Date: 08/03/15 06:16 am
Title: I

Ohhh wow. I need to be working not reading. I don't know how I didn't see this before...or if I thought you'd abandoned it....I don't know. The first chapter is Pretender perfect. I know that much! Jarod can't always know the exact outcomes. He can't control everything....like gators that might show up univited. Call me hateful and unforgiving but I think the guy got what was coming to him. I think other guys like him should be eaten by gators too!

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Date: 08/03/15 06:12 am
Title: XI

Hi just read your story it's very good. But please do more chapters.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing, Katescats. I will add more chapters soon.

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Date: 08/03/15 04:40 am
Title: XI

Welcome back! I LOVE your wit. Not James Bond. Hah! And Parker is kick ASS in this. Thanks for updating.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Twisted. I really appreciate it. I hope she's kick ass enough.

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Date: 08/03/15 04:19 am
Title: XI

Oh!! Thank God!!!! But a lot happened that we didn't get to see but it happened to him and he's totally changed. Don't tell me that he's going to kill Miss Parker. Please! OOhhh! "Karma is a bitch; Miss Parker is her name" Great SCOTT! That's a hell of statement. Should be a tattoo. I hope Miss Karma kicks satans a$$!

 

OH! LOL. "he's not James Bond" Trivia tiddiebit-- Jarod's dad was a James Bond...but not anymore...lol. They can't be Bond forever I guess. Good one.

MORE, please?!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks, Needlepoint, for reading and reviewing. I can't tell you anything without giving away the conclusion. I will be posting more. Thanks.

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Date: 07/03/15 08:48 pm
Title: X

Hurry Miss Parker!! LOl. This is a damn nail biter woman!

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Date: 07/03/15 08:42 pm
Title: IX

OMG! I hope she and the major gets Jarod out. What do you mean dying? NO!

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Date: 07/03/15 08:37 pm
Title: VII

Thank you for being considerate of readers who don't read the warnings. I read them but I really think that anything that can possible be written is fair game when it comes to The Pretender. Catherine Parker was impregnated without knowledge of it...was raped if you want the truth. Jarod was abducted. You know they did bad things to him. There is murder and torture. You shouldn't need warnings. No matter how bad a thing can be that I read, it's probably already happened in the Centre and the Centre is a dark world.

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Date: 07/03/15 08:33 pm
Title: VIII

From terror to grief. So sad. Sniffs. Is Angelo stuck in the vents now? Why do you write it so real? So sad?

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Date: 07/03/15 08:28 pm
Title: VI

What a nightmare! Cox is f*****scary. You nailed the characters! Some of the acts were disturbing...just ..omg. But Cox is a doctor and Jarod is a product and we all know he's probably had these physicals and some torture. These things were implied during the series and you remember the disgust when he said he did a cloning simulation...that required his semen so..... You just gave us a missing piece...you tell is so well  and it's just like...watching it. You write TOO well Mirage.

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Date: 07/03/15 08:24 pm
Title: V

OMG! I'm glad they just slept. I want some smut because you write is so well, but I don't want it like that.

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Date: 07/03/15 08:19 pm
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