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Title: A Good Run of Bad Luck A.K.A. Jarod's Big Deal of the Day

Oh my god that was magnificent, when even the sun approved of them. This is my new new new favorite. Sequel?

Reviewer: Rozzo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/07/25 05:17 am
Title: Hearts Breaking Even

It really is HOT in the story and here while I'm reading the story. It's all matching up. So totatlly plausible. I wish this had happened. You're awesome!

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Date: 01/07/25 05:15 am
Title: Twist of Fate

Hot and wicked and so delighting. I need more and more and big books full of this.

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Date: 01/07/25 05:14 am
Title: Happenstance

Four chapters, another multichapter story. Another that I missed. *#@! I hate that I've missed them and now have to read them often to make up for not reading them before now. I love this. Jarod finally gets caught in his lies! Oooo I love that I don't have to wait for a new chapter. This one is marked completed!

Reviewer: Rozzo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/07/25 05:11 am
Title: A Good Run of Bad Luck A.K.A. Jarod's Big Deal of the Day

You're one of the few fans who suggest that Jarod has a dark side, but he does have a dark side. We saw it on the series. I think it would be easy for the leash to snap on the way he holds that darkness in. You don't seem to shy away from that or fault him for it too much. You might have something in common with Jarod. I think you might crave justice as much as he does, seeing the way Parker wants to destroy the Triumvirate. I love it. I want more of this!

Reviewer: nopiupiroie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/06/25 03:57 am
Title: Hearts Breaking Even

SHower. I need a cold shower. You knew I'd need a cold shower right?

I can't believe I'm just now reading this. I'm reading everything by you. You are the crack cocaine of literature.

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Date: 10/06/25 03:50 am
Title: Twist of Fate

OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Mirage this is awesome. They had SEX!

DAMN THAT IS HOT! Jarod did the hand to hand thing that they did on the glass when they were children ahhhhhhhh oh my god. He's in love with her. He loves her so much, would never hurt her and I'm just... WHAT DO YOU MEAN YOU'RE NOT A SHIPPER?!!!!

YOU'RE WRITING THEM IN WAYS THAT EVEN HARDCORE SHIPPERS DON'T. maybe you have the perspective of being not too close and wanting it too bad that you're able to insert things like Jarod PUTTING HIS PALM AGAINST PARKER'S WHEN HE'S MAKING LOVE TO HER.

Oh my damn huge ass shipper heart.

I love this. Nothing will ever be better.

YOU RULE!

MORE OF THIS!! CONTINUE THIS PLEASE!

Reviewer: nopiupiroie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/06/25 03:48 am
Title: Happenstance

Ermagherd! Woot! I know I'm going to need a cold shower. Won't I?

Reviewer: nopiupiroie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/06/25 03:41 am
Title: A Good Run of Bad Luck A.K.A. Jarod's Big Deal of the Day

Oh goddesses even the sunrise is cheering for them. Yes!

This is awesome! 😎

 

Reviewer: lisa Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/06/25 06:57 am
Title: Hearts Breaking Even

Dammmmmnn I need a cold bath!

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Date: 01/06/25 06:55 am
Title: Twist of Fate

Kind of heAt  stroking over here myself.

This is soooo hot 🥵

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Date: 01/06/25 06:54 am
Title: Happenstance

I love it. I remember her from the year zero episode. Awesome 😎 Work.

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Date: 01/06/25 06:52 am
Title: A Good Run of Bad Luck A.K.A. Jarod's Big Deal of the Day

I AM SOBBING. SOBBING MIRAGE. This is so fast paced and so action packed and so exciting and so emotional and that ending and those peach hues!!! Her smile. Jarod catching his breath. I'm so in love with your writing and voice and styles. More than one. This seems completly different from the others and the others were all different to each other. It's like you have more than one writing voice. Each story has a unique personality so far that I've read. I just need more. Thank you for this.
I love it so much.

Reviewer: Revenant Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/11/23 11:18 pm
Title: Hearts Breaking Even

"It was just a bad dream." Jarod reassured softly, caressing her arm as he spoke. Parker drew in a sharp breath and then rattled the cuffs.

"Apparently not." She remarked dryly, noticing with a fleeting flash of horror that Jarod had cuffed both her wrists to the bed.

lol! Yes!!! This is everything Mirage. Humor. Drama. Intrique. Adventure. Actions. And SEX.

You're amazing.

Reviewer: Revenant Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/11/23 11:09 pm
Title: Twist of Fate

Ooh. Ooomph. I mean damn. But now consequences time. So excited.

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Date: 14/11/23 11:08 pm
Title: Happenstance

Uh oh, Parker's in trouble... but good trouble certainly. This is so plausible, and Jarod is going to eventually be meeting more and more cops and agents he's already worked with using other names.

Reviewer: Revenant Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/11/23 11:06 pm
Title: A Good Run of Bad Luck A.K.A. Jarod's Big Deal of the Day

*YES THEY ARE YOURS

those are my notes in response to your notes.

 

"She looked at him then, the promise of a beautiful new day flickering in her eyes.

And he had to catch his breath when she smiled.

"Jarod." She said. “You have yourself a deal.”"

 

I mean, you are D BOSS. You force me to pay attention and don't stop lose my attention, even when it ends I want to know what next and I want more. I want more!

MORE!

Please. Sequel.

Reviewer: Cal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/08/23 08:58 pm
Title: Hearts Breaking Even

Oh my GODDD!

"Piercing screams.

Not fully awake, but not quite asleep either, Parker struggled to pull herself from the hazy gray in between. When her eyes flew open, she quickly deduced- to her mortification- that she was cuffed to the bed, alone in the room and that she had been the source of the tortured cries."

 

People asked for SMUT and you deliver with a big giant tractor trailer. I can't even think right now. Gonna need a shower.. an ice cold shower.

Reviewer: Cal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/08/23 08:55 pm
Title: Twist of Fate

Oh. O. Ohh.

I be speechless.

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Date: 01/08/23 08:53 pm
Title: Happenstance

Oh mmmyy god. I love this already. I can always tell with the first words that a book will be freaking amazing and I was right. This chapter is hot already and so brilliantly written. I love it.

Reviewer: Cal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/08/23 08:36 pm
Title: A Good Run of Bad Luck A.K.A. Jarod's Big Deal of the Day

jarids working audition and he passed and exceeded. all of the bad luck leading them to each other that ends with his big deal that he pitches...made all that more plausible by Parker's doubt and distrust.   and that ending is the stuff shippers dream about.    but you aren't a shipper!??? Thank you for this gift 🎁. mirage despite not shipping them yourself.

Reviewer: Jameason Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/04/23 10:19 pm
Title: Hearts Breaking Even

 I think k that's an a good reactions to waking up restrained ... can't blame parker. love how Jarod is concernied for her .. obviously loves her. I love all the gaming and card and poker references you tie in with the title and story ... I can read this. every day and I probably will

Reviewer: Jameason Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/04/23 10:14 pm
Title: Twist of Fate

oooh so hot 🥵” I think I see steam. It's definitely consensual and you make that clear.,..not that this fandom has a problem with the nonconsensual...I think people don't care .. this was perfect. Jarod only exerting enough control to feel like he isn't a victim...gotta be hard for him to want his huntress after all he's been through...but he doesn't take her control away either . so hot! I love this story! love ’“😘

Reviewer: Jameason Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/04/23 10:11 pm
Title: Happenstance

oh you write them so perfectly and it's plausible that would skip up.. he's human even if intelligent and the world isn't that big.

Reviewer: Jameason Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/04/23 10:04 pm
Title: A Good Run of Bad Luck A.K.A. Jarod's Big Deal of the Day

I know you aren't a shipper. I know it, and, yet still I read that last paragraph and I have to say after reading everything else pretender in the interwebs this is the most stunning bordering heart wrenching happy ending. It's not cheesy, it's not too syrupy. That Parker didn't reach the decision lightly and almost parted ways with Jarod makes it that much more poignant. Beautiful. Thank you for this. My review isn't posting properly.

Reviewer: Michael Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/12/22 10:50 pm
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