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Title: A Good Run of Bad Luck A.K.A. Jarod's Big Deal of the Day

I AM SOBBING. SOBBING MIRAGE. This is so fast paced and so action packed and so exciting and so emotional and that ending and those peach hues!!! Her smile. Jarod catching his breath. I'm so in love with your writing and voice and styles. More than one. This seems completly different from the others and the others were all different to each other. It's like you have more than one writing voice. Each story has a unique personality so far that I've read. I just need more. Thank you for this.
I love it so much.

Reviewer: Revenant Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/11/23 11:18 pm
Title: Hearts Breaking Even

"It was just a bad dream." Jarod reassured softly, caressing her arm as he spoke. Parker drew in a sharp breath and then rattled the cuffs.

"Apparently not." She remarked dryly, noticing with a fleeting flash of horror that Jarod had cuffed both her wrists to the bed.

lol! Yes!!! This is everything Mirage. Humor. Drama. Intrique. Adventure. Actions. And SEX.

You're amazing.

Reviewer: Revenant Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/11/23 11:09 pm
Title: Twist of Fate

Ooh. Ooomph. I mean damn. But now consequences time. So excited.

Reviewer: Revenant Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/11/23 11:08 pm
Title: Happenstance

Uh oh, Parker's in trouble... but good trouble certainly. This is so plausible, and Jarod is going to eventually be meeting more and more cops and agents he's already worked with using other names.

Reviewer: Revenant Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/11/23 11:06 pm
Title: A Good Run of Bad Luck A.K.A. Jarod's Big Deal of the Day

*YES THEY ARE YOURS

those are my notes in response to your notes.

 

"She looked at him then, the promise of a beautiful new day flickering in her eyes.

And he had to catch his breath when she smiled.

"Jarod." She said. “You have yourself a deal.”"

 

I mean, you are D BOSS. You force me to pay attention and don't stop lose my attention, even when it ends I want to know what next and I want more. I want more!

MORE!

Please. Sequel.

Reviewer: Cal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/08/23 08:58 pm
Title: Hearts Breaking Even

Oh my GODDD!

"Piercing screams.

Not fully awake, but not quite asleep either, Parker struggled to pull herself from the hazy gray in between. When her eyes flew open, she quickly deduced- to her mortification- that she was cuffed to the bed, alone in the room and that she had been the source of the tortured cries."

 

People asked for SMUT and you deliver with a big giant tractor trailer. I can't even think right now. Gonna need a shower.. an ice cold shower.

Reviewer: Cal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/08/23 08:55 pm
Title: Twist of Fate

Oh. O. Ohh.

I be speechless.

Reviewer: Cal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/08/23 08:53 pm
Title: Happenstance

Oh mmmyy god. I love this already. I can always tell with the first words that a book will be freaking amazing and I was right. This chapter is hot already and so brilliantly written. I love it.

Reviewer: Cal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/08/23 08:36 pm
Title: A Good Run of Bad Luck A.K.A. Jarod's Big Deal of the Day

jarids working audition and he passed and exceeded. all of the bad luck leading them to each other that ends with his big deal that he pitches...made all that more plausible by Parker's doubt and distrust.   and that ending is the stuff shippers dream about.    but you aren't a shipper!??? Thank you for this gift 🎁. mirage despite not shipping them yourself.

Reviewer: Jameason Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/04/23 10:19 pm
Title: Hearts Breaking Even

 I think k that's an a good reactions to waking up restrained ... can't blame parker. love how Jarod is concernied for her .. obviously loves her. I love all the gaming and card and poker references you tie in with the title and story ... I can read this. every day and I probably will

Reviewer: Jameason Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/04/23 10:14 pm
Title: Twist of Fate

oooh so hot 🥵” I think I see steam. It's definitely consensual and you make that clear.,..not that this fandom has a problem with the nonconsensual...I think people don't care .. this was perfect. Jarod only exerting enough control to feel like he isn't a victim...gotta be hard for him to want his huntress after all he's been through...but he doesn't take her control away either . so hot! I love this story! love ’“😘

Reviewer: Jameason Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/04/23 10:11 pm
Title: Happenstance

oh you write them so perfectly and it's plausible that would skip up.. he's human even if intelligent and the world isn't that big.

Reviewer: Jameason Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/04/23 10:04 pm
Title: A Good Run of Bad Luck A.K.A. Jarod's Big Deal of the Day

I know you aren't a shipper. I know it, and, yet still I read that last paragraph and I have to say after reading everything else pretender in the interwebs this is the most stunning bordering heart wrenching happy ending. It's not cheesy, it's not too syrupy. That Parker didn't reach the decision lightly and almost parted ways with Jarod makes it that much more poignant. Beautiful. Thank you for this. My review isn't posting properly.

Reviewer: Michael Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/12/22 10:50 pm
Title: A Good Run of Bad Luck A.K.A. Jarod's Big Deal of the Day

I know you aren't a shipper. I know it, and, yet still I read that last paragraph and I have to say after reading everything else pretender in the interwebs this is the most stunning bordering heart wrenching happy ending. It's not cheesy, it's not too syrupy. That Parker didn't reach the decision lightly and almost parted ways with Jarod makes it that much more

Reviewer: Michael Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/12/22 10:49 pm
Title: A Good Run of Bad Luck A.K.A. Jarod's Big Deal of the Day

I know you aren't a shipper. I know it, and, yet still I read that last paragraph and I have to say after reading everything else pretender in the interwebs this is the most stunning bordering heart wrenching happy ending. It's not cheesy, it's not too syrupy. That Parker didn't reach the decision lightly and almost parted ways with Jarod makes it that much more

Reviewer: Michael Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/12/22 10:48 pm
Title: Happenstance

I hope you're doing well by the way. It's been a while since you've posted anything and feels longer.

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Date: 10/12/22 10:34 pm
Title: Twist of Fate

Masterful. You don't add too much detail. You don't like to hear yourself speak as we say in the business. You're not too vague either. Balance is beautiful. You have that. You tell the story well and it's no secret how scarily on-the-nose you write the characters.

Reviewer: Michael Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/12/22 10:32 pm
Title: Happenstance

I've always wanted to see Jarod fail to lie his way out of a tight spot and I've never shied away from smut or pornography. You combine both tastefully. Without the slang. I'm pleased. Slang has always seemed juvenile to me. This first chapter pulls me in . I feel like you reach through the phone and take my hand. Canonically you let Jarod turn the tables and regain control. Was this especially painful to write and give the muses control,?. This is a missing piece without doubt and could be an episode easily. I will review all chapters even though I've read this to the end. Brilliantly done.

Reviewer: Michael Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/12/22 10:27 pm
Title: A Good Run of Bad Luck A.K.A. Jarod's Big Deal of the Day

You are such a reluctant smut writer and we have to push and push you and peer pressure you so much but you deliver and I know you can deliver some more.I love this. Seriously, you were born to write and you were born to write smut at least twice a year. Please?

Reviewer: Monica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/09/22 09:22 pm
Title: Hearts Breaking Even

Oh, I remember the semi happy ending... something else you don't always do is a happy ending.

Reviewer: Monica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/09/22 09:20 pm
Title: Twist of Fate

Love it, and it goes like lightning, so fast. I'm struck. You have to write more smut.

Reviewer: Monica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/09/22 09:18 pm
Title: Happenstance

The plot is original and fresh and it's all well written and ...all I care about is the smut today.Smut. Smut. Smut. Give me more.

Reviewer: Monica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/09/22 09:15 pm
Title: Happenstance

How about writing a sequel sometime? I really love this. There's some comedy gold mixed in with the serious stuff. It's freaking awesome.

Reviewer: Jeremy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/05/20 04:12 am
Title: Happenstance

This was lovely Mirage, it’s the first time I read it. I love it when you write MPJ fics even if you are not a shipper. It was a lovely night diversion. You are always the best.

thanks

Reviewer: missparker87 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/04/18 09:54 pm
Title: A Good Run of Bad Luck A.K.A. Jarod's Big Deal of the Day

loooove it

Reviewer: lipamo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/12/15 10:43 pm
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