This is one of the most intense and dark stories i've ever read and i totaly love it!!! Please update soon!
Author's Response: Dimana, thanks so much for the feedback. To be honest I was worried it was a little too dark and intese...so I'm glad your loving it! My muse seems to head down some dark paths lately :p. New Chapter should be up by weeks end...fingers crossed.
Date: 24/04/11 07:59 pm
Alex truly is a sociopath... and the worst kind there is!
But one really has to admire Parker's spirit. She really is a fighter.
Author's Response: Yep Jack you're right Alex is a true sociopath but that's why we love him right LOL.... Parker is a fighter the best kind the one who is always coming back to stand her ground! Thanks for the feedback nice to know people are enjoying the story again! Reviewer: Jack Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 23/04/11 05:57 pm
Love your story. Alex really creeps me out... But I like the characteristics of Parker - you really found the one thing that could make her fall. If Alex will make her believe, really believe that she is the reason that most important people in her life died - well... I'm truly afraid for her sanity.... And when Jarod will rescue her physically (I believe he will) - will he be able to rescue her as well emotionally????
Please don't keep us wondering for too long...
Author's Response: Sunshine I am so glad you are enjoying the story! Yes Alex creeps me out a little too but in a good way if that's possible.... He is definatly trying to hurt her both emotionally and pysically... I'll have another chapter up next friday! Reviewer: Sunshine Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 23/04/11 05:53 pm
Great story, you should have done the plot for series...
Author's Response: Aw Abby thank you so much that is the best complimenmt you could have given me. I am so glad you are liking the story. Thank you so much for the feedback!
[Report This]Date: 23/04/11 05:41 pm
Good chapter. The story is progressing nicely. Alex/Miss Parker and Jarod have yet to cross paths but it feels like they are getting closer. Alex is truly a sociopath! He 'died' way too easily in the show. I liked the flashback between Miss Parker and her friend as well. Looking forward to next week.
Author's Response: As always thanks so much for the feedback Twisted.I so look forward to your thoughts. It is true that our trio are getting closer ;). I agree that they got rid of him far to early on the show. I was so stressed about the whole friend thing glad you think it worked! thanks again for the wonderful words.
Date: 23/04/11 02:47 pm
Great story ! Please don't keep us too long for update... I'm really wondering what Alex will come up next to break Parker ...
Author's Response:
Thank you for the feedback Cuddles! I'm about to post the next chapter now....hope you enjoy it...that Alex he really is a bad guy ;P
Reviewer: Cuddles Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 22/04/11 12:31 pm
HELLO I AM FRENCH AND I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY PLEASE THE NEXT CHAPTER
Author's Response: I am so glad you are enjoying the story. thank you so much for the feedback it is always nice to know what the reading is thinking and feeling! French wow that is awesome! Next chapter will be up Friday :)
Date: 20/04/11 12:57 am
That Alex is soooo evil! It makes sense for him to use his knowledge of the Centre's secrets to torment Miss Parker, and there would be few things more painful to her than her mother's death. Not only is he physically injuring her, but the psychological damage (assuming MP survives, which I am!) is extensive too.
Wish Angelo's aim had been a little better! Keep up the good work, and I'm already looking forward to the next chapter... :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much Jane for you weekly words of encouragement! Alex is evil...I think he perhaps like the idea of hurting her emotionally more than he enjoys the physical pain he inflicts! Poor Angelo he is not a killer....at least not today anyway :) Reviewer: Jane Q. Doe Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 17/04/11 11:42 pm
Damn! I thought it couldn't get any better! Chapter Seven is the best yet. Too bad you weren't a writer on the show. Maybe the guys will hire you if they ever get their act together and write a conclusion.
Anyhow, I love reading your story. Something to look forward to on Friday nights/Saturday mornings. And as I said this chapter was the best. You've really fleshed out the charecter of Alex. The sadistic bastard! And Miss Parker as well. I love her strength and vulnerability. Please let her kick his ass at some point!
Jarod of course is his usual alteristic self but I imagine that at some point he's going to have a breaking point. And I loved the Angelo scenes. He was underused in the show, Keep up the good, no GREAT work! Can't wait for next Friday.
Author's Response: Twisted thank you so so much! Alex truely is a Sadistic bastard! But I am enjoying playing with him LOL. I agree that Angelo was underused in the show, I am so glad you are still enjoying the story and am so grateful for all the lovely words of encouragement. Reviewer: twisted Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 16/04/11 05:02 pm
This story keeps getting better and better. Is Alex gonna revel some of the secrets? that would be really cool. keep writing more please, can't wait tell the next installment!
Author's Response: Awe thank you so much for the kind words Megan. I am so glad you are enjoying it. I would tell you what Alex was going to do but then I'd have to let him Kill you LOL....guess you'll just have to keep reading :). Thank you again for the review it's really nice to know what the reader thinks of the story!
Date: 15/04/11 02:50 am
Sorry I'm late with my review - been traveling. Your routine updates are such a bright point in my weekends, it's like a little extra present for making it to the end of another week!
Loved this chapter - probably my favorite so far. It was intriguing to 'see' her for the first time, watching Parker view herself in the mirror, and reminding us of how much she's been through so far. I had a feeling the re-locating of the shoulder would happen, but it was still jarring to imagine Parker actually doing it. She's a gutsy broad, and still such a fighter. This line was awesome: "It must be horrible knowing what your love does, knowing that it’s like venom, poisoning everything it touches. Killing everything that matters in your world." That's definitely hitting MP where it hurts, and it's just twisted enough to really get under her skin.
And poor Angelo, having to deal with the crazy in Alex's mind. Can't wait to see what happens next! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so so much Jane for the lovely words of encouragement. I am so glad you are enjoying the read :) I wanted to thank you for your faithful reveiws it really means a lot to me that you always take the time to share how you feel about the chapters. So encouraging to write when you know someone is actually reading it! Thank you again...
PS> that was my favorite line in this chapter too -
Reviewer: Jane Q. Doe Anonymous [Report This]Date: 13/04/11 09:04 am
Another FANTASTIC chapter! Your story is progressing nicely. I can't wait for Miss Parkerr to kick Alex's ASS! I know it's coming. I like how you are portrayin both Jarod and MP. And I hope you are going to answer some of those questions Alex left us with before he 'fell' off the iron girder in Pretender 2000. Oh, and once again, thank you so much for regularly updating your story and not leaving your faithful readers hanging.
Author's Response: Awe Twisted thank you so much for all you wonderfully kind words...I do hope I am doing the characters justice! I just want to say also that I so appricate you dedication with reviews it's nice to know that people are enjoying the story....for an author it's nice to know people are reading and enoying something you put so much time into....so thank you again for you dedication to keep me inspired :)
Date: 11/04/11 12:58 am
I so look forward to your regular weekly updates. :)
Parker's such a resilient character; still tussling, even with all of her injuries and emotional trauma. And I'm glad you're having her shower, since being covered with all that blood is so disgusting! Can't wait to see what Alex does next!
Author's Response: Thank you so much Jane for the feedback it's so nice to know what the reader is thinking. I agree Miss P was so in need of a shower LOL.....Keep an eye out I think Alex may have a few more tricks up his sleeve ;) Reviewer: Jane Q. Doe Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/04/11 03:56 am
Wow! Another great chapter! And you are as regular as clockwork! Thank you for the weekly updates. Once again I must tell you how refreshing that is. I wish others would follow your lead! Alex is quite the bastard. I hope Miss Parker kicks his ass!!! Can't wait for the next chapter, :)
Author's Response: Thank you Twisted and thank you so much for the feedback. Alex is quite the character isn't he so demented! But Miss P is a tough cookie dont' count her out just yet ;)
Date: 03/04/11 02:59 am
it's been a while since i visited this site but i say your story is getting better by the minute. suspense is really brewing. good job!
more chapters to come!!!!
Author's Response: Emma thank you so much...I am so glad you are enjoying the story. Reviewer: emma Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/04/11 02:10 am
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you Aemilius I'll most definatly try to keep you entertained :)
[Report This]Date: 02/04/11 11:43 pm
Have to admire Parkers spirit. I really hope Alex will not be able to break her completely... altrough I have a feeling hee will make his best effort.... pls don't keep us to long for update...
Author's Response: Thank you for the feedback Phoenix :) I agree that MIss Parker has spunk and a tough spirit but Alex is a creepy little demented thing isn't he :). Update next friday..
Date: 02/04/11 11:39 am
uhuhuuuuu! My sarcastic,bitterly dry laugh still echoes through my room. Damn,taking Miss P's beloved Daddy's life in front of her eyes is art. Alex IS a sardistic ass...and quite a creative one at that. ;-) The idea is so simple and yet I've never read it anywhere before. Am really curious as to why Mr Parker was there and how ALex got him there...and where the hell that old man was all the time. Well,at least MissP now knows that he loved her. (hearing my bitter sarcastic laugh?)
Oh man,I sooo wanna be there when it's MissP's payback-time. I'm sure she'll redefine Picasso on Alex' face.
Well written,especially the Parker-Alex scenes! Reads like a thriller,which is good. Only the Jarod scenes were a bit too whiny for my taste...but then I'm easily annoyed with J's whining.;-)
Keep on the good work! Can't wait to find out more about Angelo's breakdown and whether Lyle will ever find out about this (and how he will react! wanna kill Alex, throw him a party?Hehehe)
Author's Response: LOL thank you IceAngel...I adore you bitterly dry sarcastic laugh.... I am so glad that everyone is taking the murder of Mr. Parker so well as well as how he died. I thrive to be original and well I suppose it doesn't hurt that I love a good thriller LOL. Jarod has been a bit whiney ( I want to slap himself at time LOL) but he's traveling down a road and I do have a destination in mind for him ;) Thank you so much for the great feedback I hope you continue to enjoy the ride! Reviewer: IceAngel Signed
[Report This]Date: 28/03/11 09:43 pm
Another fantastic chapter! And timely as well. I think you are even inspiring Mirage [although her? chapter was a little on the short side :)] I can't wait to read the next one. Well done you! Thanks for writing.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the lovely words and I would love to inspire others as they have inspired me :). I am glad you are still enjoying the ride. thank you again for the feedback!
Date: 27/03/11 10:29 pm
Wow... this is getting interesting... It is clear, that with Parker Alex can break Jarod, but I have absolutely no idea what else could Alex come up with, to try and break her... Please update soon...
Author's Response: Alex is a slippery littl devil so who knows what else you will do to poor Parker or how it will affect her. She is strong but everyone has a breaking point, even the ice queen ;). I am glad you are enjoying the journey. thanks so much for the feedback.
Date: 27/03/11 09:42 pm
Can't wait to read what happens next. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much I am glad you are enjoying the ride!
Date: 27/03/11 08:13 pm
Wonderful, can't wait to find out what happens next...
Alex is truly a worthy adversary, poor Jarod...
Author's Response: Thank you so much and I am so glad you are enjoying the journey! Alex is a worthy adversary but I'm hoping Jarod realized that nothing is impossible but I make no promises. Thanks for the feedback:) Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 27/03/11 02:59 am
Man, that Alex is such a sicko! Poor MP, very sad to watch her watch her father be killed in front of her.
I'm really enjoying the story, and check back constantly for updates! I appreciate that you're posting so regularly; there are so many fanfics in Pretender-land that have just languished away. Looking forward to the next chapter... :)
Author's Response: Jane I am so glad you are enjoying the story, I have to admitt I was a little worried about how people would take Alex killing Mr Parker in front of MP, but he really is a sicko who is all about control. Thank you so much for the feedback! Reviewer: Jane Q. Doe Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/03/11 11:16 pm
I'm really enjoying this story. Keep it up! It's intriguing, captivating and new. Great work.
Author's Response: Vania I am so pleased that you are enjoying it and I do hope you continue to do so ! Thank you so much for the feedback it helps to know people are enjoying the journey as much as I am. Thanks again!
Date: 26/03/11 12:40 pm
I can't get this story out of my mind. I'm waiting (impatiently) for chapter 4!!
Author's Response: Well I hope the fact that it's stuck in your head means you're liking it?. Sorry to make you wait :) Chapter 4 is up now, hope it helps quench the thrist for more. Thank you so much for the feedback :)
[Report This]Date: 25/03/11 06:30 pm
